Saturday, November 26, 2022

critique of book genesis with a SOLUTION

criticisms: if the topic of bible is children of israel, as indicated by most of the contents, then the book genesis started too early in time and people. so they claim the book was more than israel... and tracing until israel.
even if that were not a deceptive trick, still tracing should be and could be much shorter... especially in a religion that specified "teach short" somebody should filter the bible but... WAIT... is genesis a holy book?
jesus "never said that he quoted from book genesis" by name nor title, nor that it was holy nor true. no "foundation can be established except by jesus" who did not say book genesis was holy nor true. so others cant "decide" to include genesis.
in fact when he quoted things SIMILAR  to genesis the words DIFFER! from genesis. truly he was not quoting book genesis nor say he was quoting "book genesis by name" nor that it was holy nor true. the jews and catholics who included genesis were EXCLUDED from establishing anything as above only jesus establishes, not catholic priests nor jew rabbis. jesus did not say book genesis was holy nor true. the story of abraham is in book acts but we must not use genesis so i select for you without the harmful ideas in the "external" book genesis. 
***when luther excluded some of the catholic books he should have noticed that jesus never said genesis was a holy book.
a solution is to preserve the not bad parts of the same stories, after editing flaws and harmful messages, about israel in the "missing years". when? if we assume exodus 1312bc until solomon 950bc over 300 years to fill with censored and improved stories. this story selected from 3 chapters of book genesis to replace and save the story separately.
__legends of joshua son of nun
INTRO: the book joshua was based on a kernel of truth that joshua was a leader. his story was exaggerated but truly all the victories were by "wasp not by your sword" as recorded in book joshua. Admittedly the story is very boring but they could not imagine a motorcycle jumping and crashing through a glass window in the primitive era.
__the history: in bet horon, joshua son of nun was born during the rule of ramses one. later, under ramses two, joshua was a city manager. he married his wife, for whom he felt love. they had daughters one was named naami. everyone in bet horon spoke one language and a common speech. naami wed shafat from tribe efrayim. shafat led his family eastward to a plain in Shinar and settled there. 
shafat hired workers to build a home. he said to them make bricks and bake them. They used brick instead of stone. shafat named his sons shamua and hori . they were in his form and grew older. they said, “we will build ourselves a city" and they did. hori went to other towns and invited people to come buy those homes so they did. one saw the building was good so hired them to build a tall tower for his own fame. after a few years the water in the well dried. the people left the dry city scattering them from there in all directions. [does this seem long? see statistics it is shorter and purer]
This is the story of Hori’s family. two years after he wed his wife, he told a story with one hundred words. after that he fathered his first son named zakur. after that he added to the story 500 words totaling 600 words. he fathered other sons and daughters.
he told more stories: 135 words. after that he added 403 words. 
another story was 130 words. after that he added 403 words. 
another story was 134 words. after that he added 430 words. 
another story 130 words. after that he added 209 words. 
another story 132 words. after that he added 207 words. 
another story 130 words. after that he added 200 words. 
another story 129 words. after that he added 119 words. 
another story 170 words. after that he added 205 words. [note: now copy the twenty numbers each time he wrote, add each pair to try and find total. if need practice use the following chapter].
zakur son of hori fathered his first son and they named him Abram. his second son was named onan but onan died innocent. he had walked faithfully with God so God took him. they traveled back to bet horon. after that Abram wed his wife but she was not able to conceive so they were childless. Abram and his wife went from bet horon in efrayim to gezer and they settled there. abram had fruit by writing stories like hori.
he told a story 230 words. after that he added 700 words totaling 930 words and it was good.
he told more stories: 205 words. after that he added 707 words totaling 912 words.
a story 190 words. after that he added 715 words totaling 905 words.
a story 170 words. after that he added 740 words totaling 910 words.
a story 165 words. after that he added 730 words totaling 895 words.
a story 162 words. after that he added 800 words totaling 962 words.
a story 165 words. after that he added 200 words totaling 365 words.
a story 187 words. after that he added 782 words totaling 969 words.
a story 182 words. after that he added 595 words totaling 777 words. [note: now copy the nine totals and subtract the first part of each story. check if your solution matched].
he told another story 500 words. after that his brother fathered three sons. they named the first son Noah and prayed, “He will comfort us in the labor and effort of our hands working the ground.”
After that abram and his wife traveled. in the new town they had a son and they named him sisur. sisur told a story with seventy words. later he added more words until 205 words.
continued at
there.
statistics: this story 630 words seems long and is mostly uneventful yet still shorter and purer than chapters 11 and five. this preserved a similar story about "the nation of the bible topic" instead of "before the nation." it served to fix and replace 498+639=1137 words in book genesis that has burdensome repetition in chapters 5 and 11 while its purpose can be better fulfilled as i demonstrated. 

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