summary of Chapter five, needs fixing because bad: "family background" that is only in six! but five differd. the argument was not the main part instead the information harry learned about you know who and the actions of the order are important so i fix this summary of 5:
continuity:
Chapter 4, Grimmauld; Harry reunited with Hermione, ron, and Sirius Black. he argued with ron, but felt happy to see his parents' friend sirius. FIVE ch5, order; sirius told Harry that the racist "woman in the portrait" is his own mother and that this headquarters is his own home. Sirius explained it was empty many years [while s' in azkaban]. nobody stopped various magical beings [Boggarts and more] infested it. Dinner was cheerful. harry met those in the "Order" for fighting wicked wizards. They spoke about magical species goblins and gargoyles etc. tonks changed her faces for fun.
when Sirius mentioned the return of Voldemort, remembering his cruelty, everybody became silent and sad. "people argued." Harry heard ron's ma call him "her own son" [which would be sweet except only to hide the answers he seeks, unjustly overextending her ma authority to decide for harry]. her authority forbade ginny who got expelled from the scary meeting. herm' and ron can stay because harry will "tell them" even if they would be expelled. Sirius told Harry, Voldemort is secretly recruiting new Death Eaters. he is not openly committing murder but acting cautious. Voldemort benefits from Fudge and the "mainstream Wizard media" denying his return. people are not aware of his danger. the Order was trying to add allies or at least sway them from joining vol-you-know-who's army. the goal is preventing vol' gathering another army. they will fail as we saw in 2011. finally, ron's ma sent them to bed.
+FAN FICTION: harry told sirius about the time he hid from his angry uncle. his uncle was mad about something minor, so harry hid outside under the window so if they looked out they would not see him. suddenly he heard a loud CRACK. this made me jump up so i banged my head on the open shutter. i did not have my wand. it was in my room. my uncle had ran to the window and grabbed my ARM..he accused me, "i heard that crack i warned you not to do you-know-what!" i denied so he started HITTING my hand. he ordered "stop lying to me." i tried to peal his fingers away. i felt desperate and pain from the hits... stupify! the wand heard and zapd my uncle even when i was not holding the wand. i did it for self defense. then i got my wand, in case uncle would attack again. that was when the [ONE] dementor came and attacked me so i chased it away with my patronum stag animal [on third try after thinking of friends not like video] i went to see my aunt. later we found uncle vernon dead it must have returned. harry concluded, "sometimes i feel guilty that i felt happy that the dementor killed the man who hit me." sirius replied "i cannot judge you, you were suffering pain." [can you tell? i dont like the harry in chapter one of this book. but her other stories were good. so i must add fan fiction to offer an alternative to the chapter one harry.]
also FAN FICTION for chapter 4:
fan fiction for 4: a door appeared between the neighbor doors [10 and 14, not 11 and 13 oops!] harry told ron he regretted punishing v' for murdering his parents. ron said must stop v' so dum' was correct to imprison. black said "i was in prison and some dangerous ones must be killed before they escape. some distract the dementors while sirius as a dog RE-ENTERED azkaban and one by one executed the dangerous prisoners in the high security section while they are vulnerable not for honor but to prevent them murdering if they escape. just in time when the prison exploded the FOLLOWING day the high security has only corpses. nobody escaped except two witches from the regular prison who were less dangerous but had used avada kadabra.
after the escape the ministry admits it was wrong to rely on imprisonment seeing two escaped so they execute 7/10 of the remaining prisoners. the witches attacked the ministry led by malfoy. harry went with moony to defend the ministry. he disarmed mr. malfoy. a witch disarmed harry and stole his wand. moony chased away the two witches. an ambush caught them and returned harry his wand. harry agreed to fight due to the murderous dark wizards and anyway he stopped believing in the religious books that forbade wizardry. he persuaded hermione despite her belief in the book to make an exception due to people getting murdered by edwards followers, who was mad about harry defeating voldemort in the chamber of the sorceror stone. le strange got killed and never killed sirius. later someone else will and harry will feel angry but not that year, yet.
Chapter 6, The Noble House of Black; Harry, Sirius, and the Weasleys clean sirius's home from magical pests.
continuity:
Chapter 4, Grimmauld; Harry reunited with Hermione, ron, and Sirius Black. he argued with ron, but felt happy to see his parents' friend sirius. FIVE ch5, order; sirius told Harry that the racist "woman in the portrait" is his own mother and that this headquarters is his own home. Sirius explained it was empty many years [while s' in azkaban]. nobody stopped various magical beings [Boggarts and more] infested it. Dinner was cheerful. harry met those in the "Order" for fighting wicked wizards. They spoke about magical species goblins and gargoyles etc. tonks changed her faces for fun.
when Sirius mentioned the return of Voldemort, remembering his cruelty, everybody became silent and sad. "people argued." Harry heard ron's ma call him "her own son" [which would be sweet except only to hide the answers he seeks, unjustly overextending her ma authority to decide for harry]. her authority forbade ginny who got expelled from the scary meeting. herm' and ron can stay because harry will "tell them" even if they would be expelled. Sirius told Harry, Voldemort is secretly recruiting new Death Eaters. he is not openly committing murder but acting cautious. Voldemort benefits from Fudge and the "mainstream Wizard media" denying his return. people are not aware of his danger. the Order was trying to add allies or at least sway them from joining vol-you-know-who's army. the goal is preventing vol' gathering another army. they will fail as we saw in 2011. finally, ron's ma sent them to bed.
+FAN FICTION: harry told sirius about the time he hid from his angry uncle. his uncle was mad about something minor, so harry hid outside under the window so if they looked out they would not see him. suddenly he heard a loud CRACK. this made me jump up so i banged my head on the open shutter. i did not have my wand. it was in my room. my uncle had ran to the window and grabbed my ARM..he accused me, "i heard that crack i warned you not to do you-know-what!" i denied so he started HITTING my hand. he ordered "stop lying to me." i tried to peal his fingers away. i felt desperate and pain from the hits... stupify! the wand heard and zapd my uncle even when i was not holding the wand. i did it for self defense. then i got my wand, in case uncle would attack again. that was when the [ONE] dementor came and attacked me so i chased it away with my patronum stag animal [on third try after thinking of friends not like video] i went to see my aunt. later we found uncle vernon dead it must have returned. harry concluded, "sometimes i feel guilty that i felt happy that the dementor killed the man who hit me." sirius replied "i cannot judge you, you were suffering pain." [can you tell? i dont like the harry in chapter one of this book. but her other stories were good. so i must add fan fiction to offer an alternative to the chapter one harry.]
also FAN FICTION for chapter 4:
fan fiction for 4: a door appeared between the neighbor doors [10 and 14, not 11 and 13 oops!] harry told ron he regretted punishing v' for murdering his parents. ron said must stop v' so dum' was correct to imprison. black said "i was in prison and some dangerous ones must be killed before they escape. some distract the dementors while sirius as a dog RE-ENTERED azkaban and one by one executed the dangerous prisoners in the high security section while they are vulnerable not for honor but to prevent them murdering if they escape. just in time when the prison exploded the FOLLOWING day the high security has only corpses. nobody escaped except two witches from the regular prison who were less dangerous but had used avada kadabra.
after the escape the ministry admits it was wrong to rely on imprisonment seeing two escaped so they execute 7/10 of the remaining prisoners. the witches attacked the ministry led by malfoy. harry went with moony to defend the ministry. he disarmed mr. malfoy. a witch disarmed harry and stole his wand. moony chased away the two witches. an ambush caught them and returned harry his wand. harry agreed to fight due to the murderous dark wizards and anyway he stopped believing in the religious books that forbade wizardry. he persuaded hermione despite her belief in the book to make an exception due to people getting murdered by edwards followers, who was mad about harry defeating voldemort in the chamber of the sorceror stone. le strange got killed and never killed sirius. later someone else will and harry will feel angry but not that year, yet.
Chapter 6, The Noble House of Black; Harry, Sirius, and the Weasleys clean sirius's home from magical pests.
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