Friday, May 6, 2022

improve bad summary of book wonderland 1865

BOOK summary, i edited to improve a summary of the book.
by a river, where a boat was moored, 9]
Alice, a young girl, felt very bored [9].
Alice was sitting with her older sister who was reading a book that lackd pictures. a white rabbit rushed by. she felt surprised that it was wearing a waistcoat. when it checkd a pocket-clock, it talked, "i'm late". Alice curiously chased it down a rabbit-hole. she crawled along until suddenly she was falling down... down, down, down. she saw mirrors and paintings hanging on the walls,  as she slowly fell in Wonderland. she took a jar from a shelf. The jar was labeled "ORANGE JAM" but it had never been filled with jam. as she slowly fell, Alice put it IN one of the cup-boards. she began falling faster, deeper down for a very long time. it WAS very deep. would she pass the center of the earth? if so would she come... out the other side of the planet?  she had time to sing many songs. the "words came out wrong". finally she slowed and landed on a huge pile of soft leaves. 
Alice chased the White Rabbit that hurried. they turned a corner but she stood alone in a long low hall. a glass table with small area formd. a tiny golden key suddenly became visible.  after that, She noticed a low curtain. behind it was a low door. the key unlockd it so she saw a gorgeous garden. the opening was too small for her to crawl in. she carried the tiny golden key to the table, and felt shocked by hopelessness that she cant reach the flowers to which she wanted to go. a glass bottle containing lemon yellow fluid emerged on the empty table.  Alice sniffed the liquid and it had the fragrance of baked turkey. the "mouth" of the bottle moved saying, "drink from me". [contrast disney video, doorknob said drink it.] she did. when she had drunk she SHRUNK, low as the name of color yel-low contains "low, "  til the size for the low door.  it was locked again. she saw the key on the table ergo she was now too low to get it. She climbed a leg of the table, but it was too slippery. tears filled her eyes until she saw a glass box [protruding from a glass leg of the table.] In the box sat a cake with red cream. Alice ate the cake. 
TWO 7pC2 [which has much less events than c1] The cake GREW Alice so she grabbed the golden key, went one big step to the low door, and unlocked it. success! but she was further from fitting thru it than before. only one eye fit the opening. she began crying tears from her huge eyes. Rabbit returned carrying a fan. when it saw giant Alice, due to fear it [the future rabbit stew] dropd its fan and fled. Alice coold herself using the fan. she doubted if she is still the same person as before she had shrunk. the fan shrunk her so she swam in her own tears, until a Mouse swam by. Alice spoke with it. they were swimming, while she told it about her pet cat. this scared it, so Alice told about a dog that can do tricks. one is killing rats... this scared it away. she apologized by saying she would stop. it led Alice to shore to a crowd of talking birds. [this book summary which i edited, now has ten lines for seven pages with too few events] 
THREE 7pC3 The group wanted to dry themselves, so the mouse told them a "very dry" lesson about england's surrender. this failed so a Dodo suggested running round. they ran until dry. Alice gave her sweets to each one. mouse told them, a "tale" in the shape of a "tail", about its danger before it left. after that, Alice told them about her pet cat. this scared them away. she loved Dinah and felt sad that everyone else doesn't. Alice cried and felt lonely, until she heard someone coming.  [this summary which i edited, now has six lines for ten pages with almost no events. in contrast to praiseworthy chapter 4]. 
FOUR 9pC4 Rabbit returned and sent her to bring a fan. Inside its room, Alice grew and got stuck. one of her arms extended out the window. she fit her toes up its chimney. [censored]. +fan fiction: Lizard loosened ash when in chimney which blew into Alice's nose. she sneezed from her huge child lungs blasting air up the chimney]. it flew up into the sky. Alice heard the voices of animals, that gathered outside, exclaiming that lizard flew. 
The mob threw pebbles at her, thru a window. ow! that hurt her. they transform into little cakes. Alice ate one so it shrunk her low again. fan fiction: a purple pebble hit her neck and its touch shrunk her. she took the fan and exited. she announced, "your fan is here" and set it by the door.] She ran into a forest. a puppy seemd bigger than alice. She threw a stick so it ran to it, picked it up and sat tired. fan fiction: she threw a cake with yellow frosting from the rabbit's kitchen to it. it ate it and shrunk low. then she threw a cake with red cream, far so it ran far, ate it and grew.
She came to a mushroom. a blue Caterpillar was sitting on it. 9p5>after Al and Caterpillar conversed, it crawld down and into the grass. it told her that one side of the mushroom will grow her taller but the other side will make her shorter. She broke off pieces from opposite curves of the round mushroom. when she ate from one side it shrunk her body so her chin pressed on her shoe. the other grew her neck high above the trees. a pigeon accused her "you are a serpent trying to steal my eggs". Alice ate until her natural height. 
She came to a low house so ate mushroom to shrink to the door height.10p6>A Fish-faced man ran to the home and read an invitation to the Duchess's Frog-Face doorman. they bowed causing their curls to tangle causing alice to burst laughing. Alice entered.
+63+1The Cook was throwing dishes at the duchess. on the fire, soup was boiling that had too much pepper. the pepper in the air causd Alice, the Duchess and her baby (but not the cook nor her grinning Cheshire Cat) to sneeze repeatedly. The Duchess repeatedly tosd her baby up. next she gave him to Alice, before obeying the invitation. alice carried him until he changed into a pig, so she set it free in the woods. The Cheshire Cat appeared in a tree. it directed her to the March Hare, before disappearing. 9p7> Alice joined a tea party, with the Hatter  the March Hare, and the Dormouse. they drank tea. the date was FOURTH May. they talked until she left. Alice came to a door in a tree. entering it she came into the long hallway with the glass table. She opend the low door, ate mushroom, and shrunk. finally she entered the gorgeous garden. 9p8> In the garden, Alice met cards painting white roses red. cards marched  passed her. Alice met the dangerous Queen. when she saw white roses, she orderd "Off with their heads." alice and queen played a game, croquet. they used flamingos to hit hedgehog-balls. The Queen decreed death to many players. Alice saw the Cheshire Cat's head but its body was invisible.its head was floating in the air. cards went to lead the Duchess out of prison for advice. The Duchess came there, too late to decide about cutting off the cat's head. 9p9>She spoke with alice. The Queen of Hearts sent d' away. Alice met the Gryphon, who led her to the cow-Turtle named Mock Turtle. m' cried and told its story, "i was a real turtle in school" Gryphon suggested that they have fun. 10p10>The Mock Turtle danced with the Gryphon The Mock Turtle sang about Soup. Gryphon pulled Alice to a trial. 8p11>At the trial, the Knave of Hearts got accused of stealing tarts. the judge is the King of Hearts. The first witness was the Mad Hatter. next the Duchess' Cook revealed the ingredients for baking tarts... pepper! dormouse corrected her "syrup". Alice was growing to her natural size, due to the effect of the mushroom ending. she got called as a witness. 9p12> Alice accidentally flipped the jury box.  they argued about her size until The Queen decreed "Off with her head!" meaning without. cards flew onto her causing her to wake on the riverbank. Alice told her older sister about her odd visit in the dream. She walked home for tea. her sister stayed and heard the same characters nearby. she knows alice will become adult and tell her amazing story to children and listen to their simple sorros and joys.

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