fixing bad summary goblet fire hp 4, chapters 30 to end

fixing bad summary goblet fire hp 4, chapters 30 to end

c30 The Pensieve; Harry, in Dumbledore’s office, saw the past in the water of Dumbledore’s "Pensieve": dumbledore's memory of Karkaroff saying evidence in a court of wizards, Crouch’s son was sentenced to Azkaban prison.

C31 The Third Task; Weasley parents came to watch Harry in the Tournament, the four champions enter the "maze" for the tournament task, and faced monsters. Krum attacked Cedric. Harry met a sphinx and solved its riddle. a huge spider attacked. Harry and Cedric touched the Cup at the same time, tying for the hogwarts win.

C32 Flesh, Blood, and Bone; Harry and Cedric portkey-ed to a graveyard. a slave of voldemort killed Cedric as ordered, and then tied Harry and used magic to take harry "blood" to use return a body to Voldemort.

C33 The Death Eaters; Voldemort exhibited his plans to the "Death Eaters" to kill and torture those who had been disloyal to him as he did to some. he told the story how he lived after losing his body. by his "ghost occupying rats" until wormtail found him and did magic to "back to life" recorporate him in a body.

C34 Priori Incantatem; Voldemort again tryd to kill Harry. their spells clashed. Voldemort’s "prior victims" emerged from his wand to distract v' and aid Harry escape. he touched the Portkey.

C35 Veritaserum; Dumbledore prevent Moody from killing Harry by blasting Moody. d' opend the seven-locked trunk to free the real Moody. the Polyjuice Potion ended effect so the fake Moody is exposed as Crouch’s son, who they questioned using "Verita-serum" a magic potion that compels the truth. Moody "divulged" he put Harry’s name in the Goblet.

C36 The Parting of the Ways; Harry went to nurse Madam Pomfrey. a Dementor Kissed=killed Crouch. Fudge refused to believe Voldemort returned to power. Dumbledore sent people on various errands.

C37 The Beginning; Harry, Ron and Hermione again visited Hagrid. at the yearly Leaving Feast, Dumbledore told the students Cedric got murdered. Goodbyes are said. on the train home, Hermione exhibited the captured Skeeter (a beetle) in a jar. Harry, who had plenty of gold in a vault, gave his tournament winnings to Fred and George to "start" their shop of magical pranks.

END goblet

fix bad presentation of peter pan

book critique peter and wendy book, peter pan

such an amazing story with flying children! and jealous fairy... and like treasure island: dangerous pirates. also fighting bad guys and even redskins! wow.

the tragedy is intense as the first chapters are extremely poor quality, objective order and sentence structure and bad charactar descriptions. the first chapters do not tell stories nor do the paragraphs and sentences even flow connecting ideas.

the descriptions of the characters are fragmented and the order horrid. luckily the week i was slowly started fixing the book worth fixing, i found the adaptation by Arneson.

his adaptation is admittedly i must confess even better than my attempt and he fixed the whole book so i recommend his adaptation for young readers better than the poorly presented original by an author who heard "great ideas from a kid" but lacked the skill to present them.

i will provide my repair so you can see not y as good as arneson.

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contrast mine to barrie's bad and arneson better adaptation of the amazing story: "first Chapter PETER BREAKS THROUGH [simplified]

Wendy knew that she will grow to an adult. only one, peter pan would not. when she was two years old, in a garden, she gave a flower to her mother, Mrs. Darling. ma, wished “Oh, why can’t you remain like this for ever!” wendy understood that she can't but must grow up. she knew Two is the beginning of the end. [5] wendy lived at address 14. ma was a loveable lady. wendy would play with tiny boxes, one within the other. she opened many and found one more. [when i reached here i was lucky to find arnesons before i spent effort continuing. arneson did a great job so i stop and recomend his adaptation.

muslim according to quran and islam surprised

in the year 2005, i found a hint in the "authoritative" rabbinic talmud that the laws of god had time limits. both rabbis in the debate agreed that a certain command needed repitition but one rabbi interpreted that it had repitition this matched a tradition in mkilta that the bible commands were for a limited time unless specified as some were this also matched the rule "grab less".

if so the religion of the rabbis was not only sinning in the sin of nadab and abihuu who volunteered a foreign fire not commanded for example light candles of hannuka that god did not command deserving death but even the commands were for a limited time and respect for tradition obligated respected time limits both dough custom c alled halla and truma on wine or even vegetables insult the tradition of a time limit as if no time limit.

similarly the less obvious ones that simply lack a specification for long term for example not working on sabbath in exodus chapter twenty 20.

if so what was the FOLLOWING religion that god wanted us to do after the time limit passed?

a billion catholics cant be wrong? so i studied about catholic ceremony and realized this is a problem of no new laws by the jewish tradition in talmud shabat and mishna zevahim about added blood where adding is a worse sin and more important than risking doing less. also the idea of a pope aroused my curiosity and they said the source was peter but jesuus appointed peter and peter had a mother in law so the pope idea of catholic rejected its own book.

next i tried islam and studied many ideas of islam until one fateful day in 2005.

i asked "if i join i wanna how the quran REALLY treats the deniers of muhamed". suspicious my teacher like a qadi in u.s. what do you mean to ask really?

i mean people only said they accepted islam for fear but were probably lying just to save their lives.

this caused my teacher to show me verse 2,62 in quran "jews have reward" so i asked if you truly believe that then you could be a christian. he explained that the qurran including that section is true and he truly could be a christian and eat ramadan but he chooses to fast ramadan and hopes for greater reward than the jews.

i argued: you are only saying that here in america but AFTER i commit to quran you will show me the opposite source somewhere same as if i was in saudi arabia.

my teacher insisted no the quran is true! even he could be a muslim while not doing the quran details and despite a later verse that book was "abrogated" by the later verse in this book 2 published first and anyway the word islam does not mean obey quran but belief in god.

i said if you interpret correctly then the quran is not exclusive. h eagreed "that is my point you are only joining because you WANT to join and choose between the valid path of monotheism or islam s your choice between valid options." i said thank you and that i would continue me search.

i wonder if in saudi arabia muslims are toild the quran is true... that they truly have several "VALID" options according to quran itself book,sura 2 baqara, aya 62.

so why do write this now?

kuz someone claimed that he read many peaceful verses in the quran and ignored the rest... and the rule of "abrogation" by later teaching.

even when able to reconcile tradition is that the later abrogated the earlier message different lists of 240 total over 500.

one of them is this issue in book 3 "lose the future world if noty islam" some list this as abrogating 2,62 but traditiojn is that book 2 is later than book 3! the order was not because book 3 was in the second city. so if abrogate then 2 abrogated 3! but truly as the muslim representative taught me islam does not exclude other monotheistic faiths as above.

i wish more muslims knew they had options, according to quran itself, as above perhaps some would eat on ramadan and suffer less... but more IMPORTANTLY  believe the MAIN faith of christian that jesus "died for sin but god raised him from dead" and be saved from sins.

fixing bad summary goblet fire hp 4, chapters 21-29

 C20 The First Task; Harry warnd Diggory about the dangerous deadly dragons. Moody hinted harry should fly. Hermione guided Harry in practicing the Summoning Charm. The "first task" was to get a golden egg from a dragon. Harry gets his in less time than the others' successes. the clue about the second task is in each golden egg.
 C21 The House-Elf Liberation Front; hermione continued her campaign for "elf" rights. no "a surprise party" instead "pastry". the bad summary at "hp-lex" did not summarize the chapter: harry went to the kitchen where he spoke with elves who gave him and ron pastry.
 C22 The Unexpected Task; Harry, the powerful young wizard, struggled with a difficult "task", asking Cho to be his dance partner. she already agreed with Cedric.
 C23 The Yule Ball; on Christmas morning, they opend presents. Ron is angry at Hermione for dancing at the "ball" with Krum, their competitor.
 C24 Rita Skeeter’s Scoop; Harry, Ron and Hermione visited Hogsmeade. harry criticized "Rita" for shaming hagrid.
 C25 The Egg and the Eye; Harry went with the "Egg" into the prefects’ bathroom. Moaning Myrtle said cedric opend his underwater.
 C26 The Second Task; Harry failed to find a solution for breathing in water. he "continues his spell" oops! he continued his search at night until Dobby gave him Gillyweed. [video nevil helped harry with this but who stole the gillyweed? dobby gave nevil] Harry carried up Ron and Fleur’s sister from the sea. note: here is another hint harry and ron are intimately more than best friends. not only rons explosive reaction for harry not telling him but the parallel of rescuing spouses. despite sister could indicate ron is like a brother still combined with rons reaction this matches the spouse rescue.
 C27 Padfoot Returns; Snape shamed hermione in class, Harry, Hermione, n ron met "Sirius" the "padfoot", outside Hogsmeade, hearing about Barty Crouch’s son in Azkaban prison.
 C28 The Madness of Mr. Crouch; Hermione got threats by owl, Harry saw "Crouch" had bloody knees, and torn robes. Crouch was talking to a tree. when harry returned he saw that Crouch had run away leaving Krum injured and stunned.
 C29 The Dream; Harry again "dreamt" about Voldemort.
c30

topic: legalize drugs

the topic is changing laws that forbid addictive stuff. i dunno which but the LOUD trend these days is "legalize" drugs... ignoring the addict part.
atheists say "we dont need bible to teach stealing is bad" we see they do kuz without bible they wanna legalize drugs... the addiction ADDS more people DESPARATE to steal due to addiction.

keep people away from stealing by laws limiting and drug enforcement. in fact most theives use deadly guns that they get even where guns are banned such as chicago... drugs lead to murder so we must distance people from drug addiction to prevent adding more theft and gun threats and murders.
if we tell teens "dont take drugs kuz you might end up killing for their wallet" it might have a greater impact than "your brain fries" which is not like an egg.

fixing bad summary goblet fire hp 4, chapters 16-26

continuing chapter 16. see earlier post for part one. CONTINUITY: until now: harry's class learnd the 3 "Unforgivable Curses": control, kill, and excruciating pain. Harry and Ron write fake predictions for Divination. Harry tried to resist the control curse. the students from "Beauxbatons and Durmstrang" [c15] flew to hogwarts in carriage and in submerged ship respectively.

if not read yet see:

https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/05/fix-bad-summary-potter-book-4-2000.html

there.

PART TWO
C16 The Goblet of Fire; Fred and George "fail to fool the Goblet of Fire". live bats decorated the Hallowe’en feast. also carved pumpkins in the corners. the Goblet chose the competitors called champions, one from each school and surprisingly also harry too.
C17 The Four Champions; talk why extra "fourth"? many suspect Harry put his own name including Ron who distanced from harry.

C18 The Weighing of the Wands; Malfoy taunted Harry about the magical badges. when he called hermione a mudblood, harry drew his wand. malfoy drew his to duel! both zap [not harry first] the curses collided and hit Goyle and Hermione. harry's curse caused boils on his nose intended for draco, whose curse caused hermione's teeth to grow long. they "Weighd Wands".
C19 The Hungarian Horntail; Harry hid under his Invisibility Cloak to accompany Hermione to Hogsmeade, but despite the magical cloak, Moody saw him. harry learnt about the "horntail" dragon with horns on its tail.
C20 The First Task; Harry warnd Diggory about the dangerous deadly dragons. Moody hinted harry should fly. Hermione guided Harry in practicing the Summoning Charm. The "first task" was to get a golden egg from a dragon. Harry gets his in less time than the others' successes. the clue about the second task is in each golden egg.
C21 The House-Elf Liberation Front; hermione continued her campaign for "elf rights."
C22 The Unexpected Task; Harry, the powerful young wizard, struggled with a difficult "task" asking Cho to be his dance partner. she already agreed with Cedric.
C23 The Yule Ball; on Christmas morning, they opend presents. Ron is angry at Hermione for dancing with Krum, their competitor at the "ball".
C24 Rita Skeeter’s Scoop; Harry, Ron and Hermione visited Hogsmeade. harry criticized "Rita" for shaming hagrid.
C25 The Egg and the Eye; Harry went with the Egg into the prefects’ bathroom. Moaning Myrtle said cedric opend his underwater. harry "got stuck in the stairs."
C26 The Second Task; Harry failed to find a solution for breathing in water. he "continues his spell" oops! he continued his search at night until
Dobby gave him Gillyweed. [video nevil helped harry with this but who stole the gillyweed? dobby gave nevil] Harry carried up Ron and Fleur’s sister from the sea. note: here is another hint harry and ron are intimately more than best friends. not only rons explosive reaction for harry not telling him but the parallel of rescuing spouses. despite sister could indicate ron is like a brother still combined with rons reaction this matches the spouse rescue.

fixing bad summary goblet fire h.p.

continuing chapter 16. see earlier post for part one.
continuity: C14 The Unforgivable Curses; harry's class learnd the 3 Unforgivable Curses: control, kill, and excruciating pain. Harry and Ron write fake predictions for Divination. C15 Beauxbatons and Drumstrang; Harry tried to resist it the Beauxbatons and Durmstrang students arrive by flying carriage and submerged ship respectively. up.
part two
C16 The Goblet of Fire; Fred and George "fail to fool the Goblet of Fire". live bats decorated the Hallowe’en feast. also carved pumpkins in the corners. the Goblet chose the competitors called champions, one from each school and surprisingly also harry too.
C17 The Four Champions; talk why extra "fourth"? many suspect Harry put his own name including Ron who distanced from harry.
C18 The Weighing of the Wands; Malfoy taunted Harry about the magical badges. when he called hermione a mudblood, harry drew his wand. malfoy drew his to duel! both zap [not harry first] the curses collided and hit Goyle and Hermione. harry's curse caused boils on his nose intended for draco, whose curse caused hermione's teeth to grow long. the "Weighing of the Wands".
C19 The Hungarian Horntail; Harry hid under his Invisibility Cloak to accompany Hermione to Hogsmeade, but despite the magical cloak, Moody saw him.
C20 The First Task; Harry warnd Diggory about the dangerous deadly dragons. Moody hinted harry should fly. Hermione guided Harry in practicing the Summoning Charm. The "first task" was to get a golden egg from a dragon. Harry gets his in less time than the others' successes. the clue about the second task is in each golden egg.
C21 The House-Elf Liberation Front; hermione continued her campaign for elf rights. friends surprised harry with a party.
C22 The Unexpected Task; Harry, the powerful young wizard, struggled with a difficult "task" asking Cho to be his dance partner. she already agreed with Cedric.
C23 The Yule Ball; on Christmas morning, they opend presents. Ron is angry at Hermione for dancing with Krum, their competitor at the "ball".
C24 Rita Skeeter’s Scoop; Harry, Ron and Hermione visited Hogsmeade. harry criticized "Rita" for shaming hagrid.
C25 The Egg and the Eye; Harry went with the Egg into the prefects’ bathroom. Moaning Myrtle said cedric opend his underwater. harry "got stuck in the stairs."
C26 The Second Task; Harry failed to find a solution for breathing in water. he "continues his spell" oops! he continued his search at night until
Dobby gave him Gillyweed. [video nevil helped harry with this but who stole the gillyweed? dobby gave nevil] Harry carried up Ron and Fleur’s sister from the sea. note: here is another hint harry and ron are intimately more than best friends. not only rons explosive reaction for harry not telling him but the parallel of rescuing spouses. despite sister could indicate ron is like a brother still combined with rons reaction this matches the spouse rescue.