purify leviticus for clarity, chapter 1

chapter 1 had around 530 words however based on jeremia 7 this section can cause an error. 37/532 remain. for this same reason 494 words in chapter 3, +1220 in 4th, and almost of all of 716 in 5th, and almost all 6th 853+ 1014 in 7th, as well as 1039 in 8th and more must be purified.
chapter one: topic the grain offering [purifying chapters one through eleven]
He called to Moses. God spoke to him from the tent of meeting, saying, `Tell Israelites [1,2], +[first not delay prophecy to pay victim of crime, after hundreds of words] J' told me, `if anybody will sin against J' by a lie [5,21 in rabbi version, called 6,2 in christian division] to somebody about deposits or robbery, or oppressed monetarily, [unjust price etc. wait only if "his fellow"? i must fix.] or found a lost item, and lied about it, and swore a lie, of one of these. he is guilty, he will ** GIVE BACK [pay back] the item that he stole or got by oppression, or the deposit, or the lost thing or all that he will swear to lie. he will pay it first and will add their fifth. to its owner "give it" the day of his guilt. if he abandons evil, [isaiah 55] it will be atoned [4,35]. when a person heard the voice of an oath, he is witness [5,1], or saw, or knew,  if he not tell, then he sinned Or anybody that will touch anything blocked: [either] a blocked beast's corps, or horse's or blocked crawler's, or ANY human's blocking if he will get blocked [by them from temple as in 12,4] if forgot [that] he was blocked, he is guilty by sinning by forgetting [as in 5,15 see note], [when entering holy tent] and remembered. Or anybody when will swear an oath speaking with lips to perform fasting or to do anything, or to do benefit [this should show klall uprat uklal to represent oral tradition insted of the phrase that can cause error] and forgot, and remembered guilt [of violating oath or] for one of these, he will confess his sin to j' and bring a tenth of afa only flour to the aronite priest who will grab from it a handful its memorial. to the altar burn on other offerings [see next section].

the offering of a person [1,2] anybody [2,1] when bringing near a gift offering to J', it will be fine flour [2,1]. he poured on it oil, [as explained in deuteronomy READ by mouth about pour oil and about the other actions, the "doing is by reading" not by hand] and put on it lbne. he will bring it to the Aaronites [2,2], the priests. This law [is] of the gift (6,7]. Aaronites bring it near altar and lift up a handful from its flour etc. PARALLEL:  he poured on it oil, [as explained in deuteronomy READ by mouth about pour oil and about the other actions, the doing is by reading not by hand] and put on it lbne. he brought it to the sons of Aaron, the priests, who take a handful from its flour and its oil, on all its frankincense. the priest will cause fragrance, its memorial to the altar, to fire pleasant fragrance to J'. the rest of the gift to Aaron and his sons, [that part] holier than the holy fire-offering [of] J'. when you bring near a gift offering oven-baked, fine flour, fast loaves in oil. or fast thins anointed with oil. if on pan, fine flour in oil, fast. divide it into parts. pour on it oil, a gift. if deep pan, flour in oil bring from these to J' near the priest. he brings it to the altar. the priest lift from it, its memorial to fragrance on the altar, to fire pleasant fragrance to Jehovah. [2,10] and the rest to Aaron and his sons, [that part is] holier than the holy [part in] fire of J'. No gift etc.

183/276 despite adding for clarity.

Wonderland, 1 and 2, by carol, abridged edited by n. tal

abridged version for "alice's amazing visit to wonderland." edited by n. Tal

intro: i saw two abridged versions which were justified due to the original having TOO much thoughts and rare words or outdated expressions. rhymes which were parodies of contemporary rhymes were skipped since that era had long passed.  however when i compared them i saw that those abridged versions wrongly cut out dialog which is important according to this book. a summary should minimize talk and say events but abridging should not lose dialog unless it has rare words. also they did not fix the rare words or left out too much so i will edit a new abridged version less flawed than both the original and the 2 flawed abridged versions that i know. considering the book has no danger the title "adventure is false" the title should be "alice's amazing visit to wonderland." 

chapter ONE; Down the Rabbit Hole 

  On a very hot day,

on the fourth of month May [chapters 6 & 7], 

 under a cliff

Al felt bored stiff

 by a boat that was moored,

Alice felt very bored.

   Alice was sitting with her teen sister Alexa Agnis Allinson. they sat on a pale green sheet, under a tree for shade, by a farm yard and a stream. beyond it she saw a shepherd boy with sheep. 

Alice felt bored so she looked in the book Alexa was reading. it had no pictures nor conversations. Alice felt very bored until alexa turned the page. she looked again and saw these pages also lacked conversations and pictures. she told Alexa, "your book is bad." Alexa said, "i agree." Alice said, "please read me a story." Alexa replied, "not now." Alice heard a brushing sound in the grass and looked. a White Rabbit ran nearby. the Rabbit stopped and took a WATCH out from its WAISTCOAT POCKET. This surprised Alice because she had never before seen a rabbit with a waistcoat pocket, or seen one with a watch to take out of it. the waistcoat covered a light blue shirt. it was red with a pink pocket. Rabbit checked the time. She heard the Rabbit say to itself, "No! I shall be late!' before hurrying away. Alice jumped and chased it. [parallel old version: She was sitting by her teen sister Alexa Agnis Allenson.  twice she looked in the book Alexa was reading, and saw no pictures nor conversations. She told Alexa, "your book is bad." She heard a brushing sound in the grass and looked. a White Rabbit with "pink eyes" ran nearby. the Rabbit stopped and took a WATCH out from its WAISTCOAT POCKET. This surprised Alice because she had never before seen a rabbit with a waistcoat pocket, or seen one with a watch to take out of it. it checked the time. She heard the Rabbit say to itself, "Oh dear! Oh dear! I shall be late!' before hurrying away. Alice jumped and chased it. 

 She ran and saw it go down a large rabbit-hole. Alice crawled "down" after it and went straight until suddenly she fell downward.

 First, she looked down and saw that the well was very deep and dark. she looked at the sides of the well that had cupboards and shelves that she passed very slowly. from a shelf, She took a jar labeld:"ORANGE Jam', but it was empty, so she put it in a cupboard as she fell past it.

She fell faster and swished past more shelves. she heard the woosh of air. She was falling for a very long time. down, down, down. she thought by now she must be near the center of the earth. She continued falling and began thinking again: I wonder if I shall fall THROUGH the earth. I shall need to ask someone what is the name of the isle?

  Down, down, down. she finally landed on a giant pile of dry leaves. Alice was not hurt. she chased the White Rabbit along a long tunnel. it turned a corner, she turned the corner into a long, low hall. a row of lamps hanging from the roof lit it. she could not see the Rabbit. She walked to a little three-legged table, all made of  glass. only a tiny golden key lay on it. Alice saw many doors but one was a low door. the size of the key might be a hint.  she knelt down, tried it in the lock, and found that it fit. She opened the door. to her great delight she saw a gorgeous garden, the loveliest one you ever saw. she wished that she could walk among those bright flowers. The opening was too small, even for her head, and certainly for her shoulders. She again started wishing that "I could shrink like my wool sweater shrunk, because here almost anything is possible." she went back to the table, where a small bottle now stood. she law lemon-yellow fluid inside it. a paper label was hanging from its neck with the words "DRINK ME' beautifully printed on it in large green letters. she hoped the word drink would cause shrink because they sound similar. She checked that the bottle was NOT marked "poison' . Alice smelled the fluid, and found the fragrance of baked turkey. she tasted it [it felt thick, and was lemon-yellow, hoping it would make her "low" like ye-low] finding a mixed flavor of cherry with pineapple. she drank all of it. suddenly, she felt an odd feeling. she shrunk until she fit the low door. her face showed joy that she could enter the lovely garden. 

she went to the door, and found it locked. the little golden key was on the table. now, she could not possibly reach it. she saw it through the glass. she tried her best to climb up one of the legs of the table, but the glass was too slippery. she stretched her arms up, but it was too far. she also stretched her feet and stood on her toes, but she was too far. she jumped but not high enough so she continued trying to jump higher... until she felt too tired. the helpless "little" girl sat down and cried.

she recalled that sadness is a bad trait. she tried to stop crying but continued sobbing despite distracting herself from sadness. she wished she could grow tall enough to get the key. she showed the number on her fingers as she said "i wish 4 for growing taller." then she noticed a glass box that was lying under the table. its glass was like the frost on a window. she opened it, and found in it a very small cake. it had orange cream. the side she faced had "t" added using purple cream. she turned it and the next side lacked any letter. she turned it more and saw a blue "e" then red "a" and again the "t". the word "EAT'  she did, hoping she got her wish. she tasted the cream that was orange and orange flavor. she felt surprised that she remained the same size. same as when anybody eats cake. this seemed dull and stupid. she started thinking about her pet cat.

chapter TWO; tears, CHAPTER 2 Tears; 

  after Alice ate the tiny cake which had frosting both colored and flavored orange, she grew tall. She said to her feet, "Good bye, feet' [should not skip:] when she looked down at her feet, they seemed very far away. [justifiably skipped thinking] then her head reached the 9 foot roof of the low hall. [note the british author used feet also french interstellar captain in next generation!]  she took the golden key and hurried to open the low door. she was lying on her side looking into the garden with one of her eyes. she was further away from fitting than before. her eyes filled with tears and Alice began to cry again. she cried gallons of huge tears that made a large puddle.

  she heard feet running and dried her eyes to see what was coming. It was the White Rabbit holding a fan and hurrying. when the Rabbit came near her, she began, in a soft voice, "If you please, sir...' but before she could continue, the Rabbit dropped the fan, and ran away.  Alice picked up the fan. the hall was hot, so she started fanning herself. Alice asked herself, "now that i changed tall, Who am I? she answered Alice, "i am not any other girl because SHE is her not me." she saw that she was shrinking small again due to the fan. She went to the table to compare herself. now she was shorter and continuing to shrink. she felt a bit nervous about becoming "like the flame of a candle after the candle got blown out." she was in salt water up to her chin. she feared she would shrink until nothing and was in DANGER of reaching her end, so she dropped the fan, thinking the fan was causing this. 

 she swam to the low door and found it was locked again, the golden key was lying on the glass table as before, Alice was further from reaching the key than ever. "I never was this small, ever!" somebody said, it was her own voice aloud. she was in the tears which she had wept when she was nine feet high. [dont skip:] she swam to find the shore. she heard splashing nearby. she swam nearer to it and saw a mouse. she hoped it could talk same as the rabbit. she began: "O Mouse, do you know the way out?" it said nothing so she began speaking again. the first sentence in her French lesson-book was: "Ou est ma chatte?' which means cat. understandably, the Mouse leaped up out of the water. it trembled with fright. Alice apologized, "Oh, I beg your pardon, you don't like cats.'

  "Not like cats!' exclaimed the Mouse, "Would YOU like cats if you were me?' she tried to soothe it, by agreeing, "No,' in a soothing tone and added, "still, I wish I could show you our cat Dinah. if you could see it, such a dear!' [dont skip activity:] she swam lazily about in the salt water sea. the Mouse was trembling to the end of its tail, so she pledged "We won't talk about "c" anymore.' it argued, "We? as if I would talk about those killers. Our family HATED cats: nasty, immoral things!"   Alice, hurried to change the subject to dogs: "near our home lives a nice little terrier, with oh, such long curly brown hair!" she exclaimed. then alice continued, "it'll fetch things when you throw them, and it'll sit up, and all sorts of things. I can't remember. it is very useful: it kills rats and, oh dear!' cried Alice in a sorrowful tone. her only friend was hastily swimming away from her, leaving her lonely, so she called softly after it, "Mouse dear! Do come back. i won't talk about "d". When the Mouse heard this, it turned back and swam to her.  it said in a low trembling voice, "We ought to go to the shore. there I'll tell you why I hate c's and d's.' the mouse swam and led Alice to a group. she felt crowded by the many animals and birds that were near her. she noticed a rare Dodo. somebody said, "my name is Lory." Also a Duck and an Eaglet were with her. the mouse swam and led them to the shore.

CHAPTER 3; A Caucus-Race and a Long Tale

note to chapters one and two: despite the fact that a story with details is good, still this amazing book alice has too much "thoughts" and rare words. other abridged versions did not improve the rare words and sometimes skipped too much conversation or activity admittedly they justifiably skipped the poems which were parodies of contemporary poems no longer popular. so i provide a less flawed abridged version.

despite some additions , the abridging shortened to:  chapter 2=720/2100 and 929/2150 abridging 2600 words of thoughts and parodies of lost poems.  2144+2100=4250

continued at

https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/02/abridged-version-of-wonderland-by-carol.html

purifying book duteronomy: editing for clarity with notes to explain the edits.

purifying book duteronomy: editing for clarity with notes to explain the edits.
intro: "some" claim moses wrote book duteronomy, but even if author wrote "i spoke", doubt would exist and further doubt when the writer wrote moses name, matching when others write about moses, despite possibilities, still THAT that is the match. also the phrase "across the jordan" indicates ezra, inside wrote about the "other side" not moses about his own side. reminder moses never entered, remember? i will edit for clarity. i emphasize that i purify based on the methods in the oral law for example in talmud shabat, a method was taught and preserved which influences hundreds of phrases in the book we got, or for clarity to edit phrases that can cause the reader error or to think an idea that conflicts a source. i will edit and explain the changes to replace the misleading book which is not only subjectively ugly but even objectively very very bad quality as you will see demonstrated.
first half of chapter: 260/600 words
ONE, on day one of the eleventh month, by river Jordan, Moses explained: the journey is eleven days from mount Horeb to southern border, by the Mount Seir road, but now is the fortieth year. we defeated king Og and the Amorite king Sihon and went to mount Amorite. God said "travel UNTIL the great river EUPHRATES."  [see note one]. god commanded "Go inherit the land from those killed by hornets. God swore to Jacob to give it to Jacob's children.” [see note two]. before we obeyed, I said to you israelites, “(10) God has increased you greatly. YOU choose leaders, for thousands, of hundreds, of fifties and of tens and as tribal officials, from each of your families.” You answered me, “What you propose is good.” [see note three]. those wise and respected men were ministers and judges. I ordered your judges, “Hear the disputes and judge justly [fair means justly], for two Israelites and between an Israelite and a foreigner dwelling among you. avoid favoring in judging between greater or lesser. Do not fear anyone because God will judge. Bring me any argument, too hard for you. [see note four]. we  traveled from Horeb by the road of mount Amorite, all that vast and dreadful wilderness that you saw until we reached Kadesh Barnea and mount Amorite, which God is giving us. Go up and inherit [21] as God said. Do not fear. all of you came to me and said, “send men to spy the land and bring back a report about the road we will take and the towns.” I liked that idea.
NOTES
note one: Topic: journeying. i must purify "by", according to the story itself, they did not go 'by the sea coast'. even if describing the territory to enter, that is not only unclear, missing words, but also is in a different book and here badly written so i purify.
note 2, topic: inherit, but not from parents? [note: this referd to battles so we see the leaders "misused" god to pursuade people to enter dangerous battle and to "try to justify" murdering defenders. the same god who said you will not murder and who said "i will send hornets" in exodus so i purified this misleading section to preserve the hornets. admittedly my faith is that this story and book STARTED as "recognizable fiction of exciting battles" against kings og and sihon outside of their country. jews knew the stories were only fictional entertainment,  until literalist used threats and hits to compel people to say "it happened." this book serves to delete the historical truth that the jews "had always been in that land between the jordan river and the sea coast" instead of entered from outside.] 
note 3 topic: leaders; [Note: i must purify "I took" see verse ten! this book is so poorly written that we can be certain that the book was not authored by any "wise god" who would have carefuly chosen the words not to mislead nor cause errors for readers, but choosing for clarity and without this conflict "you chose i took i appointed".
which is true? josephus preserved the "nation chose" so i purified this too. we can be certain based on the bad misleading wording, here and elsewhere and which God bothered to correct by Jeremia,  that not even any holy spirit guided these authors, therefore the book needs purification.] 
note 4 judges, this is moses telling "all israel" what to expect from judges. stupid to tell the people unless he explained "dont blame me for when judges are unjust i told them not to favor." also note he is violating god who said "go" instead he stayed, not going for appointed judges. moses indeed sinned.
see 1,18 "before we traveled, at THAT time, i said ALL you should do.  source 1,18. that is all of it. since this is true, we must not interpret ANY command "to do" after they traveled... but what about the source in oral law the ones in the tabernacle are the limit? this conflict again indicates the book is not from God since god would be careful not to contradict. in other words god would be careful therefore these books are certainly not from god. some start with supposition, it IS FROM GOD since no contradiction possible therefore twist the messages "all" is not all... but truly said all... and by the SAME logic since contradition not from god we can be certain these books are not from god so i purify. which one to purify? i could say all, this word excluded future ceremonies, but instead i truly increase the burden, DO festivals just without the animal offerings as denied in book jeremia you eat for truly did not command them. since not all i must purify by deleting the word all, and that sentence 18 which could lead to the error "all before traveling" excluding those commands in the tent which were specifically included by talmud shabat. +part 2, sentence 23 The idea was good in my opinion

Wonderland, 9, by carol, abridged edited by n. tal

continuing from
https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/03/wonderland-8b-game-by-carol-edited-by.html
9; cow-Turtle’s Story
somebody said to Alice, “I feel very happy that i am with you again, dear.” the voice came from the Duchess, who tucked her left arm affectionately under Alice’s ryt arm. they walked together. Alice felt very glad that she was acting pleasantly. Alice realized that only the pepper in the kitchen, caused her to speak harshly, and probably caused the cook's violence too. if so she decided that when she would be a Duchess, which she hoped for, but also not very hopeful, not to have any pepper in the kitchen. Soup is good with other herbs, or garlic, onion and other spices. pepper makes people hot-tempered. she continued her theory while feeling "very much pleased at comprehending the causes", based on the difference now: people act sour due to vinegar. or bitter due to camomile. sugar and such sweets make children sweet-tempered. if people knew that, then they would stop using sour vinegar and pepper. instead eat sweets to change from sour and rude or stingy. deep in her thoughts, She forgot the Duchess, so she felt a bit startled when she heard the duchess very near her ear: “You’re thinking about something, my dear."
"yes." alice agreed. duchess continued, "that has a moral, that I will remember soon.” Alice argued, “Perhaps it hasn’t one.” Duchess insisted, “Everything has a moral, child, if you can find it.” she started resting her sharp chin on Alice’s shoulder. Alice did not like that but was not assertive. instead alice said, “The game’s going better now.” Duchess agreed, moving away her chin, "yes, the moral of that is, love, oh love makes the world go round!’” she continued: “consider your flamingo, flamingoes and mustard both bite. the moral of that is,‘Birds of a feather flock together.’” alice argued “mustard isn’t a bird, it’s a mineral.”
“Certainly,” agreed the Duchess, who now seemed to agree with anything that Alice said, and continued, “I agree with you, and a large mustard mine is near here. the moral of that is, ‘The more that is mine, yours will be less.’” alice corrected herself about mustard, “Oh, I know!” exclaimed Alice, “it’s a vegetable." the duchess again agreed, “yes it is, the moral of that is... simply: ‘Never imagine yourself, not to be other than, what it appears to others what you are." Alice argued but very politely, "that is not simple at all! I would understand that if I had it written to read. the Duchess added, “furthermore, you differ from how others consider you. I give you my ideas as a present.” alice thought this was a cheap gift. she felt glad that birthday presents are not words. 
Duchess asked, “Thinking again?” and again dug another dig into alice's shoulder using her sharp chin. Alice answered her question, “I have the right to think.” duchess continued, “as much right as pigs have to fly..." duchess stopped and began quaking due to the Queen who was frowning and warning her, "Choose, now, either you or your head must be off!" queen stamped on the ground as she spoke. The Duchess chose to keep her head so instantly left. Queen said to Alice, “Join the game.” Alice felt too frightened to speak, so she curtsied politely. they walked together to the bumpy croquet field. The other guests were resting in the shade during the Queen’s absence. when they saw her, they hurried back to play. while they were playing, the Queen constantly was arguing with the other players. she was repeatedly shouting “Off with his head!” or “Off with her head!” soldiers left their "arch" positions, to arrest each one upon whom she decreed death. in almost half an hour, no arches remained so the game ended. all the players, except the King, the Queen, and Alice, were held in custody.
the Queen slowly asked Alice, “Have you seen the Mock Turtle yet?” Alice answered, “No, I don’t know what a Mock Turtle is.” Queen explained, “It’s the thing used to make Mock Turtle Soup.” Alice felt that this did not explain anything at all. Alice heard the King say, in a low voice, “You are all pardoned.” Alice knew the answer how anyone remained alive here despite the number of unjust decrees of death. 
Gryphon and Turtle-cow
They came to a Gryphon, lying asleep in the sun. see the picture. its lion body was oddly enhanced with broad wings like a bird and a beak. Queen ordered, “Up, lazy thing, and take this young lady to see the Mock Turtle to hear his history. I will go watch some executions,” and she <<<[note the paragraph does not end at the end of a quotation.]  walked off. Alice was only with the Gryphon.  alice felt danger, from this gryphon. its beak could injure. lions eat meat so it would want to eat her, however being near the harmful Queen was just as dangerous. The Gryphon sat up and rubbed its eyes. it chuckled and commented, “such fun.”
“What is fun?” asked Alice. it answered, “she is. they never execute.” it obediently led her to the cow-turtle. she saw the Mock Turtle in the distance. it was sitting lonely and sad, on a smooth rock. they came nearer. Alice heard him sighing as if his heart was broken. She pitied him deeply and asked the Gryphon, “What is his sorrow?” the Gryphon answered, “It’s all his imagination. he hasn’t got sorrow.” they came nearer to it. its large eyes were full of tears. Gryphon told it, “Tell her your history.” in a deep, hollow tone it said, “I’ll tell it. sit down, both of you.” they sat down. after she waited patiently, Alice urged the cow-turtle, "if you don’t begin, you will never tell nor end.” it finally began its story. at last it started to speak, “Once, I was a real Turtle.” it sighed a deep sigh.  the Gryphon exclamed, “Hijkr-r”when it started repeated heavy sobbing. Alice felt very curious what more would come. after sobbing, it continued more calmly, though still sobbing a few times during the story, “When we were little, we went to school in the sea. The teacher was an old Turtle, we calld him Tortoise.” Alice asked, “Why did you call him Tortoise, if he was a turtle?” it answered angrily, “We called him Tortoise because he TAUGHT- US, You won't believe..." she interrupted the Mock Turtle, "I never said I didn’t” Gryphon warned her, “silence!” it continued, “We had the best of educations. in fact, we went to school every day...”  she interrupted again, “I go to school, too. don’t be so proud as that.” it asked, “With extras?” alice answered, “Yes, we learned French and music.” it asked, "washing?” she replied, “Certainly not.” it commented, “yours wasn’t a good school. ours had ‘French, music, AND washing.” alice argued, "under water you couldn’t need it, at the bottom of the sea.” it ignored her and told her, "we studied Reeling and Writhing and 'rithmetic. that included "Ambition, Distraction, Uglification, and Derision.” “I never heard ‘Uglification,’” Alice commented doubtfully. alice asked, “What is it?” Gryphon lifted up from under its wings, both its front paws, and his eyes and beak were showing surprise, “What? Never heard of uglifying? You know what beautify is, don't you?” alice answered, “Yes, it means making anything prettier.” it concluded,  “if you know that and if you don’t know uglify, then figure it out yourself." Alice turned to the Mock Turtle, who had a shell like a turtle but a face and tail like a cow, and asked “What else did you learn?” it added, “you probably only studied history but WE," it boasted, "had Mystery.” it was counting subjects on its flapper, “ancient and modern Mystery, Sea-ography.  once each week: Drawling the teacher was an old eel. you only learnt to draw with oil and sketch but WE," it boasted, "studied Drawling, Stretching, and Fainting in Coils.”she wondered aloud, “how do you do that?” it explained, “I can’t show it, because I’m too stiff. the Gryphon never learnt it.”

“Hadn’t time,” sighed the Gryphon, “I learnt Classics from a crab." cow-turtle sighed deeply, “i missed THAT." she began again, "how many hours a day did you do lessons?” hurrying to change the sad subject. they answered, “4 hours monday, tuesday 3, and so on.” she exclaimed, “such an ODD surprising schedule!” Gryphon criticized, “don't you know? That’s the reason they’re called lessons, because they lessen day by day." This was a new idea for Alice who added, “Then friday must have been vacation.” the Mock Turtle sighed, "obviously, it was.” Gryphon eagerly urged. “enough about lessons, now, we will tell you about games.”

CHAPTER 10; The Lobster Quadrille; The Mock Turtle brushed the back of a flapper over its eyes. sobs choked its voice...  continued at

https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/04/wonderland-10-by-carol-abridged-edited.html

there.

fixing bad summary of Chapter five, book 5 order and fan fiction harry potter

summary of Chapter five, needs fixing because bad: "family background" that is only in six! but five differd. the argument was not the main part instead the information harry learned about you know who and the actions of the order are important so i fix this summary of 5:
continuity: 
Chapter 4, Grimmauld; Harry reunited with Hermione, ron, and Sirius Black. he argued with ron, but felt happy to see his parents' friend sirius. FIVE ch5, order; sirius told Harry that the racist "woman in the portrait" is his own mother and that this headquarters is his own home. Sirius explained it was empty many years [while s' in azkaban]. nobody stopped various magical beings [Boggarts and more] infested it. Dinner was cheerful. harry met those in the "Order" for fighting wicked wizards. They spoke about magical species goblins and gargoyles etc. tonks changed her faces for fun.
when Sirius mentioned the return of Voldemort, remembering his cruelty, everybody became silent and sad. "people argued." Harry heard ron's ma call him "her own son" [which would be sweet except only to hide the answers he seeks, unjustly overextending her ma authority to decide for harry]. her authority forbade ginny who got expelled from the scary meeting. herm' and ron can stay because harry will "tell them" even if they would be expelled. Sirius told Harry, Voldemort is secretly recruiting new Death Eaters. he is not openly committing murder but acting cautious. Voldemort benefits from Fudge and the "mainstream Wizard media" denying his return. people are not aware of his danger. the Order was trying to add allies or at least sway them from joining vol-you-know-who's army. the goal is preventing vol' gathering another army. they will fail as we saw in 2011. finally, ron's ma sent them to bed.
+FAN FICTION: harry told sirius about the time he hid from his angry uncle. his uncle was mad about something minor, so harry hid outside under the window so if they looked out they would not see him. suddenly he heard a loud CRACK. this made me jump up so i banged my head on the open shutter. i did not have my wand. it was in my room. my uncle had ran to the window and grabbed my ARM..he accused me, "i heard that crack i warned you not to do you-know-what!" i denied so he started HITTING my hand. he ordered "stop lying to me." i tried to peal his fingers away. i felt desperate and pain from the hits... stupify! the wand heard and zapd my uncle even when i was not holding the wand. i did it for self defense. then i got my wand, in case uncle would attack again. that was when the  [ONE] dementor came and attacked me so i chased it away with my patronum stag animal [on third try after thinking of friends not like video] i went to see my aunt. later we found uncle vernon dead it must have returned. harry concluded, "sometimes i feel guilty that i felt happy that the dementor killed the man who hit me." sirius replied "i cannot judge you, you were suffering pain." [can you tell? i dont like the harry in chapter one of this book. but her other stories were good. so i must add fan fiction to offer an alternative to the chapter one harry.]
also FAN FICTION for chapter 4:
fan fiction for 4: a door appeared between the neighbor doors [10 and 14, not 11 and 13 oops!] harry told ron he regretted punishing v' for murdering his parents. ron said must stop v' so dum' was correct to imprison. black said "i was in prison and some dangerous ones must be killed before they escape. some distract the dementors while sirius as a dog RE-ENTERED azkaban and one by one executed the dangerous prisoners in the high security section while they are vulnerable not for honor but to prevent them murdering if they escape. just in time when the prison exploded the FOLLOWING day the high security has only corpses. nobody escaped except two witches from the regular prison who were less dangerous but had used avada kadabra.
after the escape the ministry admits it was wrong to rely on imprisonment seeing two escaped so they execute 7/10 of the remaining prisoners. the witches attacked the ministry led by malfoy. harry went with moony to defend the ministry. he disarmed mr. malfoy.  a witch disarmed harry and stole his wand. moony chased away the two witches. an ambush caught them and returned harry his wand. harry agreed to fight due to the murderous dark wizards and anyway he stopped believing in the religious books that forbade wizardry. he persuaded hermione despite her belief in the book to make an exception due to people getting murdered by edwards followers, who was mad about harry defeating voldemort in the chamber of the sorceror stone. le strange got killed and never killed sirius. later someone else will and harry will feel angry but not that year, yet.
Chapter 6,  The Noble House of Black; Harry, Sirius, and the Weasleys clean sirius's home from magical pests. 

Wonderland, 8b, game, by carol, edited by n. tal

continuing from
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The Queen turned crimson with fury! she glared angrily at Alice, for a second and roared, “Off with her head!" like the roar of a wild panther. was Alice in danger?
to be continued.
Alice announced, very loudly and decidedly, “Nonsense!” the Queen was tamed silent and did not respond. The King laid his hand on her arm, and timidly said “Consider, my dear, she is only a child.” The Queen turned angrily away from him, and ordered the Knave, “Turn them over.” he very carefully did, with one foot. "stand up!” she ordered. in a shrill, loud voice. the three clovers instantly jumped up, and began bowing to the King, the Queen, and even to the royal children, “stop that!” screamed the Queen and turning to the rose-tree, she continued, “What have you been doing here?”
"your Majesty,” began Two, in a very humble tone, going down on one knee as he spoke, “we were trying...” the Queen, who had meanwhile been examining the roses, interrupted, “I see.” next she ordered, “Off with their heads!” lastly, the parade moved forward. three of the diamond soldiers remained to execute the gardeners, who ran to Alice for protection. she announced, “You shan’t be beheaded!” she put them into a large flowerpot that stood nearby. The three soldiers quietly wandered about for awhile, looking for them. then they marched off to reach the Queen. she loudly asked, “Are their heads off?” shouting. “Their heads are gone, if it please your Majesty,” the soldiers replied together. she asked alice in rhyme, “Can you play croquet?” she answered, “Yes.” she ordered, “Come.” Alice joined her, very curious what would happen next. somebody said, “It’s, it’s a very fine day.” the timid voice, at her side was the White Rabbit's. he was walking by her and was looking at her face.
she said, “Very, where’s the Duchess?”
“Hush! Hush!” said the white Rabbit in a low tone. He looked anxiously over his shoulder as he spoke, and then raised himself up on tiptoe, put his mouth close to her ear, and whispered “She’s sentenced to die.” Alice asked, “What for?” 
“Did you say ‘What a pity!’?” the Rabbit asked [editors note: notice the clever series of symbols! "pity!'?""]. she replied, “No, I didn’t. I don’t think it’s a pity. I said ‘What for?’” it began to explain, “She boxed the Queen’s ears...” Alice burst out laughing at the absurdity. “Oh, hush!” the Rabbit whispered in a frightened tone. “The Queen will hear you!” the Queen "thundered", “Go to your places!” people ran in all directions. they bumped against each other, some falling down. finally they came to the places and started the game. the ground had many ridges and furrows instead of smooth for rolling. the game balls were live hedgehogs. the mallets were live flamingoes! the cards folded themselves, arching up on their hands and feet, to be the arches.
Alice overcame many challenges, that prevented her playing. her flamingo was always moving. she was VERY curious how the other players managed. she was extremely careful to copy them by tucking its body under her arm. next she straightened its neck.  before she could hit the hedgehog-ball,  using its head, it turned to look with such a funny expression that alice could not stop laughing. when she pushed the bird's head down, the hedgehog unrolled itself, and began crawling away. anyway, the ground was not smooth instead a bump or a hole would have blocked it wherever she wanted it to go. the arch cards were also always moving. The players all played at the same time instead of waiting for turns. the game was too confusing and too difficult.
the Queen was angrily shouting “Off with his head!” or “Off with her head!” almost every minute. Alice began to feel extremely worried about the killing of many people. she asked a card, "how is anybody left alive?!” he pointed at the king, mysteriously. it hurried to be the arch where the queen's hedgehog was rolling [credit disney]. She looked about for a way for leaving unseen. she saw something appear in the air: it was... a grin of the Cheshire Cat. it asked, “How are you?” Alice waited a minute for its eyes to appear. she doubted, what if it was moving from another place? if its ears are still in THAT PLACE then speaking to it would be fruitless till its ears came, or at the very least one of them. it appeared slowly and gradualy as she had requested. 
In another minute the whole head appeared. Alice put down her flamingo. this was an excellent opportunity for a conversation. she began to tell it what happened during the game. she felt "very glad that she had somebody willing to listen to her." The Cat stopped appearing so no more of it appeared. she started complaining, “they dont play fairly. they quarrel so louldy. they violate rules, maybe they lack rules? the things are alive," she added pointing at her flamingo that was wandering away. "the arch, that i need next, for my hedgehog to go through, is walking far, there. i almost croqueted the Queen’s hedgehog, but it ran away when it saw mine coming.”
“do you like the Queen?” it asked in a low voice. alice answered, “Not at all, she’s so...” she stopped talking when she noticed that the Queen was nearby. maybe she could hear so she concluded, “...likely to win, that it’s hardly worth the time finishing the game.” The Queen smiled as she passed. the king asked Alice, “Who are you talking to?” he came near her and was looking at the Cat’s face with great curiosity. she replied, “It’s my friend a Cat."
“I don’t like its appearance,” he said, “kiss my hand.” the King extended his hand toward it. it responded, "I’d rather not.” he complained, “Don’t look at me that way.” He moved and hid behind Alice as he spoke. he called the Queen, “My dear! I wish you would order this cat removed” The Queen had only one way for any issue: “Off with his head.” he agreed eagerly, “I’ll bring the executioner myself.” he hurried away. meanwhile, Alice went to search for her hedgehog. she heard the Queen’s voice screaming. even for missing their turns the Queen already decreed death. she risked this DANGER too, not knowing whether it was her turn or not. her hedgehog was fighting another hedgehog. Alice would have croqueted one of them with the other, but her flamingo was far away across the garden. she watched it trying to fly up into a tree. she caught it and carried it back... but by then both hedgehogs had left. no arches were nearby either. she went to the Cat.
she felt surprised when she found a large crowd around it.  the Executioner, King, and Queen were all arguing at the same time. all the rest listened silently and showed they felt very worried. Alice neared, so the trio begd her to decide: she had difficulty hearing due to them talking at the same time. The executioner claimed he can’t cut off a head, unless it was with a body to cut it OFF from: never had he cut a head without a body and he wasn’t willing to start a new change. The King argued that anything that had a head could simply "be beheaded." so simply cut in the usual place without talking nonsense. The Queen’s argument was, don't delay. if something wasn’t done she’d order everybody all round, killed. the listeners showed their anxiety. Alice wanted her friend alive so she declared “It belongs to the Duchess. first ask her.”
“She’s in prison,” somebody said. the Queen had said this to the executioner and continued “fetch her here.” he went fast like an arrow.
The Cat’s head began fading slowly, as alice had requested. before he led the Duchess to the queen, it had entirely vanished. the King and the executioner ran wildly about the field, looking for it. the rest continued the game, while alice watched.
CHAPTER 9; cow-Turtle’s Story; continued at

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book ester brandy style

 ester, brandy style

introduction: the book of ester should start with ester and not have "fillers" that only fill the pages with unrelated words. brandy is made by distilling "alcoholic" wine to make it more concentrated by removing more water so that is what i will do and edit the story to add surprises.

ester: chapter one: ester

ONE ester felt joy. at dawn she would enter her 18 year and her birthday will begin. she planned on celebrating with her two best friends hadasa... and arava. she felt so excited that she could not sleep so she left her soft bed and sat on a chair in the dark. she tried to control her breathing: in, wait, out and repeat. soon she felt drowsy and returned to her soft mattress under her thick winter quilt filled with bird feathers.

that night she dreamt an amazing dream which motivated her mysterious actions. at dawn ma woke ester and said 'wake up and help me cook breakfast. we want you to meet a man to marry."

"not again, you pick only the gross men." ester moaned. then she recalled her special day, only once each year and asked, "ma how will we celebrate my birthday this year?" ma sneered in ridicule, "today is not your birthday, which was the 14 of adar, yesterday." ester argued, "no it is today. look at the calendar." however ma insisted they only use the jewish calendar, so today is a regular day. she felt that her stingy jew parents had skipped her birthday again. it must be revenge for her rejecting each of the many men, all very gross, that they tried to match her for wedding.

this year ester tried a new argument, "if you follow the adar calendar then you should have made me a birthday on that day." ma argued "too late. now go fetch water so i can cook the eggs." ester knew that her parents' selection of men were gross. she left toward the well but decided she would not return. instead ester went to hadasa's house. hadasa was poor. the home was small but still made ester jealous because hadasa not only celebrated a birthday but even had invited ester to come. now ester wanted to give, returning her joy. she took some of her silver coins and purchased a fancy cake from hadasa's pa, then she called hadasa and they ate the sweet cake together.

somebody politely said, "thank you for sharing your cake." the voice was hadasa's. ester corrected her, "i must thank you. only you make my birthday joy instead of lonely and sad.' hadasa asked, "did your parents find you a man?" ester answered, "many men but only the gross ones. i want a prince." hadasa suggested, "try for the king!" ester accepted her idea. --2 the palace

TWO during the kingdom of "cyrus son of xerxes", ester came to the palace. she only knew a bit of the history: some jews had already returned to jerusalem. cyrus king of persia had sent jews to jerusalem and gave money for them to build a temple. ester had doubts. was that good? they claimed to honor God by burning sheep? or maybe better to obey the message in jeremia that "god of israel denied commanding to offer sacrifices." her heart said to obey the prophecy [in book jeremia chapter seven] but nobody around her respected that message. they only read from the book but ignored that message. she knew, now that she saw her dream, those temple worshippers were evil sinners against the one true God who sent a message by jeremia to correct the error. we must avoid the sinners and wait in susa therefore she made a plan so the stay in susa would be safe.

she also knew about king darius who favored zrubabel and that during his kingdom the temple "was built". [correcting error in talmud]. xerxes son of darius favored the jews. after xerxes died his son cyrus ruled. his other name was artaxerxes who "was called by us asurs." two generations after the temple was built ester went to the palace of king cyrus son of xerxes.

ester approached the guards and said "the king wants to see me." she was certain this was true. the gaurds searched her for a knife. the knife for the birthday cake was at hadasa's home so they let her in believing her. she went along the corridors of the palace and told each guard, as she was certain "the king wants to see me." at the door of the kings chamber again she repeated her message to the guards who again searched her and let her in.

the king was VERY pleased and she had been correct. "oh king, your majesty," ester began, "if you will know who i am, you will want me as your queen." the king stopped his discussion and said, "you can join my harem of many wives if you wish." ester argued, "you will see i am fit to be queen." he favored her and set a time to dine with her then he returned to his decisions.

the harem head asked ester her ethnicity. she said "i will only tell the king." he offered her perfumes of scented oils and more but she only asked to cut her hair in a certain style and shave with a razor all other hair from her body.

the palace quality blades were much better. she chose new clothing and robes to prepare for the dinner. they gave her colorful soft shoes too. at dinner she sat with the king and told him imaginary stories that she had generated. they ate the soft beef and drank the sweet wine. "i enjoy being with you very much," said the king. ester bargained, "i want to be the exclusive queen. reject any other queen and free the harem." the king raised his eyebrow, but considered he was bored of the harem anyway and this young girl was far better than the queen. in fact he had only wed her for inheriting the kingdom but now they were married he was king so he could divorce her. immediately he agreed to ester's ultimatum. --3 the first party

THREE ester encouraged the king to make a party for his closest advisors and governors to announce the change. the king celebrated a huge party and announced he was divorcing his queen and replacing her with ester. the advisors asked "who is she? is she royal?" the king answered, "i dont care about any of that. i enjoy sitting with her. even seeing her soothes my heart. NOW she is royal as my queen." the governors sent and dragged the dethroned queen. they asked "she was your queen what will you do to her?" the king compared, for the first time and saw that ester was much more beautiful. "send her back to her parents," ordered the king. so they escorted her out from susa.

that night ester offered her body to the king but the king felt weak and only asked for a story. so she told him a story which she had imagined and invented. the story was so interesting for him that he struggled to stay awake but his eyes were tired from the efforts of the day... and he slept.

the next morning ester slept late. nobody woke her as her ma had always woke her at dawn she was QUEEN! She feasted on a SWEET CAKE EVEN SOFTER THAN THE FRESH BIRTHDAY CAKE that she shared with hadasa. she DARED to interrupt the king again. she entered his meeting with the governors and requested lunch meal with the king. he answered "even now i will interrupt and hear your ideas." the governors showed shock because they had important issues but they must submit to the king.

ester announced, "surely you can guess that i wanted to be queen for the purpose of influencing you to do something." the king said "i dont care about that. you can ask for ANYTHING." an advisor added "meaning if reasonable request."

"i want you to decree to arrange an army of volunteers: anybody who wants to kill the jews can volunteer and have royal protection to organize and kill the jews of this city." the king shrugged "whatever you wish." [note: ester caused the replacement of the queen, ester went to meet the king and she caused the decree due to his emotion for her sorry rabi yosi this is more plausible.] the governors protested "your majesty, they will kill many tax paying jews. you will have less money from taxes." the king shrugged, "if she wants it, i will give her anything. i enjoy her so much." an advisor challenged ester "you must consider the expense of hiring soldiers and their weapons and uniforms.." ester explained that they would be paid by looting the jews. as for uniforms, on the day before the attack they can take the uniforms from regular soldiers just for the day.

immediately the king "sent RIDERS" for the sake of ester to arrange the army, not only in the city Susa as she requested, but also in all his vast kingdom from India to Ethiopia. Anybody who wanted to kill jews came and joined the army. they were protected by royal decree and were organized into army groups. when people saw the royal protection, they stopped hiding their hate and felt free to join and enlist. thousands of persians joined, not only those who were swindled by jews in business tricks. more joined in the many other provinces.

a week passed while the king was busy with many governors. at night he was too drowsy to call for her. finaly ester told the king he must rest from his jobs and set one day of rest undisturbed only with her. the king ordered all the governors to delay any new decision and govern based on previous decisions and laws. he must have a day of rest with his beloved queen.

the queen started the day with breakfast and asked the king about his hopes for the future. the king said he planned on making a war to take more land from a neighbor. "what do your advisors say?" king explaind, "they say the neighbor has powerful allies and we risk too much." ester added "i also prefer times of peace. dont you agree i am enough for you without more land." the king agreed and asked for a story. ester entertained him for a full hour with a story that she had imagined. at the end of the story the king felt very happy with the hapy ending. "your stories satisfy me more than any peasure i ever enjoyed with the previous queen."

"then it is time for my next request in my agenda." the king said "i appreciate your honesty but i really do not care if you have any agenda as queen i will give you anything. your idea of paying the soldiers by looting is brilliant! you are a gennius a great mastermind!" he praised.

FOUR the second request

ester now revealed the conclusion of her plan, "my king this whole arrangement was only to reveal who in your kingdom had strong hate so strong as to murder! in truth i am ester a jew and i wanted my enemy to feel protected and free to reveal they hated enough to kill!" the king raised his eyebrows and wagged a finger, saying "you sneaky sneaky tigress! i thought you hated jews as much as i did! but that was before i met you! i do hate the parents who ignore their child's pain in circumcision their own son!!" ester herself was heartless too and had planned on circumcising her son too without any thought to the pain nor loss of blood nor loss of the body part. for the sake of her plan she instantly switched sides saying, "oh my king i and some jews do not want to continue those cruel practices anymore."

"that is a relief! i do not want OUR son cut!" ester agreed soothingly "certainly not" as she choked on her words it was difficult for her to lie... she began to doubt if she were truly a jew. a lie would be easier or even pleasant of she were a jew. why was lying difficult now?

ester concluded her plan, "now that you know my intention tell the governors to arrange lists in each WALLED city and WITH YOUR ADVISORS select from the list first the most powerful or influential or richest of the jew exterminaotr unit. bring them to the office with the deception of appointing generals for training and then execute the leaders.

"my jewish queen i will do that and more i will gradualy execute EVERY one on that list who wants to harm your nation."

SO IT WAS. the governors arranged lists in every walled city and any major port on a river of soldiers. the most powerful or influential or richest were sent from all throughout the kingdom to be appointed generals but on their arrival were instantly sent to the dungeon where the executioners were busy chopping off the heads of those murderers. the bodies would be too numerous to bury so the king made a FEAST 180 days with the meat that the executioners cut off the murderer bodies. enough generals were "appointed" to feed the party of thousands for almost half a year.

the king confiscated the property of the rich and their precious items were emptied from the homes to the royal treasury while the local governors were granted ownership of those lands. the justic continued as the king had agreed and every single soldier on the list from each city "in 127 provinces from india to ethiopia" was executed either in the palace or in their own province. only the queen knew the reason for the executions. every name on the list of volunteers was exectude by the king and his governors totalling nearly SEVENTY FIVE THOUSAND of the jew enemies. THIS WAS the source of the meat and soup served for 180 days in the third year of the king. for the next nine years of the king until the twelfth year of the king the jews had peace. finaly in year twelve ester had a second request. she asked the king to put her cruel parents in the dungeon and after they and the other relatives who had done mean actions to her or even harsh words were in the dungeon, then it was time to reveal that they had PURIFIED the kingdom from india to ethiopia including jerusalem of the jew haters and the jews celebrated on the 14 day of adar and added an additional day also for EVERYONE to celebrate the 15 too to symbolize that the original decree had specified walled cities despite in the end all towns were purified and for this the jews rejoice. not for winning any battle but for the cleverness of the queen and the salvation from the enemies of the jews in that vast region from india to ethiopia such "we thank queen ester's memory." amen

the end.