c2, abram

chapter TWOa 2a #abraham

intro: the purpose of this version is not merely to tell abraham's story in a way that is easier to read than religious books but also emphasizes that "jesus never said that he quoted from book genesis by name" nor that it was holy nor true. no "foundation can be established except by jesus" who did not say book genesis was holy nor true therefore "others' cant and could not "include" genesis. 

in fact when he quoted things SIMILAR to genesis the words DIFFER! he was not quoting book genesis nor say he was quoting genesis nor that it was holy nor true. the jews and catholics who included genesis were EXCLUDED from establishing anything as above only jesus establishes and did not say these were holy. the story of abraham is in acts but we must not use genesis so i select for you without the harmful ideas in genesis. 

if you did not read chapter 1, 2, still this story is independent so after this story is a link. note: it seems long 200 words but selected from 600 words the part about abraham without dry names.
STORY: Abram went to live by Hebron [source 13/18 this name place was influenced by the true history of the sons of israel moving to hebron from shechem 12/6 where they had purchased homes and built stone homes and dwelled, to hebron where they purchased homes and built stone homes], where he stood his tents. There he built an altar to yahweh.

Abram heard that his relative Lot got taken captive 14/14 from sodom, by the king of Elam and his three allies. aybraym led around three hundred trained servants born in his home. they chased the army. at night, the rescuers attacked. Elam fled so he led the chase north of Damascus. He recovered all the property and his relative Lot and women and the other people.

Abram returned so kings came to greet him. one gave bread and wine and blessed Abram. abram only kept that which his men PLURAL (names too not "one" servant as rabbis lied) had eaten and the share of his men for them but gave the king everything. [if so how could he give a tenth? oops. he did not consider it his. if he gave it back then it was theirs so he cant give a tenth from others' property whether the king or his "men".] in this story religions have two errors that i noticed: "Kedorlaomer" was the leader not as rabbis lied to me. 2, not "in the thirteenth year" does not translate source is bad translation. this section does not "fill" a common chapter so the ndxt section is section 2b.

STORY:  Abram had a treaty with three amorites 14/13. he saw yahweh in a vision 15/1 and prayed to get a child as an heir. he heard yahweh reply that the one exiting SINGULAR from sara and from your body will inherit you. he carried abram out and said, “Look up at the sky and count the stars, such will be your seed.” Abram believed so he considered it for him righteousness 15/6. He heard yahweh say, “I am yahweh and you will get buried at a good old age."

now he doubted and yahweh knew his thoughts and said, "you have sinned but i did not want blood [isaiah 1] your family will be slaves and pained many years. the fourth generation in your family will return here [um... how many generations in egypt?]. i prohibit slavery so I will punish whoever enslaves your children who will go out with many possessions. the sun set and darkness came, a smoking fire oven and a blazing torch appeared and passed between two tents to choose him as the ancestor of jaqob. then the vision ended so he awoke.

to be continued.

for chapter 1 see link

https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/12/the-story-of-abraham-chapters-1-and-2.html

there.

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doc leroy's gal pal part 3

 parallel to part two "happily ever after" with better details.
doc leroy's gal pal
doc leroy noticed that his gal pal had a pattern. on the day she cried he asked "what did i do that caused you to cry". she sobbed "it isnt something you did. it is the situation. in our world our daughter will use her privates before wedding!" so he held her as she sobbed.
he recalled the order of her variying emotions this month same as last month... the same order! it seemed she was responding each time to situations but situations are random! her emotions were in order. he remembered a smily day and the next day excited joy and dancing around the home even during the burden of chores. the next day stress lasting a week... due to stressful things then a day of anger and the next day she cried. this had repeated itself again this month too!
the following day doc noticed she was showing stress. "what are you thinking about?" the mortgage how will you handle that huge debt while so many other expenses i feel guilty that i bought clothes!" doc answered you can choose not to buy clothes. she iwas silent and continued the chores showing stress. doc ,arked each day of stress. on the third day he saked "i recall you were worried about society and premarital stress..." but she interrupted that is not important i worry about the expenses of food and kid clothing and the huge debt on the home.
doc noted that the same concern did not concern her anymore.
finally the smily day came. leroy predicted it would be followed by a dancing day... so he asked what she was smiling about? she said yesterday your son got a b minus that is above average so i have hope for his future." that seemed odd since he wanted a's in the big picture other countries such as korea japan and china were emphasizing science and math while here in u.s. they spend too much time on literatue and religion how can we compete.
leroy pricked her arm and got blood. "OWW! that hurt!" she scowled. he said just a tiny prick kuz i am a doctor.
he analyzed the blood and noticed which hormones everything was in normal range... but which was higher?
the following day she was very cheerful and danced around the kitchen humming as she stirred the pots and flipped the pancakes and washed dishes.
"what are you thinking" asked the doc. "i finally told our daughter to save her privates same as i did not to use it for inserting until a guy actually wed her." max the son said "yup if i give her a gold ring that will pay her for sex".
she ignored him but doc raised his eyebros he was correct! women marry "for stability" is exactly the same as whores for money.
again he pricked her.
she ognored it and served the pancakes which the brats thanked her for and gobbled eagerly.
that day he analyzed the blood and noticed which hormone was lower than yesterday but it was the same except one was a bit more.
 the next day she showed stress. "are you thinking about the dents and mortgage?" she replied "yes and credit cards" he tried to comfort her he had a doctor salary. "even that can barely cover the expenses and i regret buying that dress last month". leroy reminded her "remember my daughter agreed to wait for sex?" she replied annoyed "dont tell me how to feel."
by the next day he had finished mimicing the hormone of the smile day. as she rushed to serve the porridge with honey doc grabbed her arm. "your blood test had a problem you need a vitamin boost". she tried to pull away "not now" but he was stronger and injected the hormone. when she finished dumping the porridge the hormone reached her brain and she was already smiling, she said "you got a b plus on your test you are improving" to his son.
it seemed to be responding to that mempry and sitation but he knew it was the hormone he had just injected. he said "that mortgage is adding so much interest money" she replied "that is less than your doc salary". he noted the same thing that had not calmed her yesterday now calmed her. he knew the hormone had effect.
he worked on the hormone that was higher on dance day. by the day of anger the artificial mimic was prepared.
he waited for her ANGER on schedule based on the number of days and it came... "you ignored me last night! i was in the mood of seks and you ignored me" doc defended himself "you think i can read minds. TALK if you want seks." she yelled "you dont understand me" as she dumped frozen waffles on the tray for the oven, i will apologize soon but first take your vitamin. he grabbed her arm... she yelled no! i am trying to nake breakfast. doc could not wait he needed her to be cjeerful before the kids went to school to improve the KIDS emption and study potential... he must and ignoring her will jabbed the injection in her muscle. "ow that hirt" she hollered as he pressed the needle and tried to hold her steady. he freed it and said "trust me i am a doctor" she growled but less angry "not now."
as predicted by the time she was serving the waffles she was dancing around the kitchen.
"i apologize for ignoring you last night" she replied well you are not a mind reader and i want sex now".
the brats giggled and son said "i wanna watch". gal pal giggled.
the brats went to scool but he stayed home for her physical need.
knowing the next day would be a cry day... should he inject and prevent the cry? no. he must interrupt.
the following morning she woke him crying. "i think she lied she will use her privates in ninth grade" the needle was ready. "we can discuss this after breakfast" she considered crying tears and talking about immorality as he jabbed the needle.
"take your vitamin a" he lied. she submitted trusting the doc who had taken her blood in the pricks she recalled.
by the time she went down to breakfast she was dancing around the kitched and announced pancakes again the brats cheered not knowing she had been crying a moment ago and forgetting the last two cycles which was on schedule for today.
from then he knew which day to inject her based on her schedule and told men the hormone worked when wifey is angry bring them in.
his buddies obeyed and broought their wives when they were angry. he took a blood sample and noticed that despite te hormones in range the one that he had isolated was low. so he lied "your vitamin is low and need a certain one. he injected her. and sold two sets one for crying days aand one for angry days.
a week later he got feedback. his buddies wifey had been crying so he urged her to take vitamin "b" and she calmed within minutes she was dancing. when she was yelling and angry he gave vitamin 'a" and soon she was smiling. he bought several packets and responded to wifey's emotion and told his buddies who brought their wives in when they were angry or sobbing. each one he checked the blood and the pattern was true so he injected and sold the two "kits" and the husband would lie "it is the day tor your vitamin so we wil talk in half hour" to their joy a half hour later she had stopped sobbing or anger and did not wannna talk anyway what a relief.
he sold so much as men saw the success and his money jumped he paid the mortdage early and many men lived happily ever after as even the wives admitted "those vitamins make me feel better."
the happy ending... as long as they think it is vitamins.

the story of abraham chapters 1 to 1c

abram's story #abraham 

intro: the New Testament started by mentioning abram by the word "bible" which is the first word in the New Testament. yes the word bible is in the bible, the first word in the New Testament. 

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STORY; what was the story of abraham ?

we must START with the version in acts 7/2-4:

CHAPTER ONE: "when Abraham [with ' curve on left for h] our father was in "Mesopotamia," God of glory appeared to him, before he lived in Karran. God said, ‘Leave [3] your country and your family. go to the land I will show you.' [note the original lacked the word birth place yet he fixed it anyway! because "your" country.]

abram left [4] the land of the "Chaldeans" and settled in Karran. After the death of his father, he [not niv false addition "God sent"] moved to this land where you are now living." by the jordan river.

story TWO=1b: second for the purpose of the question above which religion motivated, we can edit the "story of abram's father" for the purpose of answering the question.

despite the contrast that a story about guys fishing could be more interesting than this UNEVENTFUL travel story... religion caused people to ask about abram so i provide a "more specific answer" in a version easier to read than the religious book... WAIT... is genesis a holy book?

jesus "never said that he quoted from book genesis by name" nor that it was holy nor true. no "foundation can be established except by jesus" who did not say book genesis was holy nor true. so others can't nor could "include" genesis.

in fact when he quoted things SIMILAR to genesis the words DIFFER! he was not quoting book genesis nor say he was quoting "book genesis by name" nor that it was holy nor true. the jews and catholics who included genesis were EXCLUDED from establishing anything as above only jesus establishes, not catholics nor jew rabbis. jesus did not say book genesis was holy nor true. the story of abraham is in acts but we must not use genesis so i select for you without the harmful ideas in the "external" book genesis. 

when luther excluded some of the catholic books he should have noticed that jesus never said genesis was a holy book and that the similar "selections" differ from hebrew genesis which was not his source, but some other book not preserved except by the few bits he quoted.

chapter 1b

SETTING: when? the end of the egyptian SEVENTEENTH  dynasty

where? in Mesopotamia [source book acts as above. m' means between two rivers tigris, euphrates]

STORY: in Ur, Abram started his life in his mother's womb. he was born and later wed Sarai 11/29 who could not get pregnant. Abram, his father Tayray, his wife Sarai and Lot his orphan nephew [son of brother] traveled [11/31] from Ur the land of his [abram] birth. they came to Karran, and they settled there until Tayray died in Karran.

Abram and Sarai went [12/4] as the gods sent him wandering [g. 20/13]. his nephew Lot went [12/5] with him from Karran [moledet? place of birth? i must edit this flaw too. luckily the new testament fixed this in book acts chapter seven as above], to the land of Knan. At that time the Canaanites were in [did not say kings they were merely inside] the land. Abram traveled through the land to skaym [Shechem, source 12/6 this name place was influenced by the true history of the sons of israel moving to shechem where they had purchased homes and built stone homes and dwelled]. he built an altar there to yahweh, 12/7 who had appeared to him. He begged help from yahweh saying one hundred words. after that he added praise saying five hundred words 11/11. he said more prayers on other days: begged 135 words and praise 403 words. begged 130 words and praised 403 words totaling 533 words. [try to add the following numbers to find the total words:] begged 134 words and praised 430 words.

begged 130 words and praised 209 words.

begged 132 words [11/20] and praised 207 words [11/21].

begged 130 words and praised 200 words.

begged 129 words and praised 119 words.

begged 170 words and praised 205 words [11/32]. From there he went to the hill east of Bet el [12/8]. he raised his tent. he built an altar to the Lord and called the name yahweh. Abram continued traveling to Negev.

t.b.c. below.

SUMMARY: until the famine, we see the only "activity" is traveling and building altars. only religion caused people to read such an uneventful story. its division in two chapters served the purpose of hiding some flaws which i needed to edit. this gathered from chapters 11 and 12 from the different external book genesis.

this story also has the weakness of "not owning" i mean he "came from far away" and traveled by "tent" and nomadically "moved". did the story say he "purchased land" anywhere? this is a weakness anybody can claim "i heard god tell me that god gave me land" but the other people would not give me land just kuz a book said "god gave me". also his son ishmael would by law inherit the land "given to abraham" so claiming the land is for abraham is a weakness for sons of israel, since the land was promised to jacob that should be the basis of the claim and edit the weakness. even that was in a dream. what about a group of magi prophesying to a group of witnesses? that was not even claimed. so the ownership must not be based on anybody claiming god said when we cant check if god said nor on a dream but instead based on the history of king solomon and perhaps earlier ownership by israelites.

the true history was that the family of israel and its ancestors had always lived by the jordan river. the true history "children of israel buying homes and building homes in shechem" now called nablus influenced the story to contain that name place. they built stone homes on empty unused land to claim it for themselves as the family grew. the same in hebron which influenced the story to mention hebron.

1c Abram and pharo

intro: pharo was the title of kings starting in a certain dynasty around 1500b.c. before that the kings were called kings so we can understand that the authors were preserving their faith that abraham went when the title pharo was used.

STORY: in the days of pharo ahmose [18 dynasty, at thebes c.1530bc 3551 years ago], a severe famine struck Abram's region [12/10], west from the jordan river, so he went toward Egypt. a man came with his wife into Egypt. pharo killed him to take his widow to avoid violating their marriage. God inflicted big illness [12/17] on ahmose for killing. he announced he would never kill a man to take the widow. when abraham entered egypt he heard this. Pharaoh’s officials saw her and praised her to Pharaoh who took her. abram said, "she is my sister" 12/19 [flaw egyptian kings wed sister so claiming sister did not exclude wife], so paro treated Abram well for her sake,

That first night after supper, Yahweh God caused deep sleep 2/21 on pharo. Yahweh appeared [18/1] to ahmose, and said, 'she is Abram’s wife." Pharaoh summoned Abram, and said, 'Why didn’t you tell me she was your wife? I took her like a wife. go with your wife.' 

Abram purchased sheep [12/16] and cattle, camels and donkeys. pharo gave aybraym male and female slaves. abram lived in the capital city thebes until he heard the famine ended. [kamose pa of ahmose had expelled hyksos1600bc but not conquer their capital avaris. ahmose battled hyksos and c. 1530 bc destroyed avaris in the east delta of nile. he chased them east conquering the jordan river region].

Abram, his wife and Lot left egypt [13/1] and went near Bet el where he had built an altar. There Abram called the name yahweh. 

Abram had livestock, silver and gold. Lot, who was with Abram, also had flocks and herds and tents. the land [grass] could not support them [both flocks grazing] together. their herders argued. Abram said to Lot, “go apart, if you go left, I’ll go right and if you go right, I’ll go left.” Lot chose watered land like the land of Egypt. he went east from his relative. Abram stayed but Lot's tents were by cities by Sodom, where its men were sinning 13/13 greatly against the Lord. [sodomy is men using the sewage exit from a man for inserting. i ask using the sewage exit of a female is the same action, so same sin?] Abram went to live by Hebron [source 13/18 this part was influenced by the true history of the sons of israel moving from shechem where they dwelled. later they purchased homes and built stone homes in hebron], where he stood his tents. There he built an altar to yahweh.

to be continued.

note: chapter 13 until abraham's relative is 700 words but the events of abrahams story are 130 words with 500 words that distract from the theme of abram story with dry names. the story in egypt had a bad message that i needed to edit.

the new administrative map [for fiction spy sam part 3]

rows of blocks along latitude starting with the block of ex-Switzerland 42n to 52n and also ten degrees longitude with varying thickness parallel to the longitude lines as above. borders: 3e-13e and 3e-7w etc. and 13e-23e etc. including redividing china and deleting past province-division

credit https://www.mapsofworld.com/lat_long 

but with my additions

sam the spy part 3

sam the spy part 3

contnuity: spy sam of u.s.cia was on the trail of aron. the flying crime boss with a criminal air force one plane. his partner mike of fbi had finally found that aron never left his jet home in the air!

story part 3

mike used fbi authority to demand he land for questioning. aron lied that he would obey but simply did not. fbi cooperted with air force who follow the jet and they discovered it was doing arial refueling using several civilian companies separate from aron's airlines. fbi demanded the usaf shoot it down but the general refused to shoot a civilian jet.

sam's plan was better. mike contacted him by video chat to plan a bank robbery in mexico. a major bank. aron flew over the border and thinking himself safe in mexico finally landed. spy sam led a cia field unit to confiscate and study aron's jet. aron was released and went with mike to rob the bank. sam himself rode a motorbike from the airport where his crew was inspecting the jet and its hidden compartments, to arrest mike and aron. while the trembling teller man was dumping paper dollars ibnto ron's leather bag sam entered. mike aimed his gun at sam! did he want the money? aron said in spanish to keep loading the bag and added in english "surrender to mike". sam ignored him and mike's pointed pistol... sam used his rifle to shoot aron who fell dead. mike lowered his gun and returned the money to the bank. they carried the corpse to the van, that mike drove to the airport where they searched the corpse, removing weapons and money and electronic data devices. they found that sam had shot him with a hollow bullet that injected poison. they put the corpse in a wood coffin and in a pile of wood crates. only after the coffin was loaded did sam tell that the poison was sleeping chemical and he would awake in the wood coffin for questioning back in u.s. 

***mission accomplished. 

sam asked for re-assignment to investigate the mysterious death in briton but was denied due to the risk he might die there. at least sam plan had worked for the capture and questioning of aron.

during sam's mission the microbot 2 were doubling rapidly as they digested the iron microbots and grew and split and spread soon the number doubled enough to spread significantly filling province after empty province once the deadly ones were chased away the rich chinese left the bunkers and hired chinese americans to meet charter jets that flew from china to the california coast loaded with people, refueled and continued to brazil for the africa mission. they started military training aiming artillery and coastal guns to prevent western colonialism.

during this training the microbots from briton had ended everyone in briton and spread to france. from the east the bots had advanced into the balkans and spread death toward switzerland. the robots had found them but could not stop their advance westward and now the brit ones were advancing eastward. themany countries were doomed. nato nuclr weapons were useless against the chinese microbot that the spies did not know about kuz chinese government did not know about except li the enginner and programmer.

al the neo nazi had a new scheme. while the harvest bots were hunting and absorbing the blood bots, and multiplying and doubling and spreading to replace the blood bots in china... the bots were still in africa. they searched until they could not find survivors to obey the program. also no blood anywhere nearby to attract them north along the nile sea coast which was the nile continents north coast.

they started buying advertisements to jews andnegros urging the "you jews and negroes who always preserved your identity now have opportunity to return to your calm peaceful homeland without fear from arab neighbors nor riots nor african warl ords the danger is ended we offer cheap transportatiion home from east coast ports. the neonazis and zionists funded the ships. neo nazi priority meant the crew must be negro and only if they preserved the afrian identity which almist all did.

they al and isac also bribed christian preists and pastors to urge africans and jewws to return to the homeland. jon held fundraisers in the hope that those traditional cnseervatives would leave so the democratic dncc wouldhave a majorty in every state.

the boats filled with negroes who poured out of every city to the cheap boat ride on huge grain boats transformed into rows of passenger rooms and toilets one in each four person room. inded the truth was no more deaths in africa and no danger from warlords nor slavery by landowners. although the death had truly stopped that was due to the lack of human blood to harvest. when the bats of negroes arrived they fed the bots. no crew surviveed for the return trip as the neo nazis had planned and they sent "email messages" to relatives explaining the vast empty cities with plumbing and "infrastructure" in existing cities now empty with plenty of space.

the demand increased and many shipping companies that could no longer ship products to asia and africa where no consumers remained, transformed their ships from cargo to passenger ships and sold tickets. the overbooking was so great that the neo nazis seemed justified in demanding the crew be negro travelers who wanted to go home rather than the company crew. only one negro with naval experience would guide the crew.

millions of negroes poured out of american cities to return to the safe homeland africa now that the evil leaders had died... but the bots were still there... so the arrivals died.

month after month joyful emails arrived encouraging the zionistic return to the homeland origin roots in africa... until the elections.

to jon's horror the negroes had been voting dnc and now that millions had left each state the results were almost entirely rnc! even in california and new york states. jon felt so angry, that his plan for dnc had failed that he shot himself. the rnc understood that this served their purpose to get elected and did not interfere with the personal choice of exodus back home as long as they were not permitted to vote from overseas.

in china, they began its plan and made its first "new map" dividing europe into large zones based objectively on the brit system of latitude and longitude. starting from 8 degrees east longitude and 47 degrees north latitude, the chinese map measured a chunk 5 degrees in each direction so the new countries were blocks from 3 east to 13 degrees east and continuing east and to the coast in rows reaching over the french coast from 3 east to 5 degrees west longitude. in area the block included ten degrees of latitude from 42n to 52 n in rows extending north in blocks in rows across the ural and nile continents. see map.

the separate country borders of europe etc. can be ignored now that the humans were extinct there. the new administration would repopulate the cities once the bot2-s replaced the deadly bots. the new local government would have administrative borders under china based on objective latitude and longitude. any city on a border line, for example 13e muse be demolished and erased to prevent doubt who would administer it. 

the same system of rows extended in the division of the nile continent into rows of administrative units with plans for coastal defense and guns to prevent colonialism. the lines of border extended from 3e to 13e row after row southward 42n-32n and 32n-22n and 22n to 12n and 12nto 2n and the same in the south hemisphere new rows of blocks for administration and any town on the border line must be demolished to prevent doubt of administration.

china published its new map for europe which "offended" americans who were powerless and who knew the few europeans surviving would soon be "too dead" to protest the new borders in europe and africa. for equality china also redivided its administrative borders replacing the division by provinces to objective parallel lines in china and in new china that extended southward to the chang sea which wrapped along china east coast by chang jiang river and south coast including tigris river. no tiny countries south of the nan river nor south of the chang river! no tiny countries along the danube river region.

those who emphasized their african identity were urged to "return home" now that no danger. they would seem like hypocrits to emphasize african identity and not want to go on a cheap boat ride home now that they were not "refugees" from the dangers in africa.

isac also bribed televangelists to spread the message of safety and the end of death and of danger in africa and the idea of zionism to jews and africans in u.s. the neo nazi fund provided the cheap boat tickets discounted by funding for their harmful purpose of causing death of jews and negroes. the plan worked for millions of negroes but jews only say "next year in jerusalem" as a meaningless ceremony with no intention to obey the ancient text. happily for neo nazis the millions of jews in israel with their "racial purity" and infant circumcision injury were extinct along with the evil female genital mutilation culture. the difference between the two is not enough to redeem either evil cut culture plus since talking cannot sway cold hearted jews to prevent the harm, those willing to murder brought the benefit of less harm to infants by offering cheap boat tickets also to jews to bot land by the jordan river but their plan failed because jews dont intend to go to jerusalem even while reading the phrase "next year in jerusalem" kuz each year next never comes.

instead the negroes who preserved their african identity hoped to return to a safe africa with no cruel humans. the demand was huge so boats were overbooked so the crews were replaced by travelers. mail programs sent joyful messages from the travelers email, "we live safely and spaciously in empty cities" which the arrivals could not send due to the bots eating the iron in their red blood cells. at least in china the blood bots were defeated but the distance was vast for the new harvest bots to reach africa. so the scheme continued and continued...

when the bots reached switzerland they did li went down the mountain to see when they arrived. he was confident that the program copied to exclude his cells. he waited patietly while arranging supplies for his town up the muntain. when the people around him started dying, he released harvest bots in switzerland to patrol the new borders of 3e-13e. his airline brought adminstrators who were chinese americans hired to administer the new borders. once the region was renamed zone "34" the first digit of each coordinate he sent bots to harvest the rest of europe.

they signalled that carnovorous animals were hyper breeding from eating millions of corpses so li made hunt bots with radio to estimate and kill almost every carnivore including cats dogs and all snakes and pests. they would zap the dog or wolf dead and harvest its corpse for carbon fuel to continue patrolling and zapping. the program had an immediate phase one reduction of estimating each day and hunting dead by zap 90% of the carnivors in each administrative zone.

li also deployed harvest microbots on the south coast of the nile sea to start hunting and digesting the blood bots. each day he watched the slow progress despite multiplying and doubling.

the administrators and border gunners had trained enough for the coastal defense of zones 27, 17, 227,37 etc. but the bloodbots were still there.

to be continued.

fixing story in genesis chapter12, 13, 14

fixing story in genesis chapter12, nearly 500 words of flaws to fix and retell. 

WAIT... is genesis a holy book?

jesus "never said that he quoted from book genesis by name" nor that it was holy nor true. no "foundation can be established except by jesus" who did not say book genesis was holy nor true. so others cant "decide" to include genesis.

in fact when he quoted things SIMILAR  to genesis the words DIFFER! he was not quoting book genesis nor say he was quoting "book genesis by name" nor that it was holy nor true. the jews and catholics who included genesis were EXCLUDED from establishing anything as above only jesus establishes, not catholics nor jew rabbis. jesus did not say book genesis was holy nor true. the story of abraham is in acts but we must not use genesis so i select for you without the harmful ideas in the "external" book genesis. when luther excluded some of the catholic books he should have notuced that jesus never said genesis was a holy book.
continuing from chapter one at
https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/11/critique-of-genesis-with-solution.html
there.

__chapter 2; "yahweh blessed all nations on earth by the children of israel. sisur from the tribe efrayim went to skaym [Shechem 12/6] with his wife. her ma age 75 traveled with them and her nephew. they traveled without the many possessions to avoid slow travel. instead they sold all the animals and bought small gold rings with gems. sisur had made a man who was their servant named eliezer. in shechem they sold the jewelry in exchange for land and a home. he built an altar there and burnt a flour offering to yahweh. sisur went alone to Bet el. he assembled his tent. There he built another altar. a severe famine hit shechem. no rain so no grain so sisur took his family to Egypt. [note: does this seem long? admittedly uneventful 125 words+184+26=335 words selecting story to fix many more 1520 words of problems.

the only reason to read such an UNEVENTFUL travel story is if you are fooled it is a holy religious story. ***wouldnt you rather read the previous three summaries? about exciting books. after them i continue: STORY: sisur took his family to Egypt. Pharaoh’s officials saw his wife and praised her to Pharaoh 12/15 who took her. he gave slaves to sisur who purchased sheep, cattle, camels and donkeys.
after a dream, Pharaoh called him and said, 'Why didn’t you tell me she was your wife? I took her like a wife. take your wife and go home.' Pharaoh's men sent them home in that city. he dwelled there until he heard that food was common in shechem. Then he, his wife and kaleb went [13/1] to the place by Bet el where he had built an altar. There he called the name yahweh. he had livestock, silver and gold. kaleb, who was with him, also had flocks and herds and tents. the land [grass] could not support them [both flocks grazing] together. their herders argued. Sisur said to kaleb, “go apart, If you go left, I’ll go right and if you go right, I’ll go left.” kaleb chose watered land like the land of Egypt. he went east from his relative. his tents were by Ai, where its men were sinning 13/13 greatly against the Lord.

chapter THREE 3

Sisur went to live by Hebron, where he stood his tents. There he built an altar to yahweh. He heard that his relative got taken captive 14/14 by a neighbor king. he led around three hundred trained soldiers of his city. they chased the army. at night, the rescuers attacked. the captors fled so he led the chase north of Damascus. He recovered all the property and his relative and women and the other people. he returned from defeating the four allied kings 14/1 who had defeated the army of five kings. kings came to greet him and gave bread and wine.

to be continued.

the exciting ending of book hobbit 1937

the exciting ending of:

book hobbit 1937

__dragon attack and war
continuity: dwarves went on a mission to reclaim their mountain kingdom with its treasure... from the deadly dragon smaug. after they and bilbo a species called hobbit, had dangerous adventures with various magical creatures and giant spiders they came to humans who helped the dwarves prepare to continue their quest.

the dwarves opened the secret door to the cave in the dwarves' mountain. Bilbo and the dwarves enterd. bilbo saw smaug and "silently" like a burglar, took some precious gems from the treasure, for thorin. Bilbo had taken as his portion the Arkenstone, that Thorin "wanted most". Bilbo wore an armor coat, forged by elves, of a material called mithril.

___the exciting CONCLUSION: 

they closed the door just in time for dragon smaug to smash [12] the mountainside. rocks fell. bilbo took his portion: arkenstone [13]. dwarvs came n wore gold armor. then they came out the other side of the mountain, because dragon will return and expel them. in the lake town, [14] Watchers saw orange, far away so they warnd the town. 

the deadly dangerous dragon, Smaug appeared. the humans saw n feared him and threw water on thatch roofs... which would not help. Smaug flew and blew blazing FIRE down burning homes and humans. the victims shot arrows at it... fruitlessly. a "little birdy told" bard where to shoot smaug. 

he saw the reflection of hard gems and aimed for the gap, shot n killd the dragon. it fell and crushed more homes. smaug's death squirm destroyed more homes. [changed in video to splash in water].

The survivors tell about Smaug's death. the elves came to help the humans demand a portion of the treasure.

they said we deserve for their action to kill the dragon and for building new wood replacement homes. for this Bard tried to convince Thorin [c15]. when the dwarf king refused to give a fair portion for the dragon slayer, elves began a siege against the dwarves. Bilbo gave [c16] the Arkenstone to Bard for bargaining. 

by this Bilbo earned the elve's respect, for helping the victims by betraying the selfish thorin. Gandalf returned and praised bilbo. bilbo returned to his "friends". +fan fiction b' felt annoyed by thorin's selfishness even in this situation. instead of returning to the dwarves, he asked for a pony to ride home kuz "felt annoyed by the siege".

the elves used magic to send biblo in time and place to his home one day after he left so while he was with the dwarves and the trolls he was enjoying his calm hole home. bard offered the arkenstone in exchange for a "fair portion" for slaying the dragon which benefitted the dwarves. thorin ordered an attack on the siegers... 

and the dwarves charged toward the elves who used arrows to "kills six of the twelve dwarves including thorin" [in  hobbit1977 video, six elves died and thorin was dying due to goblins, only "six" including gandalf will remain. however if war elves six included thorin the dead king]. the remaining six dwarves fled back in the mountain. 

they shouted to give shares to the treasure... but goblins came. goblins have horns and bat ears over their eyes and sharp fangs in video 1977.]

___end fan fiction.

STORY: Bard approached the dwarves and offered the Arkenstone in exchange for a portion of treasure. Thorin yelled at bilbo for giving it to bard. Bilbo explained "Arkenstone was my portion", and left to the elf-human camp. Dain the dwarf came with soldiers. Trumpets blared [c17] as the twelve dwarves prepared to charge at the siege... 

then the elves heard goblins and orcs attacking so they turned and massacred them. other Goblins, bats, wolves and Wargs raided the valley so elf n men archers shot and killed many. dwarves led by thorin charged out of the cave in both directions cutting down goblins n beasts all along the narrow valley, until it widened. 

more Goblins attacked in the hills defeating dain's dwarves and threatening the elf-men camp... a rock from the goblins above, hit bilbo on his head so he fell unconscious. meanwhile, too many goblins were overpowering the valley and the hills until... giant eagles flew and lifted dangerous wargs high and dropped them so the goblins fled.

Bilbo awoke alone [c18] so took his ring off to be visible. fan fiction: after the victory the elves turned back to the dwarves. thorin died in battle so the dwarves share the wealth with men. even give to elves for defeating the goblins and orcs. bilbo did not know kuz he hit his head i mean kuz he went home as above. 

STORY: Bilbo n Gandalf went to elf town, Rivendell. later the pair came to Hobbiton. end of myth creatures.