my summary of "hobbit" book 1937 by tolkien chapters 6>13

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c6 Bilbo reunited with team: Bilbo exited the mountain and feared that his team are still inside until he saw them. he still wore the ring so he snuck up on them and surprised them by appearing. He told the story of speaking with Gollum but the ring is his secret. the team fled from goblins, until meeting wolves! 
dwarvs climbed up trees that the wolves surrounded. wolves were waiting for the goblins to join in a joint attack. in the mountain goblins were mourning their leader and hunting the dwarves.
Gandalf lit a fire using wizardry. it scared the wolves, and attracted the Enormous Eagles. 
Goblins arrived late and burnt fires around the dwarves. The Eagles flew Gandalf and the team away. they slept. the team rode eagles [7] over Mountains, until the eagles spirald down. b' felt relief when he landed. eagles flew away. Gandalf led them to his friend's wooden house and amused a giant bear.
the dwarves entered n sang hopefully. bearman added supplies. Gandalf warnd not to leave the path then left. team marched [8] in a line along a path between trees in the dense forest. so dense that the treetops  made a dark tunnel without any sunlight. many animals moved on both sides of them. they violated g' instructions and left the narrow path. 
when they crossed a small brook, Bombur fell into the water that was poisoned. they pulled him out but he was stunned for a long time. they saw a light maybe a fire with someone preparing food? only an illusion that repeated until they got lost. Bilbo got separated and was alone.
despite sleep hobbit hearing heard a giant spider nearing! Bilbo used his sword to kill it before slipping and falling. later, he found his friends wrapped in spider web that hung from branches. many spiders guarded their trapped meal of dwarves. Bilbo used the ring to disappear so he could surprise and stab the huge spiders. 
he freed some dwarves. Gandalf returned and freed more but Thorin the heir to the kingdom was missing. they met the king of the wood elves. ELVES [pattern leaf leaves elf elves] imprisond [9] dwarves. bil wore his ring so while invisible he took the keys from drunken guards n freed dwarvs from jail. 
he led them to the "underground river". the dwarves enter empty wood barrels. b' hung on a barrel in the cold water. the barrels floated along the river. elves tied the barrels together n they floated. in the river, the dwarf team floated toward Laketown. Bilbo saw wood-elves and lake-men from whom he hid under water [10]. 
river pushed barrel-riders to the town. (x not he can secretly bring them out.)  when the people leave he told dwrves they can exit. They heard the "prophecy that foretells" the reclamation of Smaug's stolen treasure. The town Master gave aid including rowers and boats. 
dwarves and Bilbo sat in row boats. = c10 Bilbo's team floated along a river in barrels. gandalf was coming. b' came to a town of Men. Bilbo helpd the dwarves get out of the barrels. Thorin announced that he was the King under the Mountain. "i returned. take me to your Master."
he feast ed with elves, who recognized their former prisoners. The Master welcomd them. they rest n leave, with supplies. men rowd Bilbo and team until near [11] the Lonely Mountain. b-team rode ponies in the area called the "Desolation of Smaug". They saw a town was ruins. Balin told the stories of a narrow escape from the dragon. 
They campd by the mountain n found its secret door n tryd many times to open it but can't. Bilbo reminded them about the elf clue. sunset showed  the hidden keyhole. Thorin opend the door with the key from Gandalf. Bilbo slid on his ring [12] and enterd, as orderd, *thrue [pattern due!] the door n down along the cave. 
the dragon is so near he heard its snoring! bravely, he defeated his fear. He came to this dragon, asleep on a gigantic pile treasures: gold in many shapes and vessels, gems, fancy weapons. Bilbo stole a cup before rejoining the dwarves. Smaug awoke n angrily flew out to the mountaintop! Bilbo n team ran in the cave. 
Smaug the dragon hunted for the intruder around the mountain. The dwarves sent b' to Smaug to try to find a weakness. B' wore his ring, but Smaug can stil smell him n questind b'. They talkd while Bilbo looked for Smaug's weakness: visible near his heart! Bilbo rejoind team. 
they reenter the cave and told treasure tales. s' neard so they shut the secret door. s'  angrily bangd the mountain side, before flying to Lake-town.
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critique film law abiding citizen 2009

the orthodox rabbi m. feinstien wrote that he supported the feath penalty in u.s. which violated jew tradition that stealing deserved DEATH but u.s. death  penalty differed.

this film shows the RISK. if a pair entered a home to steal and ONE killed. the one who did not kill could make a bargain to testify against the murderer OR as in the case of the film lawyer negro could get the murderer to blame his innocent accomplice.  the negro lawyer is an accessory to killing the non murderer. he coulda made that bargain to blame the true murderer but he was a negro lawyer.

this possibility shows the flaw in the u.s. system not just the victims complained but the system itself that ignored testimony yet needs it?? annd can possibly have the murderer blame his accomplice so  feinstien is wrong in the u.s. system. not kuz the film occurred but kuz it showed the possibility.

we can easily comprehend why the writers let the boss and assistants of the negro lawyer die, while spared the negro lawyer, to show only black lives matter. 

if i would write these opinions on a wikipedia talk page anout ghe folm comtent... how would i be treated? free speech? only some have protected speech the rest get deleted and banned... despite accuracy.

fix bad summary man steel 2013

On the planet Krypton, on superman's birthday, 29 february, a son was born.
Later, at the Kryptonian Council, General Zod shot a council-person. while zod was leading Jor-El away, a droid made a distraction so j' struggled with zod until escaping.
J' flew on his pet and then swam and took the Codex. He used technology to bond it to his son's cells. 
The parents launch the space-vehicle containing their son, and the Command Key. Jor-El dueld Zod until Zod killed him. the fleet surrrounded and arrested Zod and his followers. The Council sentenced them to prison. A "spacecraft" flew the prisoners up, [in contrast to the version Superman (1978)]. Krypton exploded... freeing the prisoners. 
in smallville, the vehicle landed in the Kent farm.
many years later, kent worked on a boat and saw an Oil Rig burning. he swam and rescued people. the Coast Guard helicopter came. a section started falling toward the heli, so kent held it up long enough for it to fly away. an explosion threw kent in the water. [bad order flashback:] in school Clark [age 9] felt overwhelmed by his Super Hearing and X-Ray Vision. he had locked himself in a closet and used Heat Vision to heat the door knob. his adoptive ma, Martha talked him through his difficulty. 
kent climbd ashore, and stole clothing for appearing normal.
he saw a school bus that reminded him of the bus flooding. The school bus had crashed over a bridge. Clark [age 13] pulld it from the water saving the kids and even the one who was talking mean.
adoptive pa, Jonathan showd Clark the pod from the sky.
kent was waitering in a bar. he heard about an object under the ice. a guy splashed beer in kent's face and threw a can at him. kent secretly destroyed the criminal's truck. he started working at the ice place.

Lois Lane flew to the mysterious frozen object.
Clark entered the probe and inserted the Command Key. Lois followd him until a defense drone attacked her. Clark broke it and used his eyes as a heat ray to burn her injury shut. 
kent flew it away. Lois exited.
kent saw his natural father, Jor-El and heard the history of Krypton. kent took the costume from the vehicle, which he started wearing. he tried flying faster. (meanwhile, unbeknownst to superman and the audience, as we will learn later, General Zod and his aides searched for Kryptonians. they find a "Terraforming Generator". they follow the signal from the probe to earth as we will learn later after they arrive.)
Lois told her story to her editor, in this version "Perry White" is not that color. insted of a black white, why not a negro lois so that female negroes are not excluded?
Lois gave her story to internet blogger who published it.

segregating white if male

segregating white if male

now is the TIME the white man gets a TURN to be segregated according to bad culture in u.s. and u.k.
i just read a picture book by cowell and dynamo.... and i OUGHT not distinguish between the skin colors in the pictures... until a few pages in.

SIX pages in i noticed the father was ignored. he did... nothing. no mention. 

when he finally did something 4 pages from the end, he used the thermometer to measure the liquid metal... he ruined it... stupid white guy. at least you paid "our people" back by fathered three negro kids to pay PART of the white debt... to "our people" who were born long after the evil blanc abolished slavery.

 IGNORING papa white was not enuf to punish and separate for his enslaving negroes before he was born or did anything. the content of cowell book GAVE an item to everybody except papa white. no diamond nor even old soiled dirty coin for papa white. who said papa was white? maybe papa was a trans...

 female negro...

 who said "she considers herself papa" the pictures by dynamo show papa white.
this accurately demonstrated current society talk... we refused to vote for a white man "toxic" as president in u.s. and worse than wyt women, if the cracker is male. INSTED of a white male, the dnc democratic voters, voted in primary for biden... over the lady candidates. the chinese network devices did the rest. was biden african? his white skin does not count kuz... 

we should not distinguish skin color.

hallows book summary

hallows book summary fixing the bad summary at hp lexicon, harry potter hallows

one; Snape went to "Voldemort". they talked. Voldemort took Lucius Malfoy’s wand and killd a lady who was a teacher at hogwarts who v' accused she encouraged marrying muggles.
two; Harry packd a back-bag with the useful invisibility cloak and wand. also his precious picture album. next he re-read and saved "Dumbledore’s obituary."
three; "Dursleys drove away."
four; Mad-Eye, Hermione, Ron and some Order members came. Six used Polyjuice Potion to "seem like Harry Potters" escorted by seven protectors. BEFORE splitting up, all of them got surrounded. they battle and hagrid flew the real harry away getting chased. each pair flew to a different safe-house. a death eater heard harry's voice. voldemort tried but mysterious failed to kill harry who saved hagrid and they crashed into the Tonks’ back garden.
five; the survivors portkeyd to the Burrow. the order found that "mad-Eye was killed" pa Weasley got severely hurt. Mundungus fled. Harry then saw a vision of Voldemort torturing Ollivander, asking why Lucius Malfoy’s wand did not kill Harry Potter.
six; Ron and Hermione tell harry that they protected their families from dark wizard. Hermione told she read books in Dumbledore’s office about destroying Horcruxes. Fleur’s parents arrive for her wedding to weasley.
seven; Harry’s seventeenth birthday party. Scrimgeour obeyd "Dumbledore's will-document" showing his will, to give items to harry and his helpers.
et 8; Harry, disguised using Polyjuice Potion, attends "Bill’s wedding to Fleur." they saw that Xenophilius was wearing a special symbol. The wedding party is interrupted by a warning via Patronus that v' took control of the Ministry of magic. Scrimgeour was assassinated. also that Death Eaters are coming.
nine; Harry, Hermione n Ron flee from the Death Eaters by Apparating away. Hermione made a charm to extend her handbag. they sat by a table. suddenly two death eaters raised wands. they zap flashes of curses at each other. first harry wearing his invisibility cloak zapd one. ron pushed hermione to safety. the second zapped at ron shattering the tiles near his head... while hermione zapd the second. they erase the memory of the pair and the waitress. last harry announced the "Place to Hide."
ten; HarryHarry learnd that Sirius’ brother, Regulus was the mysterious R.A.B. mentioned in the locket. "Kreacher told about the locket": he took the locket from regulus. Fletcher took it from him. kreacher went to find f'.
eleven; Kreacher brout f' who reveald that he gave the locket to Umbridge [not took the locket but he gave it] as a "bribe" to hide a crime.
twelv; Magic Is Might; Harry, Hermione, n Ron ambushd three Ministry workers. they put the victims hair in polyjuice potion to appear like them for the plan to destroy voldemort's horcrux. the ministry is accusing Muggle-born witches that their wands must be stolen because wands choose the witch... only if they are a witch... not a muggle born... which the fact of wands and voldemort himself refute... voldemort had a muggle father and "equally deserved" such "punishing and debasing muggle born" like hitler non blond told the blond you are master race to suppress non blond including hitler himself.
thirteen; Hermione sat with Umbridge to accuse muggle born witches and wizards. Harry distracted "Umbridge’s office" crew and searched it. Harry took the misused stolen eye of moody, harry stund u' so herm' took the horcrux for destruction. with patroni to ward off the dementors, they lead an escape of the muggle born prisoners. harry relied on his disguise to distract the workers so the prisoners escape by floo fireplace while harry crew Apparated to a forest.
fourteen; hermione healed Ron's arm.
fifteen; they tried but faild to destroy the locket Horcrux. they heard "goblins". Ron left.

sixteen;  h&h in disguise visit by Apparate the graves of Harry’s parents

17; bagshot lured harry up to a room. she pointed at something. when he looked her corpse slid down from the snake Nagini who bit his arm. then snake started squeezing him until h zapd it. h&h jump out the window and disapparate away without harry's wand.

18; h&h read about gellert Grindelwald.

19; harry saw a doe patronus and followed its silver body...

 to be continued.

frodo ring book my summary

FRODO Ring, BOOK 1/6, the main mission will be destroying the ring. Bilbo Baggins celebrated his 111th birthday, on the same day as Frodo's 33rd birthday, sep. 22. many years later, Frodo learnt about the ring's dark powers. Frodo Baggins (x not flees) started a journey to destroy the ring, made by Dark Lord Sauron. Sauron sent riders to seek the Ring that has power to control the wearers of the nineteen Lower Rings: Dwarves. Elves, and Men.

__chapter summary:

one, PARTY b1, c1 many guests celebrated Bilbo and Frodo's birthday "party," on september 22. they sang and danced; ate and drank; and saw varied FIREWORKS. Bilbo left home.
two 1,2 Gandalf told Frodo the ring's DARK power and its history. G' sent F' for destroying the evil ring.
three; "Frodo went with Sam and Pippin". They met ELVS.
four; The trio went a "short cut." Merry joind them.
five; the team started journeying in the forest insted road.

SIX, 1.6 hobbits went to the River. trees gripd Merry and Pippin until Bombadil freed 'em by singing.

7 "In b's Home" Tom wore the Ring and unexpectedly he is not invisible, same as sauron. only hobbits such as smegol=gollum get affected that way. B' can see Frodo despite invisible while wearing the ring.
8 the hobbits got imprisoned. b' used ring n rescued them n gave daggers.
9; Hobbits came to an inn n sang. f' slid the ring on his finger so disappeard. this causd a fuss.
X Aragorn, a human, met them to guide them.
1.11 they crossd marshes. riders raided frodo's home but he was not there.

hero? marksman 2021

a wonderful happy ending... the boy got a chance... with his also undocumented relatives, ahead of those who wait in line doing the proper process.

they bothered to include the hotel death, the good intentions led to a hotel guy death. so the moral of the story "good intentions pave the way to hell". helping the kid orphan againstt the law seems like a hero but is truly a crime that can lead to unexpected harm.

hobbit from human and dwarf

intro: we "tall folk" call hobbits halflings as described in book hobbit, TOO late, what is a hobbit? HALF our tallness, so we humans called them halflings kuz they are "half" human height.

also wrote "nearer to us" but creation was mystery in that world. in silmirilian he added that dwarves were created but bilbo unmysteried used magic: a human wed a dwarf. their child halfling in type wed a human not siblings. this birthed first hobbit 3/4 human, so "nearer" human than dwarf. 

the link could be called halfling and nearer us than dwarf... but that is not the first hobbit but grandchildren who married cousins as bilbo discovered by magic 17 years before he went on the dwarf adventure. bilbo wrote, (intro the book hobbit does not introduce the character which any good book must do at its start.

it only vaguely describes a hobbit a few pages later...  and in the following book revealed that he was age 51 instead of in the description and worse hid "the mystery" of the hobbit. i reveal that mystery. ----fan fiction:)

bilbo wrote:

+++"the mystery":

on a windy day, Bilbo baggins sat on his porch. he was age 34 years old. he felt annoyed by the wind and felt troubled by the mystery how hobbits originated. he knew the order: first immortal elves awoke to their "first" dawn. later, a semigod made dwarves and after that men and hobbits started writing history but how?

he escaped the wind by walking toward his big round green door... radagast the brown appeared by magic, blocking his path. radagast said "i have an urgent mission for you". bilbo wanted his calm life in his small cave home along the side of a hill. he said "no way i have not even reached the coming of age". 

radagast said, "you think you can deceive me but you dont know i am a wizard." bilbo now understood how the guy appeared. still he argued "i dont even know your name". he replied "call me dugg, short for rad-ug-ast." 

"if you are a wizard then you could prove it. dugg asked "what can i do that would convince you?" bilbo said "nothing can convince me." dugg said that he knew he was lying and already convinced by the appearence by his door. bilbo argued that regardless i dont want any mission.

dugg claimed the mission would lead him in due haste to much delicious food and was not even dangerous. bilbo argued that he did not know his roots and ancestry. dugg understood that he referred to the origins and claimed he could use magic to help reveal the truth behind the mystery.... if on a condition:

"you help with the things important to me then i will help the things important to you. that sounded good so bilbo invited the wizard in for his second breakfast. dugg sat and waited as bilbo the host served fresh baked bread and cheese chunks. they drank fruit juice. dugg explained that many animals that he loved very much were injured. 

he found them moaning and dragging themselves with broken bones! he needed help caring for them and defeating whatever harmed them. bilbo argued "aha so you are NOT a wizard or else you could heal them all easily". dugg explained that he found a few at a time but had too many and also needed time to find n stop the cause.

bilbo strained brain for an excuse to stay home... and suggested "use magic to conjure all the wounded animals nearby to your hospital, that would save time following the moans." dugg agreed that was part of the plan. he would teach magic to bilbo, can i call you bil? bil nodded

"you will gather them and locate the broken limb fix the injury and repeat while i find the source and the cause. bil agreed to study magic and repeated he wanted to know his "mysterious origin of hobbits". then i wont need this said dugg as he spilld a potion on the wood floor in the hole in the hill.

the reason you prefer living in a hill is because your origin is human who dwelled in caves. uh oh! the potion was reacting to the wood planks on the floor over the dirt. a loud hissing louder than a big group of snakes was rising from the wood with a spiraling smoke until the potion ate the wood and soaked into the mud. 

"my floor shouted bil, forgetting the potion. i will fix it. dugg waved his wand at the damaged wood. the wood began to change color and grow.the plank was changing to a bright white like snow.it grew over the hole and attached with the plank beside it spreading even under their feet as the wood fossilized to white stone. 

above the new layer of stone he conjured tiles and rugs which flew in by the closed window... it was a windy day as you remembered, floated through the glass like it was water. while the rugs floated, tile piles lined in rows on the floor. in each room from the center row by row until the walls. 

dugg widened the floor area so  a full tile would fit on each of both sides stretching the supports for the roof. this repeated in each of the three rooms with windows on the side of the hill and the kitchen and dining rooom and bed room that lacked windows on the inner side of the corridor. 

finally rugs landed in the bedroom. dugg said if you help me i will enlarge your hole and arrange the rugs as you like but we must help the poor animals. bil was too astonished to say anything but nodded. dugg put his wand in the narrow pocket inside his beryl cloak. his pointy hat did not match due to its cobalt blue color. 

suddenly he grabbed bilbos hand said a hex and they were outside! by the round green door. bil gasped. next dugg said a different powerful charm and the windy day intensified! it lifted bil and dugg a few feet up and blew them southwest between trees that gracefully swung their low branches aside for their passage.

dugg commented "brooms are for broads".  soon they arrived at the small simple hut that radagast had built without magic. dugg explained that he wanted to invite bilbo as soon as he realized how vast the problems were but he needed to wait until the elves sent him a more powerful wand. 

note: this world does not have the same wand rules as potter world so i wont steal her marvelously great ideas.

what is a wand? asked bil. dugg explained a part of a magical creature for example the hair of an ELF kuz they have an endless supply.... is encased in a branch that was hollowed. the variety of elf descendants defined which type of tree they would use. this was from a branch from an oak that was split.

he hollowed and reattached around the long brown elf hair. dugg gave bil the more powerful wand and explained that he already prepared the books with the hexes and charms. bil walked timidly to the table in the center of the hut under the roof window. beside it was a miniature bed its length the size of a chair so bil sat on the bed. 

he lifted the smoot oak branch. he felt the energy of the magical creature the elf hair encompass his arm. he started to feel love toward this wand... until dugg awoke him and said that the books are already open to the relevant pages with heavy polished rock as paper weights to keep the page from closing or turning. 

bil read the hexes and the meaning and the instructions until he saw the summon spell. as he started to speak the spell which was a rhyme, "gusts of wind..." dugg yelled STOP you are still indoors and did not learn enuf nor practice. oops. bil memorized one spell from each book then walked outside. 

dugg watched from the window by the "piece of hut" that he had brought from his childhood home.
bil raised the elven wand and slowly and dramatically chanted, "gusts of wind, broken bones, bring them in, by this home." dugg moaned "you said it wrong, you will need to practice without a wand..." but dugg was interrupted!

 
a whizzing from all sides! the powerful wand had sucked all the broken bones with their host rabbits and other small animals, creatures that the valar created in that world, they landed in row after row by the wand. bil tried to recall the other rhyme and spoke a spell. "broken bones, straighten straight! you regrow, when i wait."

dugg bit his tong not to protest, and hoped it would suffice. the sound of crackling snapping bones that he expected never came, instead the bones GREW to the correct shape. the happy hoppers were free to roam again and scattered between  the trees. dugg was satisfied and went to search for the orcs who were harming his  beloved neighbor creatures. 

bil imagined a great battle as many orcs swung dangerous weapons at the wizard but felt certain magic would win. bil simply repeated the spell pulling various types of creatures and growing the broken bones together until finally the largest deer came on the wings of wind. about twenty pairs of spells repeated. 

the last charm failed and a yellow golden flash popd from the wand instead of bringing injured creatures. so he knew all were healed. dugg returned and explained that a few big orcs and trolls were having a game how many creatures they could step on. so he flew around and turned each one to a stone statue. 

bil challenged his claim, trolls cant be out in the sun so dugg explained under the trees they are safe from the sun in the dense part of the forest. all the harmful trolls and orcs were now harmless stone statues. then dugg prepared him to use magic to know his past the intermarriage of a human with a dwarf.

bilbo was satisfied with his words but dugg encouraged him to see the whole mysterious story and record it. bil studied the method bla bla and finally held the new magic mirror to watch the story of the mysterious past. three of the valar semi gods, were arguing. one wore a robe colored chestnut red.

a second robe was coral red and the third crimson. bil knew their names were tok bok and prok,  respectively. bok said i want to generate dwarves. they will be magical creatures. tok said "dont make them immortal just in case they will be greedy". bok and prok nodded.

prok added we should add non magical humans too. the other 2 protested humans made enough trouble on upper earth we dont want THEM in middle earth. prok shrugged outvoted. the three assembled their powers and joined them to produce four hairy dwarves. each about one yard tall. 

all four had beards but two had a pair of bumps on their hairy chests for feeding infants. the trio explained that their name as a group was (the one in the handbook about dwarves) prok told them go make babies. how?  he explained exactly what the dwarves should do and they tried it and liked it. 

we should do this more often said one dwarf. a male replied "thats what she said". the dwarves started to make weapons for the elves to buy. they were so pretty that the elves bought them despite no enemy yet. the dwarves also used magic to generate the first pair of humans in middle earth, because they needed more people to buy weapons.

they started making toys for their own kids and sold them to the families of elf and human. eventually one of the rare humans felt attracted to one of the female dwarves or so he said after ladies rejected him due to his 5 foot 3 height. they wed and their children were the first hobbits? wrong!

equally half not nearer us than dwarves. the kids seemed like dwarves. the grandchildren were different because the beard of the ma went to the feet of her daughter while the human smooth face went to her face displacing the hair to the feet. the thinner skeleton of pa caused the hobbits to be smaller, while the dwarf height limited height. 

the human tallness was lost even relative to dwarves. later this girl with hairy feet behind its toes above and below wed her cousins. her birth from a non hobbit halfling who had wed a human male so hobbits are "closer even than dwarves" not just due to dwarf ability for magic, but also 3/4 geneticaly closer.

still the human traits were overruled by the dwarf nature. bilbo saaw this he wrote it in a letter to the librarian in hobbiton. the librarian prefferd the "myatery should remain  a mystery" until i read the letter and compared the handwriting to the book named there and back again so i knew it was by bil. 

that uncovered the  mystery. bil stopped smoking for around ten years until peeer pressure swayed him to smoke a pipe socially. years passed and when he was 51 years old a wizard invited him on an adventure. when bil refused many dwarves came and the story continued in the book hobbit."

m y summary of "time machine", wells

my summary of "time machine", wells

> 1 a group was talking about travel. they sat comfortably in a home in Britain. they discussed how we can move straight in 3 dimensions: forward or side which mean length line or width line, and down. to go straight up we can jump but not far. a MACHINE aids us to go up in the third dimension, a hot air balloon, they suggested. similarly as time proceeds, we move together in the line of time dimension, at the same rate into the future but a MACHINE can aid a traveler to go faster to the future and similarly to the position on the line that is past, double meaning. (2) the host [named travess but not yet a time traveler, as wells wrongly called him] showed them a functional model of the device. they watched this "machine" vanish moving into the future at a faster velocity. the crowd doubted [this served the purpose for readers to relate their own doubts to the characters]. travess showed them the almost completed full scale device with a saddle he will ride on.
> 3=2 a group gathered again. the new guests heard from the others the unbelievable vanishing of the model. the narrator, who had been in the audience also said, "i DOUBT," and others said that probably he tricked us. they ate lamb meat until travess appeared. he is "footsore" meaning he limped showing his feet were sore. the "time traveler" explained thay he "returned" from a shocking travel. he washed and changed clothing. he ate some mutton [lamb meat] and invited his guests to hear his adventure.
> 4 the "time traveler" told his story of moving to the future "time travelling" watching the flash of day and night. he stopd at a certain year and got hit by hail. he saw people wearing colored thick soft robes in luxury. he had fear that the future is not the "continuing development of technology" but is relieved to meet the calm graceful people.
> 5 they ate fruit and seemed to have calm and safety in a "golden" era, lacking worries. (6) travess realized they had stopped developing and struggling mentally, due to habit sufficing for robes and fruit. this indicated "sunset of mankind". (7) that night he noticed his machine was missing. he felt "shock" and panicd and ran to look closely. he cried in sadness and horror at the loss of his machine which more importantly to him was the loss of ability to return to his "real" life and reporting his discovery. (8) he failed to communicate with the people but realized that the support of a statue was hollow so his machine must be inside, this "explained" its disappearance.
> 9=9 he went down a deep "well" and met the "ape-like" white underground industry workers. they dragged their hands ape-like as they walked bent forward. they were named "morlocks". [both halves relate to water "moor" is a boat moored by a dock and loch is english for lake. i dont like the name he chose].
> 10 at "night" when the light of the moon was small the pales came and took some surface people as food.
> 11 he went to a "palace of green porcelain" which was a museum in contrast to the other buildings and palaces "shared" by families communally or as the author called it "communistly" but economic communism not single party political lack of options.
> 12 the most exciting chapter! after leaving the museum he had a plan and supplies. when "darkness came" he was prepared and lit a fire. he went with a little lady toward the statue of the white marble sphinx that had wings spread wide, like his hope to fly home. in the forest of trees pales attacked! he lit a match and a fire. he stayed by the fire... and fell asleep. when he awoke pales had abducted his little lady companion. they pulld him down... such fear he would be their meat... but he felt his iron bar on the floor, which he had taken from the museum. he hit them away for a few minutes... feeling doomed but anyone who tried to get him would pay the painful price. the fire he had lit before spread burning the forest... the light blinded the subterraneans... they fled. the MOST surprising is some blindly ran into the flames. he was saved and safe.
> 13 he saw his machine under the statue. he understood "the trap" which he "expected" but he knew his escape was guaranteed! the panels "clanged shut" pales jumped on him as he attached the control levers back to the device sockets. he sped ahead. sawe the earth stop spinning and the sun swell. he saw the future animal life.
> 14 the "time traveller returned" watching the pattern of sunset repetition reverse. he invited the narrator, into his lab. he vanished and despite waiting they never saw each other again. where had he gone? to the future or the past? why do YOU think that he had not returned? the end.

my summary of pan peter

my summary of pan peter
intro: barrie was an extremely unskilled writer trying to publish the great ideas of the imaginative kids he conversed with. he delayed his AMAZING tale of flying kids by FORTY TWO Pages OF COMMMON STUFF IN HORRIDLY BAD ORDER until they finally flew.
luckily skilled people realized the problems and smoothed out the non-kid book for simpler reading i recomended arneson's skillful adaptation.
still delaying the flying kids by 42 pages is absurd!
sure a quality author knows to start with a common world and gradually lead readers to the unexpected but how slowly is reasonable?
so i will replace the first 42 pages of "peter and wendy' the book which developed from and was influenced by the play that preceded the book.
chapter 1=c1
Wendy lived in a house at address fourteen (14). she lived with her two parents and two brothers. [nuf! get to the good stuff already not the arguments should we have kids or not?]
on a clear night ma helped her kids to bed. she dozed and dreamt that the window blew open! a young boy who had ALL his children teeth, not even losing one! stood in the room. when he saw the adult he flew out the window. their dog JUMPED and tried to shut the window... it closed on peter pan's shadow which got stuck in the window.
me screamed as she realized the boy jumping out the window would certainly die.
she ran to the window and looked down but the street was empty. she looked up into the starry clear sky. syrely she was only dreaming! she left. wendy heard ma's scream and awoke she put the shadow in a drawer.
c2 peter returned for his shadow. wendy gave it back but it would not stick to his feet so tears filled his eyes. wendy knew how to sew-so she sewed the shadow to his shoes.
c3 peter was happy and flew around the room. he said "i can fly because i was a bird that hatched from an egg [chapter 12]. peter claimed all children were birds so you can try too! wendy doubted and told her brothers to practice OVER the soft bed. li'l mike jumped and flew but just for a moment falling on the bed.
wendy explained that he stopd being a bird. michael wanted to fly so the fairy tinkerbell sprinkled fairy dust on him and he flew. peter pan grabbed tink and shook her fairy dust on wendy and john too. they flew out the window and around tall buildings. they flew over the sea all night and continued flying in the morning until peter said he saw the isle of never land. the kids felt hungry so peter grabbed bread from the birds. they continued flying until dark and came over the isle called neverland.
pirates SHOT a dangerous bomb at the kids. as they heard it whistling toward them they scattered and flew aside. johns hat was blasted aside by the exploding cannonball so wendy grabbed the hat. tinkerbell led wendy "home'.
the brothers flew toward the island. peter was pushed up high and waited before he flew down.
meanwhile, tink led wendy to the lost boys she lied that peter said 'shoot wendy bird'. the kids wanted to obey peter and did not distinguish that peter had not told them! one shot an arrow at wendy and wendy was hurt... she fell down with an arrow stuck in her chest gasp.... MUST NOT end a chapter like that. wendy was still breathing. one of the six brats was proud that he had shot wendy. peter came down adn saw wendy was hit. he saw that a necklace had saved her from the arrow.
they went underground to hide from (parents x oops that was my mind) pirates.. there wendy made the "hole" a "home". she swept and told stories to the brats for example the story "cinderella".
the brats went to the lagoon. they heard singing from the mermaids.
they swam and floated. peter warned them pirates were coming. they swam under the water and hid.
the cruel pirates had captured the redskin princess. they tied her in rope and planned to leave her on the rock where she would drown to death when the water of the tide will rise. peter will rescue her but how will peter rescue her?
find out in arneson's adaptation, in chapter lagoon...
i replaced the first 42 pages and much of the book. either read adaptation or i will summarize the rest.
to be continued.