the pi-rets
1 the battle
my name is Sper. my parents always told me that pirates were bad, bkuz they steal and take the things being sent by ship and worse- kill the defenders. however i wanted the excitement and i always hoped that one day i would be the one leading a group of brave men and women to take the riches from the rich. it would be exciting and the rich do not really need it anyway.
So here i was on the tenth of september, on a ship with sails raised and passing the great port of gibraltor at a great distance. We were sailing towards the rising sun and we could barely see the rocky coast. i thought it was to our starboard side [which hand is right? that port was north, so whatever... it seemed stupid calling it starboard it should be called port bkuz the port is to the north] I had been outvoted by my partners who wanted to chase the spanish warship and we were nearing it, with cannons ready for battle. i recalled that all the stories which i heard had a pirate captain and then the crew must do all the things that the captain said. sometimes the crew did a "mutiny" and removed the captain so i had a solution based on the name "pi-rates" which sounds like the letter "pi" in greek there would be 3 leaders so the crew would trust us. yes i found 2 more partners who agreed that we would vote to make decisions and under us would be the crew of 14 crew for the jobs of the ship and to attack ships. like 3-point-14 "pi".
now my idea was in my detriment as they had voted to attack a warship with trained gunners and which was not carrying cargo. sometimes the majority is wrong. dangerously wrong. as we neared its aft i was scared that they saw us. but kept silent. suddenly the spanish warship seemed fatter and wider- it was turning... instead of the narrow aft which we were following i could see it was turning and appeared wider so i knew they certainly saw us and our black pi-rit flag. my partners named "Boor and Quin" were busy preparing for the attack. they felt that in the long term if we destroyed worships oops warships then it would be easier to take the rich ones. boor [his first name and not burr] was inspecting the crew preparing the cannons while quin was calculating the distance and guiding my precise steering. at the right moment quin called me to turn port- so i turned toward the port which as above was to our north. and spun the wheel so that we turned towards the port. i knew this action would pull ropes which would turn the rudder. soon our side cannons faced the long side of the warship with its many cannons in two rows. one row in the sides and another row on the deck's edge.our ship shook and rocked dangerously backward as all the cannons on one side of our deck fired. i cringed expecting the warship to shoot but they did not. we continued sailing parallel for a few seconds towards north toward the port. something unexpected then happened. i saw an almost perfect row of splashes indicating the cannon balls had landed in the water we had been too far away and the warship soldiers had known the range and that is why they did not shoot yet a few seconds later orange flames burst from the side of the warship... wow! the cannonballs had hit below the water line not only ripping a hole in the wooden side but exploding inside the fire spread upward and almost the entire side was burning. yes my partners were surprisingly accurate in the amount of powder and range.
i relaxed and thought back to my youth. then i had prepared a list of names to choose for myself when i would become a pirate. in the end i changed my name from the gross name which my parents chose, to the name "Sper", as my pi-rit name. some of our crew also changed their names and the ones they chose were: rasin, trur, hossir ajin, ressir. the other 9 kept their birth names. in the coure of battles two more of the crew had died and thir rplacements chose from my list the last 2: senob, repob [a b at the end] i remembered and hated that my parents were poor.
ma always complained that she wanted new clothes but the money which pa brought from his job at the clothing factory was for paying the needs such as the home and food and similar urgent things.
i would complain that we should just take stuff but pa said that was evil. well being good we only suffered.
i mean what did he think? if he obeyed the law the police would reward him?? certainly not. that was not the way i wanted to be. pa would go to the factory early in the morning and ma would give me soup for breakfast. mostly water and then walk me to the small school. it was the anglican christian school in my small town in west britain. they forced us to learn many languages like welsh and english. we had to read the holy book.
we also needed to learn writing and that was very hard for me- hard to hold the long wooden marker and shape the letters. i was mildly annoyed that i needed to write i mean consider i only need to write because the school made me learn it and then the teachers would read the things i wrote but after completing school nobody would ever read anything i would write anyway! so i did not want to bother but one kid who said "no" to a teacher got punished when a teacher beat him... that was the same as a pi-rit so why do they "pretend" they are "good" and against pirates when they are the same violent and forcing us to do everything the way the wanted and decided.
2 my first good idea which was adopted
as a compromise i said to the teacher when we write for tests we should just mark beside the correct answer in choices instead of writing the answer. the teacher agreed for many of the subjects since he said that would save time if the choices of answers were already on the coarse paper. so only the specific subject of writing we needed to write but bible and math and other subjects we would simply circle around the number with the answer from the available answers- if the student knew then he would mark the correct one and if he did not listen, like myself, at least one of them would certainly be correct and i could choose one that felt better than the others.
my pa worked many hours at the factory. one summer day when i did not need to listen at skool i went with him to the hot factory. the windows were near the tall ceiling and open. my father stood in section "b". after the first team wove the cloth somehow, he would receive the cloth with it rows of threads. team b then cut the woven cloth into shapes . i complained because i felt most of the cloth was being wasted, but pa warned that he would slap me if i would not be silent and that reminded me of the one time he had slapped me in my shoulder. it stung so bad since then i always did what he said at least until i was bigger then i would defend myself from that "good holy" cruel man and he would feel pain. he would regret hitting a future pi-rit.
next a tall man with dark skin carried the shapes of cloth to the third team who slowly stitched the shapes together into the clothes. i never wanted to return to that hot smelly factory again. even after just one hour i felt i could not continue this suffering. at the time i thought that this explained why pa was so very grouchy every day after suffering in the factory for ten hours. that is why I MUST be a pi-rit! just take stuff- this factory situation is not an option!
ma would always walk me to school and then stay to teach the bible class. my teacher was so bad he made each student read and when we made a mistake reading he hollered at us. but ma taught her students by her telling the summary of the story in her own words. the school headmaster liked her way best but my teacher was so stubborn.
3 my second recognized suggestion
finally i reached age ten and every morning i joined my father in the factory.
i would gather the cloth after my pa's crew cut the shapes and carry the remains to the giant door. there the remains were sold to the poor tailors, i complained to my foreman that some pieces were large enuf to cut some of the shapes from them. he liked my idea and together we drew pictures of how to plan the different shapes to use almost all of the woven cloth.
we brought the drawings to the factory manager. at first the manager did not want to change anything but when i said the idea of "less time weaving" per day because more of each piece would be used, then the manager accepted our idea.
from the next day my foreman instructed my father and his crew the new manner of cutting the shapes from the same woven cloth. the instruction took time and the pile of woven cloth began to grow to a high pile. the manager told that team of the loom device to stop just for one hour. as the same number of shapes were cut from fewer woven cloths, the pile of woven sheets was not shrinking as fast. the manager looked very -very -happy that our idea was even better than he had expected and he gave my foreman and myself a rare sweet as a reward like sweet sugary bread. then the manager instructed the loom crew to work for only one more hour and then go home.
after that one unique special event all the other days were repetitive and boring. the main difference for me was from then we carried lighter piles of woven cloth to carry top the giant doors after my pa's team cut the shapes for sewing and stitching. also i was now walking much fewer times from the cut section to the door. each hour instead of clearing a pile of remains fifty times, now the pile only grew around ten times per hour. my foremen was promoted to a different job.
the days passed with a boredom i would call "tedious." which means boring but sounds more boring than boring. each day was the same and i dreamt ahead for the day iu would simply take what i needed.
the exception was in the winter when the walk to the factory was very cold and the heat inside was lovely because they closed almost all the windows and magically the heat from the bodies was enough. so the years passed. i was mildly annoyed that the money i earned bought ma's clothing she always wanted more so greedy while pa almost never bought new clothes only new shoes each winter. pa's pay paid for the home.
4 my first act of evil piracy
every year the owner wanted more money for the home. he would come in a fancy "carriage" each month to collect the rent money fee and each autumn would warn that the following months wemust pay more an increased amount. when i was age 15 i argued that the building was OLD and now one year older than the previous year so the price should be worth less! not increasing the rent money but decreasing because the building was a year older. the owner was furious and said you must pay more or leave! pa agreed to the new price but i felt that now was the best time to be a pi-rit.
i followed the owner called a landlord out and jumped onto his wagon's back. i rode along to his home. the wagon entered a large gate and rode around a curved stone path for almost quarter hour from the gate to the huge building of the house. it was like a mansion building. this guy did not need the extra money which he demanded from my poor family he was being terribly greedy and would be the best victim of piracy.
as he climbed down from the wagon to the path i jumped from the back of the wagon and began pounding the rich guy with my fists. he was screaming in pain and his shouting scared the horses who pulled the wagon and its driver away.
guards by the door of the mansion hurried down the steps but i shouted "stand back or i will strangle your boss." the guards stopped and stood. i snapped the mean landlords neck and pretended to strangle him. i yelled "lay down your swords and go inside and lock the door." they obeyed me and i took a sword and cut the head from the dead corpse. then i opened the guys bag to put the head in but saw many coins in the bag. also paper money.
well i did not want that to get dirty so i threw the head into the bushes and dragged the body into the bushes near the mansion. just in time as the wagon returned to the door of the mansion. i paid the driver a coin to take me near the factory. there i buried most of the coins. i hid the paper money in my clothes and walked home. i hid the paper money in my straw mattress.
+++to be continued
Monday, September 10, 2018
fixing hebrew letters
many years ago i thought that the shape of hebrew letters was importnat and having found a source which gathered traditions with evidence of the shapes i wanted to comper the sources but... we have many "fonts" for english so the ancient shape is not important as lond as it is simialr and readable.
we ned to stidy allpossible characters to identify the words but the truth is some words are "homo-phonic" mening the sound the same and should have the same letters. and same as emglish the same word can have many menings
so i suggest to edit each hebrew word assumingthere is a boook worth presrving and simplifying it to have the minimumu letters.
tradition groups letters by th epart of the mouth making the sound like "bmp" all push lips togetyher for all 3 letters
first rename
alf instead of modern hebrew name because like first letter of greek alpha and later fix order
bet same like beta but then fix: gam. del.heh.vav.zet,hhet,x,yed,x,lem,ma,na, xx, next "pe" same good
zzet [like sound in piZZa] kap, ro, sig, tet. total instead of 22 needed now to learn shapes which change when last letter remove doubles and remain eighteen 18 or "et'in shapes and never change shape and simply know meaning by story arroound same as english words have more than one meaning for example spell the same " row" =tur" =other same sound should fix same leters no need for extra shapes and vowels sounds see previous posts.
we ned to stidy allpossible characters to identify the words but the truth is some words are "homo-phonic" mening the sound the same and should have the same letters. and same as emglish the same word can have many menings
so i suggest to edit each hebrew word assumingthere is a boook worth presrving and simplifying it to have the minimumu letters.
tradition groups letters by th epart of the mouth making the sound like "bmp" all push lips togetyher for all 3 letters
first rename
alf instead of modern hebrew name because like first letter of greek alpha and later fix order
bet same like beta but then fix: gam. del.heh.vav.zet,hhet,x,yed,x,lem,ma,na, xx, next "pe" same good
zzet [like sound in piZZa] kap, ro, sig, tet. total instead of 22 needed now to learn shapes which change when last letter remove doubles and remain eighteen 18 or "et'in shapes and never change shape and simply know meaning by story arroound same as english words have more than one meaning for example spell the same " row" =tur" =other same sound should fix same leters no need for extra shapes and vowels sounds see previous posts.
Saturday, September 8, 2018
fixing biblical hebrew
assume the contents of the bible are good.
one detail preserved in the bible is the lettter "I" preserved in a manner that shows the true pronunciation was like the vowel sound in "bEAd" for example the letter "I" written for feminine and other uses where the name place is spelled both with the letter "I" and the letter" ' " called yowd.
pniel is spelled both with yowd and with " I " preserving the sound altho most of those books are not worth preserving for many reasons see other posts.
we may split the sounds into vowels like "ay" and consinents like "b"
a good system to arrange the order of the vowels- which do not appear in the written bibles but were preserved in "leningrad" codex and other ancient writings from yemen- can be from simple dot to multi-dot.
the first in this order is one single dot.
hebrew uses two such symbols so they are in one group and the order will be by position
FIRST one single dot near the TOP of the letter is a vowel. in this context of bible we DO have a preservation in josephus the only word he preserved using the greek letter omicron which is vowel sound in "sOft" from the choices of omicron and omega he preserved omicron so only modern hebrew is omega sound like "bOAt" not the tradition and not the bible and i know that rabbis teach... both of the rabbis sounds are wrong and refuted by evidence.
we know the ancient greek sound from colliers encyclopedia [1960's] preserving the ancient sounds of greek characters. and josephus preserved the sound with omicron that is the evidence and anything else including omega which he could use but did not is not real hebrew.
admittedly modern hebrew is different from the biblical hebrew in many ways including vowels.
other marks symbols have the SAME SOUND and this should get fixed as below we can identify: the letter "vav" is added with that single dot near the top of the letter then the letter is silent and the sound is vowel "sOft" as above because the dot is over letter. also the hebrew word for boat is marked with a symbol like "a plus with colon" since it is the first letter of the word pronunciation is same sound which is NOT the vowel of "bOAT" for the word boat but is the pronunciation of the vowel in "sOft". this refutes at least 2 details of how rabbis teach also if the words are worth preserving then we SHOULD simplify ONE symbol for this sound and remove the silent "I" which is silent anyway. similarly the hebrew word for boat could be marked with the dot above and we should fix such and never need to see the other symbols from this sound group because they are the same sound especialy when read quickly. it only makes more symbols to learn which is against the jewish tradition to "teach briefly" so have one symbol allows teaching less total symbols. i will not preserve what is known to be wrong and hopefully the rabbis will FIX the many errors related to this evidence.
SECOND one single dot under the letter. sound like vowel in "bEAd" or "bEE".evidence shows that the shape of vav shaped " I" and a dot near center is same sound and perhaps also the same sound for the diagonal 3 as preserved by some jews. maybe. but now we are in the group of one dot.
so one dot over is in biblical contaxt like the vowel in "sOft" that is tradition and below a different sound "ee" as explained and this is second in group because of next group.
group 2
THIRD a pair of dots under the letter. which? i prefer colon shape 3. considering it means "only the letter" with zero=no vowel- this should not even appear. same as the last letter in the word has no vowel mark also the first letter for example "ntanya" no need for a vowel with the first letter we hear the letter fine. so a "nu" with a colon below it is only the sound of the letter "n' with zero vowel just sound with the letter which follows like "nta" or english block. the first vowel needs no vowel nor mark. and we should not even see nor need to learn this symbol except the bad decision to publish with it needs to learn and that it means "null" as above and this should be fixed.
FOURTH a pair of dots but instead of vertical pair like colon shape as above ":" this pair is a horizontal pair.
this has been preserved in the only ancient word which josephus preserved the sound is vowel in "hEld" and i know that both moder hebrew and as well as rabbis differ but this is PRESERVED and this is the tradition for the bible. sad that rabbis refuse to fix known errors so i publish to fix. so when you go to israel and speak hebreww know modern hebrew differs- except this one israelis say it so fast that the teaching book groups the horizontal pair like "hEld" yay!
FIFTH after a group of single dots [over or under] and 2 pairs [horizontal or like colon ":" but both under the letter] the next group is three dots.
which? a diagonal of 3 dots is fifth. what sound deos it preserve? that is in doubt. perhaps it is the vowel of "bOOt" or as some jews preserve it same as the vowel of a single dot under the letter and considering this sound already has a mark perhaps it is a different sound yet we know that there are extra letters so it seems best to simplify never use the diagganl 3 and since it is in doubt whether it is same as "ee" or same as "oo" be passive and not preserve something in doubt so only in modern hebrew the vowel in "bOOt" which cannot be used in newspapers with no dots! so they use "I" which in modern hebrew is the vowel of "bOOt" however we are trying to preservee thae tradition so we must simplify and and make it null because the jews did nt preserve this and jospehus only preserved one word.
SICTH the next symbol in this group is shaped "three dots grouped like electric outlets" or the two horizontal of the 3 have a third centered under them. the sound is the same as the line [refuting my previous order but i admit my mistake and have fixed and so should others] traditionally biblical hebrew had a sound for words with this symbol as the vowel in "pA" or the a in "father" almost lost in english unless we will change the word "amen" to the vowel in "pA". the same vowel sound as the vowel in "bOb" and ancient texts preserve that such words never had the 3-dot symbol but were read the sound of "pA" as explained so after we know that the sound is preserved in the following we group we should FIX and simplify never even seeing the "3-dot" neither this "added symbol which changed the traditional reading as proven from ancient texts nor the diagonal 3 dots which evidenc leaves conflict. so this group should be removed never see a 3 dot symbol for the resons explained this must be fixed because it changed the traditional way of reading the ancient words.
seventh he last symbol is pronounced with "open" mouth like the vowel in "pA" or the a in "father'' this sound is almost lost from english yet it is the most common sound in traditional hebrew. so i need to preserve it.
the rabbi named solomon rashi preserved that the word with a different symbol is "open" mouth same a sthe a in "father and this matches modern hebrew and to simplify we should remove the other "undifferent" symbol so when we see the "plus" we identify it as solomon preserved in year 1050 as open mouth like a in "father" which is almost lost in english because we only sound apple or bay for the latter a.
to make learniung diffficult jews at least 1000 years ago added a colon to the "_" symbol and this is useful in signifying fast but not needed and altho logic would say "plus shape + with colon shape:" should be a fast a of "father that is not how the vowels are grouped and since both types of + symbols are extar not needed we must fix and simplify the one like "sOft" as above mark with single dot as above and the one like "_" mark with that symbol "_" to simplify and fix.
in the end we have four sounds and the fifth is in conflict so we do not know which manner to preserve and can remove all 3-dot symbol and only replace the electric socket shaped symbol with the traditinal vowel "_" as in tradition.
so 4 SOUNDS and no need to preserve THIRTEEN symbiols for just 4 ort 5 sounds.
next fix name of letters but no time!
one detail preserved in the bible is the lettter "I" preserved in a manner that shows the true pronunciation was like the vowel sound in "bEAd" for example the letter "I" written for feminine and other uses where the name place is spelled both with the letter "I" and the letter" ' " called yowd.
pniel is spelled both with yowd and with " I " preserving the sound altho most of those books are not worth preserving for many reasons see other posts.
we may split the sounds into vowels like "ay" and consinents like "b"
a good system to arrange the order of the vowels- which do not appear in the written bibles but were preserved in "leningrad" codex and other ancient writings from yemen- can be from simple dot to multi-dot.
the first in this order is one single dot.
hebrew uses two such symbols so they are in one group and the order will be by position
FIRST one single dot near the TOP of the letter is a vowel. in this context of bible we DO have a preservation in josephus the only word he preserved using the greek letter omicron which is vowel sound in "sOft" from the choices of omicron and omega he preserved omicron so only modern hebrew is omega sound like "bOAt" not the tradition and not the bible and i know that rabbis teach... both of the rabbis sounds are wrong and refuted by evidence.
we know the ancient greek sound from colliers encyclopedia [1960's] preserving the ancient sounds of greek characters. and josephus preserved the sound with omicron that is the evidence and anything else including omega which he could use but did not is not real hebrew.
admittedly modern hebrew is different from the biblical hebrew in many ways including vowels.
other marks symbols have the SAME SOUND and this should get fixed as below we can identify: the letter "vav" is added with that single dot near the top of the letter then the letter is silent and the sound is vowel "sOft" as above because the dot is over letter. also the hebrew word for boat is marked with a symbol like "a plus with colon" since it is the first letter of the word pronunciation is same sound which is NOT the vowel of "bOAT" for the word boat but is the pronunciation of the vowel in "sOft". this refutes at least 2 details of how rabbis teach also if the words are worth preserving then we SHOULD simplify ONE symbol for this sound and remove the silent "I" which is silent anyway. similarly the hebrew word for boat could be marked with the dot above and we should fix such and never need to see the other symbols from this sound group because they are the same sound especialy when read quickly. it only makes more symbols to learn which is against the jewish tradition to "teach briefly" so have one symbol allows teaching less total symbols. i will not preserve what is known to be wrong and hopefully the rabbis will FIX the many errors related to this evidence.
SECOND one single dot under the letter. sound like vowel in "bEAd" or "bEE".evidence shows that the shape of vav shaped " I" and a dot near center is same sound and perhaps also the same sound for the diagonal 3 as preserved by some jews. maybe. but now we are in the group of one dot.
so one dot over is in biblical contaxt like the vowel in "sOft" that is tradition and below a different sound "ee" as explained and this is second in group because of next group.
group 2
THIRD a pair of dots under the letter. which? i prefer colon shape 3. considering it means "only the letter" with zero=no vowel- this should not even appear. same as the last letter in the word has no vowel mark also the first letter for example "ntanya" no need for a vowel with the first letter we hear the letter fine. so a "nu" with a colon below it is only the sound of the letter "n' with zero vowel just sound with the letter which follows like "nta" or english block. the first vowel needs no vowel nor mark. and we should not even see nor need to learn this symbol except the bad decision to publish with it needs to learn and that it means "null" as above and this should be fixed.
FOURTH a pair of dots but instead of vertical pair like colon shape as above ":" this pair is a horizontal pair.
this has been preserved in the only ancient word which josephus preserved the sound is vowel in "hEld" and i know that both moder hebrew and as well as rabbis differ but this is PRESERVED and this is the tradition for the bible. sad that rabbis refuse to fix known errors so i publish to fix. so when you go to israel and speak hebreww know modern hebrew differs- except this one israelis say it so fast that the teaching book groups the horizontal pair like "hEld" yay!
FIFTH after a group of single dots [over or under] and 2 pairs [horizontal or like colon ":" but both under the letter] the next group is three dots.
which? a diagonal of 3 dots is fifth. what sound deos it preserve? that is in doubt. perhaps it is the vowel of "bOOt" or as some jews preserve it same as the vowel of a single dot under the letter and considering this sound already has a mark perhaps it is a different sound yet we know that there are extra letters so it seems best to simplify never use the diagganl 3 and since it is in doubt whether it is same as "ee" or same as "oo" be passive and not preserve something in doubt so only in modern hebrew the vowel in "bOOt" which cannot be used in newspapers with no dots! so they use "I" which in modern hebrew is the vowel of "bOOt" however we are trying to preservee thae tradition so we must simplify and and make it null because the jews did nt preserve this and jospehus only preserved one word.
SICTH the next symbol in this group is shaped "three dots grouped like electric outlets" or the two horizontal of the 3 have a third centered under them. the sound is the same as the line [refuting my previous order but i admit my mistake and have fixed and so should others] traditionally biblical hebrew had a sound for words with this symbol as the vowel in "pA" or the a in "father" almost lost in english unless we will change the word "amen" to the vowel in "pA". the same vowel sound as the vowel in "bOb" and ancient texts preserve that such words never had the 3-dot symbol but were read the sound of "pA" as explained so after we know that the sound is preserved in the following we group we should FIX and simplify never even seeing the "3-dot" neither this "added symbol which changed the traditional reading as proven from ancient texts nor the diagonal 3 dots which evidenc leaves conflict. so this group should be removed never see a 3 dot symbol for the resons explained this must be fixed because it changed the traditional way of reading the ancient words.
seventh he last symbol is pronounced with "open" mouth like the vowel in "pA" or the a in "father'' this sound is almost lost from english yet it is the most common sound in traditional hebrew. so i need to preserve it.
the rabbi named solomon rashi preserved that the word with a different symbol is "open" mouth same a sthe a in "father and this matches modern hebrew and to simplify we should remove the other "undifferent" symbol so when we see the "plus" we identify it as solomon preserved in year 1050 as open mouth like a in "father" which is almost lost in english because we only sound apple or bay for the latter a.
to make learniung diffficult jews at least 1000 years ago added a colon to the "_" symbol and this is useful in signifying fast but not needed and altho logic would say "plus shape + with colon shape:" should be a fast a of "father that is not how the vowels are grouped and since both types of + symbols are extar not needed we must fix and simplify the one like "sOft" as above mark with single dot as above and the one like "_" mark with that symbol "_" to simplify and fix.
in the end we have four sounds and the fifth is in conflict so we do not know which manner to preserve and can remove all 3-dot symbol and only replace the electric socket shaped symbol with the traditinal vowel "_" as in tradition.
so 4 SOUNDS and no need to preserve THIRTEEN symbiols for just 4 ort 5 sounds.
next fix name of letters but no time!
Friday, September 7, 2018
fat children
the size of the clothes alone does not indicate fat even the children size "xl" does not mean "extar fat" only means the age 14 years because adult size begins 35 waist so must have 34 waist only if a younger child needs "l and xl" then it indicates overweight and change habit is important see below. but at the age 14 need a size called xl for that age that is the normal range unless younger because of adult size at 35 must have 34 so that is a needed xl not extra..
in contrast adults "large' is almost always "overweight" in bmi measure so check your bmi. body mass.
i mistakenly set a goal to lose weight from obese to "large size" when i succeeded i was shocked to find that i was still overweight- despite size large fit- i was so shocked because in children large only means age as above but for adults large means "fatter than average."
normal has a range bmi 25-29 is normal range being in that range is good but being overweight is something to fix and being obese is dangerous.
even after losing enuf weight not to be obese and size "large" fit... was that a victory? yes and hard one yet still, still overweight and that range of overweight can be mildly overweight and very overweight until almost obese so the only way to set a long term goal is not by circumfrenece unless stage one is circumference 42 inch hips and then ready for stage 2 get below overweight bmi. not easy so be careful at ages 14-19 or you will be in trouble later like most americans. who habit with a donut and sugary coffee every morning.
in contrast adults "large' is almost always "overweight" in bmi measure so check your bmi. body mass.
i mistakenly set a goal to lose weight from obese to "large size" when i succeeded i was shocked to find that i was still overweight- despite size large fit- i was so shocked because in children large only means age as above but for adults large means "fatter than average."
normal has a range bmi 25-29 is normal range being in that range is good but being overweight is something to fix and being obese is dangerous.
even after losing enuf weight not to be obese and size "large" fit... was that a victory? yes and hard one yet still, still overweight and that range of overweight can be mildly overweight and very overweight until almost obese so the only way to set a long term goal is not by circumfrenece unless stage one is circumference 42 inch hips and then ready for stage 2 get below overweight bmi. not easy so be careful at ages 14-19 or you will be in trouble later like most americans. who habit with a donut and sugary coffee every morning.
Thursday, August 30, 2018
improvements to game
when we consider a ball spinning, we can define the axis of the spin and between the two axes an equator and that middle area is the greatest length around called circumference .
the same for the planet earth near equator so for a game this should be shone
i start with one good thing in map of game "axis and allies" version 1984, is when they 'magnefied" the european countries they correctly aligned spain with the correct western part called new york city now for improvemnets that distance is more than the distance from tokyo to midway so it seems fair a ship needs a second step.
yet near equator the fat part of the ball of the planet even greater length should be marked on each side of nile continent
yet a ship near amazon river is marked one step to nile c. coast this is unjustly marked because it further than 4200 or 4100 km. as detailed below similarly the east side of nile c. a ship from mumbai should need a second step to reach kenya and this should be marked with narrow sea zones and also fix islands near japan many islands only separate for land battles but several separate island in same sea zone so ship can move from fuji m.r. to fly r.r. in second step sane as midway because less length and similarly from magata rr to murray rr in second step not as unjustly marked in game axis and allies from 1984 these improvement are truer to the length which a ship goes and as detailed below
from philadelphia near east coast to south is WESTERN COAST of amazon continent or sea WEST of am.c. this should be fixed on the map but then what about the vast ocean between am.c. and nile c.?
***add narrow sea zones. consider length across from am.r. to gabon is near equator so the fatter part of a ball 6400 kilometer. this should be marked justlky not one step for ship. even go north-east less sea distance still more than length to midway as above not one step. when we compare the range granted to the transport in ganges rr to the transport in fuji mr we see the unfair and unjust advantage granted to the allies. choose! either the allies need a second step to reach kenya or japanese ships can go the same far distance. and make the sea zones near the allies the same as the ones near the axis..
to make a map accurate spain should align with philadelphia and good that when MAGNIFY europe then correctly philadelphia alligned to position phil. facing spain.they did so good for this detail.
yet from belem brazil NE 4200 km so less than spain length yet longer than tokyo to midway as explained below and this should show on map of sea zones
in map better to remove neutral brazil because they made north of libreville so from belem on am.r. 6400 kilometer one step yet very far 6400 so in that part of ocean amazon by belem to freetown siera leon 4200 one step? but **tokyo to midway 4100 second step, so why one step? choose: either belem near am.r. to freetown 2 steps like midway not one beause 4200 km as above-
or tokyo to midway one step of 2. cannot have both different separations when atlantic is greater kength,
and certainly by equator the fatter part of the ball, cannot be one step like they drewbecause it is length 6400 km because near equator of ball not bad "one step" as game map, to coast of libreville gabon near equator that is even further 6400 km but they map one step which is too short admittedly to spain and france second step like tokyo midway bcuz 5500 kilometr but to gabon more than 5500 aqs above because ball.
tokyo to midway 4100 km in two steps so for 5500 km across atlantic they require a second step hence in south water must ALSO have separate zones to show greater length and for accurate moving of ships even if smaller zones. also from peru to philadelphia is north not to miss.gulf
what about new york to french coast? 5700 needs second step yet from belem to sira leomn 4200 greater than tokyo to midwatatool so not one step but second stepo must be shown with narrow sea zones for accurate moving and certainly to gabon add a narrow zone for accurate moving because further than to french coast 5700 needs second step so 6400 cannot be one step must mark narrow zones.
details bcuz length west from spain to phil. is philadelphia city is 40 degrees north of the real objective equator between axes of spin. east due east 5500 km is portugal and true south from it is west peru and water west of amazon continenet. not only does coast not align with west coast but west coast of am.c. is FURTHER EAST than the east coasty of the mis. c. so what is true range of submarine they allow 6000 in second step from hawaii to caroline that is not justly marked it is too far even 4100 needs second step so 6000 needs third step. in addition to added zone narrow as above netween whitney mr and loa mr. should need third step to get from whit. to wake and second step to get to loa. and similarly second step to get to from belem by am.r. to coast even to s.l. is more than 4100 and certainly to gabon more.so solution do not show neutral amazon continent which is so problematic it is west of the southern line from east coast wrongly when truly south is west coast and since appears near gabun needs add narrow zones or not show itsince neutral and trouble as above.
distance from india to madagascar
durban in oranj rr from mumbai 7000 km too bad mzmbq was nutral tr in mumbai cannot evacuate troops in oranj rr why orange? because e with g=gentle but better oranj. englisgh has j not like other languages so use it. so too far even mumbai india to mumbasa kenya 4450km more than midway but unjuslty allow british transport to move more than japanes ships that is unjustly marked. game allows one step but realy second step just to kenya so unjustly narked to help the only british marker in region so even kenya second step and certainly since mzmbq nutral too far to evac doomed troops in oranj r.r.
the same for the planet earth near equator so for a game this should be shone
i start with one good thing in map of game "axis and allies" version 1984, is when they 'magnefied" the european countries they correctly aligned spain with the correct western part called new york city now for improvemnets that distance is more than the distance from tokyo to midway so it seems fair a ship needs a second step.
yet near equator the fat part of the ball of the planet even greater length should be marked on each side of nile continent
yet a ship near amazon river is marked one step to nile c. coast this is unjustly marked because it further than 4200 or 4100 km. as detailed below similarly the east side of nile c. a ship from mumbai should need a second step to reach kenya and this should be marked with narrow sea zones and also fix islands near japan many islands only separate for land battles but several separate island in same sea zone so ship can move from fuji m.r. to fly r.r. in second step sane as midway because less length and similarly from magata rr to murray rr in second step not as unjustly marked in game axis and allies from 1984 these improvement are truer to the length which a ship goes and as detailed below
from philadelphia near east coast to south is WESTERN COAST of amazon continent or sea WEST of am.c. this should be fixed on the map but then what about the vast ocean between am.c. and nile c.?
***add narrow sea zones. consider length across from am.r. to gabon is near equator so the fatter part of a ball 6400 kilometer. this should be marked justlky not one step for ship. even go north-east less sea distance still more than length to midway as above not one step. when we compare the range granted to the transport in ganges rr to the transport in fuji mr we see the unfair and unjust advantage granted to the allies. choose! either the allies need a second step to reach kenya or japanese ships can go the same far distance. and make the sea zones near the allies the same as the ones near the axis..
to make a map accurate spain should align with philadelphia and good that when MAGNIFY europe then correctly philadelphia alligned to position phil. facing spain.they did so good for this detail.
yet from belem brazil NE 4200 km so less than spain length yet longer than tokyo to midway as explained below and this should show on map of sea zones
in map better to remove neutral brazil because they made north of libreville so from belem on am.r. 6400 kilometer one step yet very far 6400 so in that part of ocean amazon by belem to freetown siera leon 4200 one step? but **tokyo to midway 4100 second step, so why one step? choose: either belem near am.r. to freetown 2 steps like midway not one beause 4200 km as above-
or tokyo to midway one step of 2. cannot have both different separations when atlantic is greater kength,
and certainly by equator the fatter part of the ball, cannot be one step like they drewbecause it is length 6400 km because near equator of ball not bad "one step" as game map, to coast of libreville gabon near equator that is even further 6400 km but they map one step which is too short admittedly to spain and france second step like tokyo midway bcuz 5500 kilometr but to gabon more than 5500 aqs above because ball.
tokyo to midway 4100 km in two steps so for 5500 km across atlantic they require a second step hence in south water must ALSO have separate zones to show greater length and for accurate moving of ships even if smaller zones. also from peru to philadelphia is north not to miss.gulf
what about new york to french coast? 5700 needs second step yet from belem to sira leomn 4200 greater than tokyo to midwatatool so not one step but second stepo must be shown with narrow sea zones for accurate moving and certainly to gabon add a narrow zone for accurate moving because further than to french coast 5700 needs second step so 6400 cannot be one step must mark narrow zones.
details bcuz length west from spain to phil. is philadelphia city is 40 degrees north of the real objective equator between axes of spin. east due east 5500 km is portugal and true south from it is west peru and water west of amazon continenet. not only does coast not align with west coast but west coast of am.c. is FURTHER EAST than the east coasty of the mis. c. so what is true range of submarine they allow 6000 in second step from hawaii to caroline that is not justly marked it is too far even 4100 needs second step so 6000 needs third step. in addition to added zone narrow as above netween whitney mr and loa mr. should need third step to get from whit. to wake and second step to get to loa. and similarly second step to get to from belem by am.r. to coast even to s.l. is more than 4100 and certainly to gabon more.so solution do not show neutral amazon continent which is so problematic it is west of the southern line from east coast wrongly when truly south is west coast and since appears near gabun needs add narrow zones or not show itsince neutral and trouble as above.
distance from india to madagascar
durban in oranj rr from mumbai 7000 km too bad mzmbq was nutral tr in mumbai cannot evacuate troops in oranj rr why orange? because e with g=gentle but better oranj. englisgh has j not like other languages so use it. so too far even mumbai india to mumbasa kenya 4450km more than midway but unjuslty allow british transport to move more than japanes ships that is unjustly marked. game allows one step but realy second step just to kenya so unjustly narked to help the only british marker in region so even kenya second step and certainly since mzmbq nutral too far to evac doomed troops in oranj r.r.
Wednesday, August 29, 2018
remotely ancient planet
1 the term "history" is used to refer to the time period which began when people wrote their stories. before that is called pre-history.
"pre-historic-" if history means the past, then that includes all of the past so how can anything be "before" the past? but see above.
so what happened on this planet before history-era? also what can we possibly know about the ancient world... almost nothing.... except studying old bones and tools.
we begin with this planet which we live on. not the sun or the universe but see appendix b.
if life existed on this planet earth for over 2.5 billion years [2.5*10^9] then the sun must be at least that old. scientists discovered that the sun is much older than the earth... not 3 days younger.... as religious book claimed, [well respond the rabbis, one day the scientists will admit that the sun is three days younger.... hahaha or as one kindergarten teacher taught us "the scientist did not see [observe] the sun created before earth" hmm good enuf to trick 4 year olds... yet there are other evidences to observe. if this dialog interests you see appendix a. or not.]
anyway- the story on earth begins with "the crust hardening" but that means the earth was molten rock? how can claim it was molten when it is possible that the solid rock was always hard rock.
evidence as humans dig deep in the ground, they find the tunnels become much hotter than their body heat. there must be a great heat because we observe hot lava which is molten rock which comes out of the earth. this heat could be caused by pressure we know from physics that pressure causes heat. [we use that idea in engines combined with a spark.] so the mass of the earth from every direction causes pressure which causes heat and this could heat the earth enuf [=enough] for life not to freeze even without a sun [this refutes my assumption written above that life relates to the sun.] anyway we should focus on the planet.
we know today that there is great heat under the ground which melts rock into lava which comes up to the surface and we observe. as the heat goes out into space each night the surface cools and that is what happened when the first day of the solid planet. in other words "the earth hardened as it cooled from the previous state: molten rock". deep underground despite shaded from sun heat, yet still: deeper is hotter. so as heat escaped as we observe each night, the top of the molten cooled until the surface changed from hot liquid molten rock to a layer of solid rock a layer like the crust of bread the outer crust is harder but for the opposite reason. bread outside is hard because the heat dried it until it changed from moist cool dough to hot dry crust but the planet cooled from hot liquid to cool solid crust layer.
2 can life exist in molten rock? maybe yes maybe no? either way we would not find evidence as the liquid kept changing shape because liquids move. also we know that we use boiling water to "sterilize" equipment to prevent infections, the boiling water kills all life so we can be certain that nothing lived until the surface cooled enough for water to be a liquid. in other words "no life existed ON EARTH prior to cooling below the temperature of the sterilizer".
altho science claims that the simple small preceded the complex larger, the earliest signs of life did contain the complex "dna" and "rna" molecules.
on page 144 of book "genesis and the big bang" by astrophysicist schroeder, is something which needs to be mentioned at the beginning of a story of the planet. that life appeared, on the surface [leaving marks in the rock] of the newly formed solid surface, soon after the cooling, well in his words about geological time "almost immediately" is hard for me to define. also "this first life contained the complex genetic material that we call dna and rna".
based on what we observe in rocks for 2.5 billion years only tiny life of single-one-cell lived. i speculate that bigger life could have left a mark but earth shifts and vibrations cracked any ancient large marks so only tiny marks remain from that era which show the single celled bacteria. [ which creatures existed then? we should not speculate base-lessly. ]
2.5 billion years pass. in that era of 2,500,000,000 years we can only know that single celled life lived. one-celled life forms, as we find marked in fossils. observed sign of life with only-one cell; tiny and simple yet containg the amazingly complex molecle dna as above. after that era the multi-cellular life-forms are evident in the fossil record.
3 but a mystery is from non-living to living meaning from a chemical compound which does not move to a cell which searches for what it needs. another related mystery: why "almost immediately" after the surface cooled? well that means "around 250,000,000 years" so plenty of time to assemble. in other words rock deep 2.5 billion years old has marks of one-celled fossil but 2.6 b.y have no cells at all. we would expect millions of years for complex dna molecule to assemble on a new surface and inded 250 million years until the marks of single-celled life forms. the concept is CHEMISTRY from chemical to something moving based on its needs. if i put a solid on a table it will not move because it is solid if i put a liquid on a table it will spread on the surface of the table.... if truly flat not tilted haha. it will not search for food. it does not need food and does not move but life-forms such as bacteria search for food and water so they move because they are searching for something which they need.
i think this deserves mention before bronze age on page 32.
4 after we described the solidification from liquid rock [made from a chemical compound called feldspar which is a molecule with assembled silicon and gaseous elements] as above .we can begin the story. in the beginning of the planet the surface of planet earth solidifes from hot liquid rock to solid rocky crust. the gasses around the planet move as winds which erode the land like rain and rivers will later. tectonic plates which are like solid plates moving on the molten core bump into each other and the rock "buckles" raising into mountains such as the mountains on the east edge of mississipi continent which bumped onto the plate of the atlas mountain region forming thoise two ripples and then separating as we have now.
the earliet sediments already contain the first traces of life. the sole life-form on earth are "simple" bacteria "nucleous free" meaning no nucleious in contrast to the bacteria which live now. the era when such bacteria live lasts 2.5 billion years as above from around 250 million years after the crust hardens until 2.5 b.y., then "eukaryotes" meaninf bacteria with nucleous appear and eat each other and are dominant for 600 million years. still only single celled. until 3.3 b.y. from solidification of crust. after this era of 3.1 b.y, the first multi-cellular life appears also micro-size invisible to human eyes. what are they? plants or animals? they are too small "microscopically" small to be either one but they "move to get food" so like animals and no roots so not like trees.
were singele-cells the father of multi-cells? only some split into attached multicell while others SPLIT into separate single cell life forms caled bacteria
appendix 1: Note about title: a certain astro-phycist wrote a book named "genesis and the big bang" the contents do not match the order in the book "genesis" but rabbi liars who apparently only know the title, told me the book says that science said the book genesis is the same content. well i read it and it is not the same.
appendix 2 the change in inflation
in the first second of the expansion of the area with matter, no matter existed in atom form. also until 10^-36 second the universe expanded until suddenly abrubtly a change in rate from size "10^-24cm to 10 cm" diameter like those yellow grapefruits, this is called the "inflationary" epoch which was brief and abrupt sudden expansion afterthat time the rate slowed again. this one time sudden expansion was "faster than any rate before or after" some type of suden release of energy.schroeder "poeticaly called it" the "wind of god", altho the religious wind of god was "over the water" a very different description which was AFTER THE EARTH and water were already created "in the beginning" as verse one stated so in verse 2 a "wind was over the water" in genesis but hey the writer of genesis did not see what happened. so we must observe the particle physics to know.
schroeder describes this inflationary epoch briefly on page 93 and it occurrred as described at link below at 10^-36 second briefly and suddenly until the rate slowed again one website describes this epoch when something "releases an enormous amount of energy, enough to drive the exponential expansion of the very early universe." for a fancy descriptuion which i do noyt pretend to comprehend you can read this
http://sciexplorer.blogspot.com/2011/01/our-universe-part-5-inflationary-epoch.html
Anyway at 10^-36 seconds, the inflationary epoch begins. at that brief epoch only the particle named gluon exists later particles called "w bozons and z bosons" will exist when a pphoton breaks away from the special pre-boson type of boson.
"pre-historic-" if history means the past, then that includes all of the past so how can anything be "before" the past? but see above.
so what happened on this planet before history-era? also what can we possibly know about the ancient world... almost nothing.... except studying old bones and tools.
we begin with this planet which we live on. not the sun or the universe but see appendix b.
if life existed on this planet earth for over 2.5 billion years [2.5*10^9] then the sun must be at least that old. scientists discovered that the sun is much older than the earth... not 3 days younger.... as religious book claimed, [well respond the rabbis, one day the scientists will admit that the sun is three days younger.... hahaha or as one kindergarten teacher taught us "the scientist did not see [observe] the sun created before earth" hmm good enuf to trick 4 year olds... yet there are other evidences to observe. if this dialog interests you see appendix a. or not.]
anyway- the story on earth begins with "the crust hardening" but that means the earth was molten rock? how can claim it was molten when it is possible that the solid rock was always hard rock.
evidence as humans dig deep in the ground, they find the tunnels become much hotter than their body heat. there must be a great heat because we observe hot lava which is molten rock which comes out of the earth. this heat could be caused by pressure we know from physics that pressure causes heat. [we use that idea in engines combined with a spark.] so the mass of the earth from every direction causes pressure which causes heat and this could heat the earth enuf [=enough] for life not to freeze even without a sun [this refutes my assumption written above that life relates to the sun.] anyway we should focus on the planet.
we know today that there is great heat under the ground which melts rock into lava which comes up to the surface and we observe. as the heat goes out into space each night the surface cools and that is what happened when the first day of the solid planet. in other words "the earth hardened as it cooled from the previous state: molten rock". deep underground despite shaded from sun heat, yet still: deeper is hotter. so as heat escaped as we observe each night, the top of the molten cooled until the surface changed from hot liquid molten rock to a layer of solid rock a layer like the crust of bread the outer crust is harder but for the opposite reason. bread outside is hard because the heat dried it until it changed from moist cool dough to hot dry crust but the planet cooled from hot liquid to cool solid crust layer.
2 can life exist in molten rock? maybe yes maybe no? either way we would not find evidence as the liquid kept changing shape because liquids move. also we know that we use boiling water to "sterilize" equipment to prevent infections, the boiling water kills all life so we can be certain that nothing lived until the surface cooled enough for water to be a liquid. in other words "no life existed ON EARTH prior to cooling below the temperature of the sterilizer".
altho science claims that the simple small preceded the complex larger, the earliest signs of life did contain the complex "dna" and "rna" molecules.
on page 144 of book "genesis and the big bang" by astrophysicist schroeder, is something which needs to be mentioned at the beginning of a story of the planet. that life appeared, on the surface [leaving marks in the rock] of the newly formed solid surface, soon after the cooling, well in his words about geological time "almost immediately" is hard for me to define. also "this first life contained the complex genetic material that we call dna and rna".
based on what we observe in rocks for 2.5 billion years only tiny life of single-one-cell lived. i speculate that bigger life could have left a mark but earth shifts and vibrations cracked any ancient large marks so only tiny marks remain from that era which show the single celled bacteria. [ which creatures existed then? we should not speculate base-lessly. ]
2.5 billion years pass. in that era of 2,500,000,000 years we can only know that single celled life lived. one-celled life forms, as we find marked in fossils. observed sign of life with only-one cell; tiny and simple yet containg the amazingly complex molecle dna as above. after that era the multi-cellular life-forms are evident in the fossil record.
3 but a mystery is from non-living to living meaning from a chemical compound which does not move to a cell which searches for what it needs. another related mystery: why "almost immediately" after the surface cooled? well that means "around 250,000,000 years" so plenty of time to assemble. in other words rock deep 2.5 billion years old has marks of one-celled fossil but 2.6 b.y have no cells at all. we would expect millions of years for complex dna molecule to assemble on a new surface and inded 250 million years until the marks of single-celled life forms. the concept is CHEMISTRY from chemical to something moving based on its needs. if i put a solid on a table it will not move because it is solid if i put a liquid on a table it will spread on the surface of the table.... if truly flat not tilted haha. it will not search for food. it does not need food and does not move but life-forms such as bacteria search for food and water so they move because they are searching for something which they need.
i think this deserves mention before bronze age on page 32.
4 after we described the solidification from liquid rock [made from a chemical compound called feldspar which is a molecule with assembled silicon and gaseous elements] as above .we can begin the story. in the beginning of the planet the surface of planet earth solidifes from hot liquid rock to solid rocky crust. the gasses around the planet move as winds which erode the land like rain and rivers will later. tectonic plates which are like solid plates moving on the molten core bump into each other and the rock "buckles" raising into mountains such as the mountains on the east edge of mississipi continent which bumped onto the plate of the atlas mountain region forming thoise two ripples and then separating as we have now.
the earliet sediments already contain the first traces of life. the sole life-form on earth are "simple" bacteria "nucleous free" meaning no nucleious in contrast to the bacteria which live now. the era when such bacteria live lasts 2.5 billion years as above from around 250 million years after the crust hardens until 2.5 b.y., then "eukaryotes" meaninf bacteria with nucleous appear and eat each other and are dominant for 600 million years. still only single celled. until 3.3 b.y. from solidification of crust. after this era of 3.1 b.y, the first multi-cellular life appears also micro-size invisible to human eyes. what are they? plants or animals? they are too small "microscopically" small to be either one but they "move to get food" so like animals and no roots so not like trees.
were singele-cells the father of multi-cells? only some split into attached multicell while others SPLIT into separate single cell life forms caled bacteria
appendix 1: Note about title: a certain astro-phycist wrote a book named "genesis and the big bang" the contents do not match the order in the book "genesis" but rabbi liars who apparently only know the title, told me the book says that science said the book genesis is the same content. well i read it and it is not the same.
appendix 2 the change in inflation
in the first second of the expansion of the area with matter, no matter existed in atom form. also until 10^-36 second the universe expanded until suddenly abrubtly a change in rate from size "10^-24cm to 10 cm" diameter like those yellow grapefruits, this is called the "inflationary" epoch which was brief and abrupt sudden expansion afterthat time the rate slowed again. this one time sudden expansion was "faster than any rate before or after" some type of suden release of energy.schroeder "poeticaly called it" the "wind of god", altho the religious wind of god was "over the water" a very different description which was AFTER THE EARTH and water were already created "in the beginning" as verse one stated so in verse 2 a "wind was over the water" in genesis but hey the writer of genesis did not see what happened. so we must observe the particle physics to know.
schroeder describes this inflationary epoch briefly on page 93 and it occurrred as described at link below at 10^-36 second briefly and suddenly until the rate slowed again one website describes this epoch when something "releases an enormous amount of energy, enough to drive the exponential expansion of the very early universe." for a fancy descriptuion which i do noyt pretend to comprehend you can read this
http://sciexplorer.blogspot.com/2011/01/our-universe-part-5-inflationary-epoch.html
Anyway at 10^-36 seconds, the inflationary epoch begins. at that brief epoch only the particle named gluon exists later particles called "w bozons and z bosons" will exist when a pphoton breaks away from the special pre-boson type of boson.
Saturday, August 18, 2018
summarizing the beloved star-wars-8
intro: sw8 appeared in the end of year 2017. all details below are from video and not my original concepts only my summary of their exciting video.
crawl: "long time ago and far away". text crawls telling that the "first order"=f-o rules [many systems] because already destroyed the republic government with the planets from which they governed. snoke leads f-o and wants to rule entire galaxy. lia leads the Resistantance=r to fight back. she hopes her brother luke will assist the battle. f-o discovered r. base and comes to atak so r is evacuating.= the resistance is evacuating because the evil "first order" is coming to attack. [end text]
from the planet, many space vehicles=sv go up for evacuation. meanwhile, f-o sv. arrive. a giant gun aims at the r. base. one brave pilot named poe, negotiates until he sees bads are aiming at him. he flies the small fast x-wing at the sv guns and destroys many of them. poe and his droid bb8 continue shooting at the guns of a huge-sv=h of the bads.
many tie-fighters come out to battle so lia orders r. to escape. po argues and orders bombers to destroy the huge dangerous sv of bads so they will never use it again. he thinks they must use the bombers to destroy h. now when they have an opportunity. the bombers attak h. but many get destroyed by the enslavers. po destroys many tie. paige drops bombs on h. which successfully destroy it but sadly the explosion kills her. the evacuation succeeded. r. escapes and poe goes to visit finn [the one who had been "brainwashed as a slave-warrior" for f-o until the trauma of seeing friend die released the mental conditioning of the enslavors] who is recovering from the injuries of a light saber.
snoke uses the dark side of the force to angrily throw his general to the floor. he also criticizes ren [who is connected to the dark side] until ren breaks his helmet in frustration. the bads follow the r. and attack them. they damage the r. the leaders shoot out from the sv. they all die in space except lea who used the force to fly back in. sadly she could not breathe and faints. When she recovers she interrupts poe's attempted mutiny.
rey flies to the planet where luke is. chui and the droid r2 are in her sv. she hands luke his light saber,[which she brought] but he throws it away. he avoids her but she follows him. he shuts the door to his hut until chui breaks the door.
she follows luke as he gets milk from a giant mammal and spears fish but he refuses to train her. later, r2 shows the old message, for obi-wan, to luke so he finally agrees to train her. he begins teaching her about using the force. rey sees a vision of a pit pulling at her. luke interrupts it because it means she is being pulled to the dark side. luke is very worried that she will jion the dark side especialy when she did not resist uin the vision.
she mysteriously can talk with ren. then she accuses luke of trying to kill ren [the night before ren killed many jedi] she battles luke angrily. Rey leaves. Luke walks to the tree which contains Jedi texts. Yoda's spirit appears and destroys the tree and texts [as luke wanted] by shooting a force-lightning-bolt. He tells Luke to train Rey and that the teachers "who fail for some students are the best teacher" for other students. [so far i have based on video aware that summary at imdb differs but i reject and wrote opposite of their details]
rose sees that finn is trying to leave the rs and zaps him. they go to a planet with fancy casino, because maz [who was fighting a fierce battle] told them to. they find the Master Codebreaker but sadly get captured and sent to jail (for illegally parking their ship.) In their jail cell, they meet "DJ" who manages to open their cell to help them escape to the "fathier" stable. they steal some for riding, but a boy sees them and reaches to push a panic button until Rose gives him her ring with the Resistance's symbol. They ride and the herd trample through the once fancy casino until they reach the sv. they find it is destroyed. DJ brings them another one, so they succeed at escaping from their pursuers. The trio dj, finn and rose fly to a ship of f.o. which captures them.
meanwhile rey came to snoke's shuttle.. ren captures her and takes luke's light-saber from her. then he brings her to snoke; the f-o leader.
+SPOILER ALERT maybe stop here and use summary as intro and watch. after seeing review ending.
snoke orders ren to kill rey. He holds a light saber and surprises snoke. Kylo Ren has ignited Luke's light-saber to kill Snoke. The troops loyal to snoke attack Kylo [for killing their leader] but with rey fighting too, they kill the f-o henchmen. They force-duel for control of a lightsaber.
rey manages to escape and fly to the resistance. then ren declares himself the new leader of f-o.
Resistance fighters fly to Crait. f-o fire upon them and destroy many sv. the pilot of resistance command ship realizes the painful loss of many soldiers which will continue hence she rams it into the First Order ship, splitting it in two and destroying other nearby ships. meanwhile Finn and rose are still captured inside the bads sv. BB-8 escapes and drives the AT-AT armored Walker to fire on f-o soldiers. Finn battles Phasma until he overpowers her. when the impact occurs [as above] sv breaks apart, and Phasma falls into the burning wreckage. Finn and Rose fly to Crait. on crait, gigantic walkers attack the Resistance stronghold. Poe, Finn, Rose, and others fly narrow speeders to fight back. Rey and Chewie fly the Falcon and attack TIE fighters. Some chase the falcon. Luke finally appears there to visit his sister lea. then he faces f-o who shoot at him but surprisingly he is unharmed by the massive amount of firepower. meanwhile the few survivors try to escape. they go to an exit but find it blocked by fallen rocks. rey leaves the falcon and uses the force to open the path.[huh? or lea?]
Ren goes to duel with light-sabers. he swings at luke and discovers Luke is a hologram... projecting himself while still on Ahch-To. meanwhile, the heroes return with the survivors and all board the Falcon to escape while Ren screams in frustration.
luke watches and enjoys a twin sunset. he smiles and vanishes and joins the force. the falcon visits canto and the people see it and become inspired. end of 8.
crawl: "long time ago and far away". text crawls telling that the "first order"=f-o rules [many systems] because already destroyed the republic government with the planets from which they governed. snoke leads f-o and wants to rule entire galaxy. lia leads the Resistantance=r to fight back. she hopes her brother luke will assist the battle. f-o discovered r. base and comes to atak so r is evacuating.= the resistance is evacuating because the evil "first order" is coming to attack. [end text]
from the planet, many space vehicles=sv go up for evacuation. meanwhile, f-o sv. arrive. a giant gun aims at the r. base. one brave pilot named poe, negotiates until he sees bads are aiming at him. he flies the small fast x-wing at the sv guns and destroys many of them. poe and his droid bb8 continue shooting at the guns of a huge-sv=h of the bads.
many tie-fighters come out to battle so lia orders r. to escape. po argues and orders bombers to destroy the huge dangerous sv of bads so they will never use it again. he thinks they must use the bombers to destroy h. now when they have an opportunity. the bombers attak h. but many get destroyed by the enslavers. po destroys many tie. paige drops bombs on h. which successfully destroy it but sadly the explosion kills her. the evacuation succeeded. r. escapes and poe goes to visit finn [the one who had been "brainwashed as a slave-warrior" for f-o until the trauma of seeing friend die released the mental conditioning of the enslavors] who is recovering from the injuries of a light saber.
snoke uses the dark side of the force to angrily throw his general to the floor. he also criticizes ren [who is connected to the dark side] until ren breaks his helmet in frustration. the bads follow the r. and attack them. they damage the r. the leaders shoot out from the sv. they all die in space except lea who used the force to fly back in. sadly she could not breathe and faints. When she recovers she interrupts poe's attempted mutiny.
rey flies to the planet where luke is. chui and the droid r2 are in her sv. she hands luke his light saber,[which she brought] but he throws it away. he avoids her but she follows him. he shuts the door to his hut until chui breaks the door.
she follows luke as he gets milk from a giant mammal and spears fish but he refuses to train her. later, r2 shows the old message, for obi-wan, to luke so he finally agrees to train her. he begins teaching her about using the force. rey sees a vision of a pit pulling at her. luke interrupts it because it means she is being pulled to the dark side. luke is very worried that she will jion the dark side especialy when she did not resist uin the vision.
she mysteriously can talk with ren. then she accuses luke of trying to kill ren [the night before ren killed many jedi] she battles luke angrily. Rey leaves. Luke walks to the tree which contains Jedi texts. Yoda's spirit appears and destroys the tree and texts [as luke wanted] by shooting a force-lightning-bolt. He tells Luke to train Rey and that the teachers "who fail for some students are the best teacher" for other students. [so far i have based on video aware that summary at imdb differs but i reject and wrote opposite of their details]
rose sees that finn is trying to leave the rs and zaps him. they go to a planet with fancy casino, because maz [who was fighting a fierce battle] told them to. they find the Master Codebreaker but sadly get captured and sent to jail (for illegally parking their ship.) In their jail cell, they meet "DJ" who manages to open their cell to help them escape to the "fathier" stable. they steal some for riding, but a boy sees them and reaches to push a panic button until Rose gives him her ring with the Resistance's symbol. They ride and the herd trample through the once fancy casino until they reach the sv. they find it is destroyed. DJ brings them another one, so they succeed at escaping from their pursuers. The trio dj, finn and rose fly to a ship of f.o. which captures them.
meanwhile rey came to snoke's shuttle.. ren captures her and takes luke's light-saber from her. then he brings her to snoke; the f-o leader.
+SPOILER ALERT maybe stop here and use summary as intro and watch. after seeing review ending.
rey manages to escape and fly to the resistance. then ren declares himself the new leader of f-o.
Resistance fighters fly to Crait. f-o fire upon them and destroy many sv. the pilot of resistance command ship realizes the painful loss of many soldiers which will continue hence she rams it into the First Order ship, splitting it in two and destroying other nearby ships. meanwhile Finn and rose are still captured inside the bads sv. BB-8 escapes and drives the AT-AT armored Walker to fire on f-o soldiers. Finn battles Phasma until he overpowers her. when the impact occurs [as above] sv breaks apart, and Phasma falls into the burning wreckage. Finn and Rose fly to Crait. on crait, gigantic walkers attack the Resistance stronghold. Poe, Finn, Rose, and others fly narrow speeders to fight back. Rey and Chewie fly the Falcon and attack TIE fighters. Some chase the falcon. Luke finally appears there to visit his sister lea. then he faces f-o who shoot at him but surprisingly he is unharmed by the massive amount of firepower. meanwhile the few survivors try to escape. they go to an exit but find it blocked by fallen rocks. rey leaves the falcon and uses the force to open the path.[huh? or lea?]
Ren goes to duel with light-sabers. he swings at luke and discovers Luke is a hologram... projecting himself while still on Ahch-To. meanwhile, the heroes return with the survivors and all board the Falcon to escape while Ren screams in frustration.
luke watches and enjoys a twin sunset. he smiles and vanishes and joins the force. the falcon visits canto and the people see it and become inspired. end of 8.
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