Jake and Jil, poetry

Jake and Jil [note homograph and homophone]

version A: Jake and Jil [note homograph and homophone]

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we play very rough

we made ourselves tough

also like a doe

sometimes like soft dough

we play the school staff

mimic them, we laugh.

both harsh and quite soft

playing in a loft

jake's robot can cough

i prefer it off

it can also woof

then i broke it poof.

smoke rose in a puff.

(Mom:) 

"stop all that noise! 'nuf!"="do some quiet stuff"

(Jake: ) 

"stop breaking my stuff

I have had enough."

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version b: we play very rough

we made ourselves tough

also like a doe

sometimes like soft dough

both harsh and quite soft

playing in a loft.

jake's robot can cough

i prefer it off

it can also woof

then i broke it poof

(Jake: ) "stop breaking my stuff

I had had enough"

smoke rose in a puff

(Jil:) "play with quiet stuff"

we play the school staff

mimic them, we laugh. Endnote: in Dr. no he had "had had the effect" p. 138

jake had had enuf, even before i broke his robot.

that book rhymed face case, i mimic:

she gave me a green case

with a smile on her face.

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2, he thought it thawed

+ i will bake frozen...

chicken, garry thawt

poked it, he was wrong

it had not-yet thawd.