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the date was december 20, last year [one before the time you are reading this story.]
Clair felt that she could not wait for the winter vacation. she hated skool. can you relate to that feeling? she wished that winter vacation was the entire months december and january. she also hated that the sky was already dark by the time she ended her studies at 4 in afternoon. she wished she could enjoy the "golden afternoon" in a song she heard from disney.
clair was laying in her bed at ten pm written 22:00. she knew that she needed to listen at skool and could not enjoy the nite kuz then she would be drowsy at skool and the teachers would notice and say comments at her.
as she lay on her soft mattress and soft sheet, she hugged her thick fluffy winter quilt. her ma named izsabbel would have annoyed her if she had not done her work. that night she needed to practice the math called dividing fractions. like when was that ever useful in life?? at least if i double a recipe: half cup flour i can use math to know one cup but this?? she hated numbers in general and math was the worst subject from all the bad subjects at skool. at least in "lit" they had stories but even then the stupid skool always chose the boring stories. and emphasized fruitless grammar. who cared? as long as we understand the story. and worse was science and math that had no story at all !!
her thoughts wandered from complaining about annoying skool... to one of the boys in her class room. they were in the same class for mrs. hepburn class of science- physics, which by the way is almost entirely more boring mathematics and equations. he sat far from her near the window. clair always tried to find the chair nearest to the door. even at the "dreadful cost" of being in the front row near the teachers. ugh. she knew his name: burt. yes every day at the time of attendance the teachers would say that name "burt butterell". burt would rais a hand. soon just hearing his name made her heart flutter. he was so so hot! she loved his dark hair. even from afar. she loved from near his choclat-brown eyes under that unique long uni-brow. his nose seemed too small for his face. the nostrils were like slits and never like that gross teen named brian, that had hairs dangling from his nose. not burt. burt always appeard with combed hair and as if no hair grew in his lovely nose.
she did not mind that burt had those braces wires in his mouth that zig and zag from oddly spaced teeth. some teeth extended lower than others or were "more inside" behind the bow of the teeth. that just proved that he cared enuf to make his teeth in a row.
clair turned to look at the pale green numbers on her digit clock. that clok was a gift from her frend ava. on her fifteenth birthday she had invited som frends, including the nerd liam, to a small party. ava and barrbra who each brought their rhyming boyfrends: ayden and brayden. however liam charlet clive and caden did not come despite her personally handing them the decorated invitations. she had not invited gross brian the hairy nose. worst of all her burt had not come. when she had handed him the colorful invitation he had been polite. "i am sorry that i cant come kuz i have..." she had not even heard his words... lost in those dreamy choclat eyes. you know what that means.
at the party each one gave her a small present. she loved ava's present the most this pink clock with pale green numbers. that showed the time 22:22 now.
oh why? when i think of that clock my mind goes to burt. he was not even at the party. she knew that she must sleep. but her mind kept returning to burt. she wrote a text message. hey burt now is all the same numbers 22:22 cool?" and send. too late she realized he would think that was not special because every day also had 11:11. and worse what if his clock showed "10:22" he would think she was a freak. she wanted him to notice her.
burt always sat by the window in mrs. hepburn class. her eyes were constantly jumping from the clok with the black hands that barely moved... to that window where burt sat. burt was always looking at the teacher as she talked. burt almost always wore jeans. once she was near enuf to see the symbol. it was not levi nor wranggler but some other symbol that she did not know.
his shirt was almost always had a soft color-collar and only 2 or 3 buttons near the neck. she wonderd why he liked that style? but they looked great on him. and each day he chose different color shirts with those pale blue jeans and black-labor shoes.
no.no she thought as she pressed her eyelids together she must sleep. the teachers would criticise her again for being drowsy in class. but she could not stop thinking about burt sitting beside the window... finally burt was talking to her and noticing her... a great dream interrupted by "beep beep beep" yikes! morning already.
another skool day... the windows were dark from clouds and she heard rain. she jumped from her bed and switched off the beeping before her mom "queen isabella" would shout at her... and another day began...
to be continued... chapter 2 at skool and the rebellion.
Friday, November 29, 2019
Thursday, November 28, 2019
the PROBLEM with names and a solution
the author name-problem and solutions
some talented people can think of a story, and also choose or generate the names of the characters in the story. for example "oliver and the sad day". but even they have several options for choosing the family name. and a list would help in several ways.
some names feel repetitive such as "alice allison" or "andy anderson" or "nevyl nevin" three letters is too much same, unless "cherry chesse" sounds different. skilled writers can generate names that initial letters match such as "cora clark" or better "cora colyer." but difficult to match many names. kate with? what starts with k?
a list of names will allow authors to match the names together and select ooptions: only first letter match "kate kudrow" or two letters "larry ladd" or "cherry chesse" or "grant-grover or grover grant".
others can think of story but feel "stuck" choosing any name. the PROBLEM is then they dont publish the story just kuz some wont like the name but a LIST as below is a solution they can choose which name FEELS good for the story.
STEP ONE
choose name: alan/alice then choose match from family list:
[future lists will suggest first names personal names]
list one: family names A->T.
Note almost all letters have five 5 options. i need help with i, q, and u.
alan+alden? 2. or alan+atkins etc. but asher+ash seeme too much same.
Alden, atkins, ambrose, angel, ash, axelrod,
basham, bedrosian, birmingham, brown, booker, butterell
carpenter, chabria. chesse. clark, colyer, cusack,
davies, denham, dowdall, duguid, durkin.
ebsen, elman, ennis, emyrs, evans.
fay, fisher, fox, franzl, fulton,
garden, genzel, givenchy, gladstein, gould, gunderson.
hanson, hart, heasman, hepburn, hill, hogarty, hudson.
ingman, ireland, isgar, ishiguro,
janes, jamrok, jekyl, jordan, jurow,
kalindjian, keen, king, kovacs, kunszt.
ladd, lennon, levin/e, lisman, lucken.
mather, mercer, milliken, moyer, muller.
naze, neal, nevin, noble, nuwirth.
obst, oke, ortiz, osgood, ott.
parisse, pelton, pill, porter, puhm.
quan
reed, rhys, richards, rose, rooney, ruben.
saadon, shaw, singer, sobel, sturup, sullivan.
tarnawsky, thorby-theo, tracy, tottman, trudel, turturici.
unger, and u? help...
some talented people can think of a story, and also choose or generate the names of the characters in the story. for example "oliver and the sad day". but even they have several options for choosing the family name. and a list would help in several ways.
some names feel repetitive such as "alice allison" or "andy anderson" or "nevyl nevin" three letters is too much same, unless "cherry chesse" sounds different. skilled writers can generate names that initial letters match such as "cora clark" or better "cora colyer." but difficult to match many names. kate with? what starts with k?
a list of names will allow authors to match the names together and select ooptions: only first letter match "kate kudrow" or two letters "larry ladd" or "cherry chesse" or "grant-grover or grover grant".
others can think of story but feel "stuck" choosing any name. the PROBLEM is then they dont publish the story just kuz some wont like the name but a LIST as below is a solution they can choose which name FEELS good for the story.
STEP ONE
choose name: alan/alice then choose match from family list:
[future lists will suggest first names personal names]
list one: family names A->T.
Note almost all letters have five 5 options. i need help with i, q, and u.
alan+alden? 2. or alan+atkins etc. but asher+ash seeme too much same.
Alden, atkins, ambrose, angel, ash, axelrod,
basham, bedrosian, birmingham, brown, booker, butterell
carpenter, chabria. chesse. clark, colyer, cusack,
davies, denham, dowdall, duguid, durkin.
ebsen, elman, ennis, emyrs, evans.
fay, fisher, fox, franzl, fulton,
garden, genzel, givenchy, gladstein, gould, gunderson.
hanson, hart, heasman, hepburn, hill, hogarty, hudson.
ingman, ireland, isgar, ishiguro,
janes, jamrok, jekyl, jordan, jurow,
kalindjian, keen, king, kovacs, kunszt.
ladd, lennon, levin/e, lisman, lucken.
mather, mercer, milliken, moyer, muller.
naze, neal, nevin, noble, nuwirth.
obst, oke, ortiz, osgood, ott.
parisse, pelton, pill, porter, puhm.
quan
reed, rhys, richards, rose, rooney, ruben.
saadon, shaw, singer, sobel, sturup, sullivan.
tarnawsky, thorby-theo, tracy, tottman, trudel, turturici.
unger, and u? help...
Sunday, November 17, 2019
my summary to replace bad series "jag" 1.16->21 end s1
continued from
https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2019/11/my-summary-to-replace-bad-series-jag-14.html
there
16 soldiers navy, jump from a plane. all open parachute except one who fell to death. he was son of politician. inv. why p. not open.
17 soldiers in nam shoot as hel. came to move them away from battle but rocket destroyd hel. dad wakes from nightmare hearing son reliving the battle in nightmare. can son be body of dead frend?
18 they exit sv kuz feul leak. but cable broke killing the escaping pilot. did the one to gain damage the cable?
19 he is in "chinese prison" following arrest. maybe his missing dad also same prison.
20 sailor cant say bye nor give jewelry to lady. next, a kid stole the j. chased kid until find corpse of dead sailor. inv murder . this one trained on the system that now took control of boat.
21 lady left boat. next morning after eggs find her stabbd. inv bla bla, end season.
https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2019/11/my-summary-to-replace-bad-series-jag-14.html
there
16 soldiers navy, jump from a plane. all open parachute except one who fell to death. he was son of politician. inv. why p. not open.
17 soldiers in nam shoot as hel. came to move them away from battle but rocket destroyd hel. dad wakes from nightmare hearing son reliving the battle in nightmare. can son be body of dead frend?
18 they exit sv kuz feul leak. but cable broke killing the escaping pilot. did the one to gain damage the cable?
19 he is in "chinese prison" following arrest. maybe his missing dad also same prison.
20 sailor cant say bye nor give jewelry to lady. next, a kid stole the j. chased kid until find corpse of dead sailor. inv murder . this one trained on the system that now took control of boat.
21 lady left boat. next morning after eggs find her stabbd. inv bla bla, end season.
Friday, November 15, 2019
game A-corner colors
if you know the game king corner it will be easy to learn this better game. if not, then this easy game.
preparation: remove the picture cards and jokers 14. remain 40. mix or shuffle.
give each player 5 cards from 40 same as fingers.
arrange the four 4 directions with one visible card for each direction. color does not matter unless advanced game. next post.
each player can lay one card, per turn, IF follows the visible card. 3 on 2 etc. or lay "a" the strong card in a corner. if no card to lay then the turn is take a card from pile. that is the turn must hold.
the first player empty cards wins. no dropping, to yu cheaters! sadly we need to see if the winner dropped cards.
preparation: remove the picture cards and jokers 14. remain 40. mix or shuffle.
give each player 5 cards from 40 same as fingers.
arrange the four 4 directions with one visible card for each direction. color does not matter unless advanced game. next post.
each player can lay one card, per turn, IF follows the visible card. 3 on 2 etc. or lay "a" the strong card in a corner. if no card to lay then the turn is take a card from pile. that is the turn must hold.
the first player empty cards wins. no dropping, to yu cheaters! sadly we need to see if the winner dropped cards.
the motivation to be a "bad wife"
ever since ancient times society has been BRIBING women to annoy their husbands with "money and severance packages" when they could send "my dauter back to me" dad return to dad if divorce with no bribe to motivate annoying her husband.'
for example the jew tradition called ktba is give money to women if divorce. what is alternative? if marriage "faild" or man died return to dad... instead bad relijin bribes women to annoy their husband until divorce so she can collect the money called ktuba she can only get the money if she annoys him enuf to cause him to get divorce. this bribe is disguised as "help the weak women" when she could come to me her dad and as pa I want to help her. instead the bad jew relijin offers her incentive and reward all she needs to do is act annoying enuf to get divorced and she collects her reward cash money.
our generation made the PRIZE BRIBE larger with monthly payments and other "severance package benefits" which will motivate anybody to get money by annoying and even hitting their husband.
we must be warned that in our society marriage is not only doomed because the lady has bribe to motivate her to annoy her man but also we must recognize and avoid marriage and weddings until society removs the prize for being annoying.
earlier generations could hit the woman when she was annoying but if we cant, then the marriage is domed because she wants to get her reward and easy to annoy her man.
Christianity removed the bribe by forbidding divorce as book said.
Anglican rejected pope for divorce truly rejecting book... unless claiming only resurection is a principle but the rest is not essential. if pope claimed essential rejected pope because less important and violat-able same as covering hair in Corinthians.
for example the jew tradition called ktba is give money to women if divorce. what is alternative? if marriage "faild" or man died return to dad... instead bad relijin bribes women to annoy their husband until divorce so she can collect the money called ktuba she can only get the money if she annoys him enuf to cause him to get divorce. this bribe is disguised as "help the weak women" when she could come to me her dad and as pa I want to help her. instead the bad jew relijin offers her incentive and reward all she needs to do is act annoying enuf to get divorced and she collects her reward cash money.
our generation made the PRIZE BRIBE larger with monthly payments and other "severance package benefits" which will motivate anybody to get money by annoying and even hitting their husband.
we must be warned that in our society marriage is not only doomed because the lady has bribe to motivate her to annoy her man but also we must recognize and avoid marriage and weddings until society removs the prize for being annoying.
earlier generations could hit the woman when she was annoying but if we cant, then the marriage is domed because she wants to get her reward and easy to annoy her man.
Christianity removed the bribe by forbidding divorce as book said.
Anglican rejected pope for divorce truly rejecting book... unless claiming only resurection is a principle but the rest is not essential. if pope claimed essential rejected pope because less important and violat-able same as covering hair in Corinthians.
my summary to replace bad series "jag" 1.4->15
must be replaced by short action sections. ep. 4 investigate murder but during peace, hence bad to involve military investigators kuz even a soldier is civilian not a soldier then.
5 jets fly from the aircraft carrier boat. the soldiers on the ground called "marines" practice aiming at the jets. the pilot flew very low, close to the ground. but the autopilot is not low enuf so he tries lower and crashed jet killing himself. inv will try to recreate whatever happened.
6 a long limo enters the gate of the am. embassy. a gaurd saw somebody running on the railing above the embassy. he fears assassin and mistakenly shoots a teen who dies. what does he deserve? we are not judge nor studied laws. so stupid.
7 gaurds stop a car and say we inspect. the suspicious driver crashed thru the barrier so the gaurds shoot pistols until the driver stops. they find a rocket launcher inside. inv. will inv the theft. plus prisoners escape taking a hostage. first story! d2brig.
new
8 a jeep gets lost in kuwait. iraqis shot one u-s soldier and captured the other for crossing the invisible border. american lawyers can... defend in iraq court haha absurd fiction.
9 find suicide dead from hanging in marine training investigate bla bla pretend to be a trainee in that unit to get info.
10 a girl runs out from her house and sees an unidentified aerial vehicle over an empty military base. it flew away with her, so claims dad.
11 during training to go from water to beach [amfibius] they find a wounded soldier. investigate bla bla.
12 a pilot destroyed a bosnian helicopter that violated no-fly de-militarized zone. they accuse him of violating cease-fire. he claims they shot... story shows guilty until proven innocent hence very bad. did prove no battle? the accuser lacks witness kuz other pilot "jet broke and fell in enemy land" or b shot down? and witness only words not facts could be mad at partner r favor.
13 a pilot lost navigation [near? bad story] and accidently flew near cuba when lightning ruind electronics and interfered with radio. two jets threaten to shoot if he will not landing. inv go cuba to get back jet and pilot before the cubans can copy the data and software and sell the data to iraq.
14 a spy succeeds at getting secret data... inside pentagon unlocking doors... absurd. a man shot her and must be stopped before assasinating a visiting official.
15 a shooting teacher shoots at a jeep to make it stop and argue with the officer who refused to discuss his assignment. he was "promised stateside". they accuse him of attempted murder but he is the expert at aiming.
but bad paper, also bad, as before write "already guilty" until proven innocent. must warn bad series and replace.
5 jets fly from the aircraft carrier boat. the soldiers on the ground called "marines" practice aiming at the jets. the pilot flew very low, close to the ground. but the autopilot is not low enuf so he tries lower and crashed jet killing himself. inv will try to recreate whatever happened.
6 a long limo enters the gate of the am. embassy. a gaurd saw somebody running on the railing above the embassy. he fears assassin and mistakenly shoots a teen who dies. what does he deserve? we are not judge nor studied laws. so stupid.
7 gaurds stop a car and say we inspect. the suspicious driver crashed thru the barrier so the gaurds shoot pistols until the driver stops. they find a rocket launcher inside. inv. will inv the theft. plus prisoners escape taking a hostage. first story! d2brig.
new
8 a jeep gets lost in kuwait. iraqis shot one u-s soldier and captured the other for crossing the invisible border. american lawyers can... defend in iraq court haha absurd fiction.
9 find suicide dead from hanging in marine training investigate bla bla pretend to be a trainee in that unit to get info.
10 a girl runs out from her house and sees an unidentified aerial vehicle over an empty military base. it flew away with her, so claims dad.
11 during training to go from water to beach [amfibius] they find a wounded soldier. investigate bla bla.
12 a pilot destroyed a bosnian helicopter that violated no-fly de-militarized zone. they accuse him of violating cease-fire. he claims they shot... story shows guilty until proven innocent hence very bad. did prove no battle? the accuser lacks witness kuz other pilot "jet broke and fell in enemy land" or b shot down? and witness only words not facts could be mad at partner r favor.
13 a pilot lost navigation [near? bad story] and accidently flew near cuba when lightning ruind electronics and interfered with radio. two jets threaten to shoot if he will not landing. inv go cuba to get back jet and pilot before the cubans can copy the data and software and sell the data to iraq.
14 a spy succeeds at getting secret data... inside pentagon unlocking doors... absurd. a man shot her and must be stopped before assasinating a visiting official.
15 a shooting teacher shoots at a jeep to make it stop and argue with the officer who refused to discuss his assignment. he was "promised stateside". they accuse him of attempted murder but he is the expert at aiming.
but bad paper, also bad, as before write "already guilty" until proven innocent. must warn bad series and replace.
Saturday, November 9, 2019
my summary to replace bad series "jag"
jag-off-ic-ers, the action to replace and warn about the bad series jag.
summary of 1-7
first episode called "pilot" summary and warning: pilots fly jets to the zone of "no fly" demilitarize and go to shoot two jets violators. the navigator prepared the missile but the pilot ordered not to use it. he moves near the mig and shoots a missile. the second mig chased him and the helper jet fails to chase it away so he spins and oops magicaly the mig passes so he shoots it with guns.
both she and pilot get praise destroying the violation jets but she gets pushed off the boat that carries jets by unknown hands. the internal investigators must discover why she died and if pushed into sea. they catch somebody between admitting they dont know who did it, and before finding evidence that points at the suspect. so stupid series. only select action here so this replaces bad series. ah and the wording on the cover even worse to sway the reader that us navy is guilty of crimes. and other mistakes so i must replace.
2 a submarine follows a test target. the test-torpedo follows the target but then the developer sends it to threaten citizens kuz wants money, so how will the inv. trick him? he tricked the navy to use only he control.
3 practicing artillery, a soldier instructs wrong coordinates. the bomb kills and injures people. the inv. will see what happened... and the writers will pretend to be judges misusing the safety of fiction to sway the viewers i mean most humans will be swayed by the injected ideas that the actors as judge and lawyer say. terrible trick. only action select kuz the writers are not judges nor should they pretend to be nor try to sway viewers from the camaflage of fiction.
so only action here to replace series named jag beware.
another flaw is the bad decision. when pilot has the option of chase missile it seems destructive to risk entire jet and crew to get near enough to use cheaper missile and gun. if goal is not to use expensive missile then risked entire jet! no punishment for reckless risk when had option. and that is supposedly the judges series.
must be replaced by short action seections.
4 investigate murder bla bla bla
5 jets fly from the aircraft carrier boat. the soldiers on the ground called "marines" practice aiming at the jets. the pilot flew very low, close to the ground. but the autopilot is not low enuf so he tries lower and crashed. inv will try to recreate whatever happened.
6 a long limo enters the gate of an embassy. the gaurd saw somebody running on the railing above the embassy. he fears assassin and mistakenly shoots a child. what does he deserve? we are not judge nor studied laws. so stupid.
7 gaurds stop a car and say we inspect. the suspicious driver crashed thru the barrier so the gaurds shoot pistols until the driver stops they find a rocket launcher inside. inv. will try to discover whatever happened.
t.b.c.
summary of 1-7
first episode called "pilot" summary and warning: pilots fly jets to the zone of "no fly" demilitarize and go to shoot two jets violators. the navigator prepared the missile but the pilot ordered not to use it. he moves near the mig and shoots a missile. the second mig chased him and the helper jet fails to chase it away so he spins and oops magicaly the mig passes so he shoots it with guns.
both she and pilot get praise destroying the violation jets but she gets pushed off the boat that carries jets by unknown hands. the internal investigators must discover why she died and if pushed into sea. they catch somebody between admitting they dont know who did it, and before finding evidence that points at the suspect. so stupid series. only select action here so this replaces bad series. ah and the wording on the cover even worse to sway the reader that us navy is guilty of crimes. and other mistakes so i must replace.
2 a submarine follows a test target. the test-torpedo follows the target but then the developer sends it to threaten citizens kuz wants money, so how will the inv. trick him? he tricked the navy to use only he control.
3 practicing artillery, a soldier instructs wrong coordinates. the bomb kills and injures people. the inv. will see what happened... and the writers will pretend to be judges misusing the safety of fiction to sway the viewers i mean most humans will be swayed by the injected ideas that the actors as judge and lawyer say. terrible trick. only action select kuz the writers are not judges nor should they pretend to be nor try to sway viewers from the camaflage of fiction.
so only action here to replace series named jag beware.
another flaw is the bad decision. when pilot has the option of chase missile it seems destructive to risk entire jet and crew to get near enough to use cheaper missile and gun. if goal is not to use expensive missile then risked entire jet! no punishment for reckless risk when had option. and that is supposedly the judges series.
must be replaced by short action seections.
4 investigate murder bla bla bla
5 jets fly from the aircraft carrier boat. the soldiers on the ground called "marines" practice aiming at the jets. the pilot flew very low, close to the ground. but the autopilot is not low enuf so he tries lower and crashed. inv will try to recreate whatever happened.
6 a long limo enters the gate of an embassy. the gaurd saw somebody running on the railing above the embassy. he fears assassin and mistakenly shoots a child. what does he deserve? we are not judge nor studied laws. so stupid.
7 gaurds stop a car and say we inspect. the suspicious driver crashed thru the barrier so the gaurds shoot pistols until the driver stops they find a rocket launcher inside. inv. will try to discover whatever happened.
t.b.c.
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