Saturday, April 30, 2022

infant circumcision and slaughtering animals beside food

 in the era of jeremia [first jewish temple[ God BOTHERED to send a message  to FIX THE ERROR IN THE TEMPLE,  God of israel told jeremia, "i did not command slaughtering nor burnt offering. eat them." [source jeremiah 7] similarly god is not dead now nor silent but sent several people who refused to obey until sending me with a similar message for israelites and for human morality usualy empathy "evil to inflict pain or harm" yet no empathy for the injured cut infant nor empathy for fetus the same human that will be born... human morality failed. God was not acting dead but sent people one me i obey and transmit, "on the eighth day he will say words about heavy [hebrew original in book leviticus 12,3] flesh. God of israel told noam, "i did not command to cut any ceremonial incision in the skin of an infant. tell israelites to stop adding this ceremony [matching mishna zbahim]. the one who inflicted pain will get added pain [matching mishna sota] in his life and after death. anyone who does this added ceremony that i did not command deserves death same as nadab and abihu for doing any incense not commanded [source lev. 10].


Monday, April 25, 2022

leviticus chapter 8 can cause error. book leviticus "not trustworthy"

 leviticus chapter 8 can cause an error that  book called leviticus is certainly not trustworthy, not merely "skepticism before accepting".
this chapter can cause an error that "god commanded animal offering" which is an error according to tradition in prophecy of jeremiah 7. even the part "annointing a priest" can lead to the error that a priest "in action" will burn anything, as liars claimed based on this chapter until i showed them jeremia book. even burning a flour loaf is an error according to tradition in deuteronomy 30,14. considering the chapter and scroll section contains an animal it was certainly "not commanded" and for this reason nearly a thousand words purified from book leviticus for clarity. 0/1000 words.

wonderland, book summary 1865 edited by n. tal

BOOK summary, i edited to improve a summary of the book:
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By a river, where a boat was moored, 9]
Alice, a young girl, felt very bored [9].
Alice was sitting with her older sister who was reading a book that lackd pictures. a white rabbit rushed by. she felt surprised that it was wearing a waistcoat. when it checkd a pocket-clock, it talked, "i'm late". Alice curiously chased it down a rabbit-hole. she crawled along until suddenly she was falling down... down, down, down. she saw cup-boards and book-shelves on the walls,  as she slowly fell in Wonderland. mirrors and paintings also hung there. she took a jar from a shelf. The jar was labeled "ORANGE JAM" but it had never been filled with jam.  as she slowly fell, Alice put it IN a cupboard. she began falling faster, deeper down for a very long time. would she pass the center of the earth? if so would she come... out the other side of the planet?  she finally slowed and landed on a pile of soft leaves. 
Alice chased the White Rabbit that hurried. they turned a corner. she stood in a long low hall. it was empty and she did not see the rabbit. a glass table with small area formd. a tiny golden key suddenly became visible. Alice tried it in every door, around the hall, but the key was too tiny. She then noticed a low curtain. behind it was a low rabbit door. the key unlockd it. she saw beyond it was a gorgeous garden. the opening was too small for her to crawl in. she carried the tiny golden key to the table, and felt shocked by hopelessness that she cant reach the flowers to which she wanted to go. a glass bottle containing lemon yellow fluid emerged on the empty table.  Alice sniffed the liquid and it had the fragrance of baked turkey. the "mouth" of the bottle moved saying, "drink from me". [contrast disney video, doorknob said drink it.] she did. when she had drunk she SHRUNK, low as the name of color yel-low contains "low, "  til the size for the low door.  it was locked again. she saw the key on the table ergo she was now too low to get it. She climbed a leg of the table, but it was too slippery. tears filled her eyes until she saw a glass box [protruding from a glass leg of the table.] In the box sat a cake with red cream. Alice ate the cake. C2 [which has much less events than c1] The cake GREW Alice so she grabbed the golden key, went one big step to the low door, and unlocked it. success! but she was further from fitting thru it than before. only one eye fit the opening. she began crying tears from her huge eyes. Rabbit returned carrying a fan. when it saw giant Alice, due to fear it [the future rabbit stew] dropd its fan and fled. Alice coold herself using the fan. she doubted if she is still the same person as before she had shrunk. the fan shrunk her so she swam in her own tears, until a Mouse swam by. Alice spoke with it. they were swimming, while she told it about her pet cat. this scared it, so Alice told about a dog that can do tricks. one is killing rats... this scared it away. she apologized by saying she would stop. it led Alice to shore to a crowd of talking birds. [this book summary which i edited, now has ten lines for ten paages with too many thoughts] C3 The group wanted to dry themselves, so the mouse told them a "very dry" lesson about england's surrender. this failed so a Dodo suggested running round. they ran until dry. Alice gave her sweets to each one. mouse told them, a "tale" in the shape of a "tail", about its danger before it left. after that, Alice told them about her pet cat. this scared them away. she loved Dinah and felt sad that everyone else doesn't. Alice cried and felt lonely, until she heard someone coming.  [this summary which i edited, now has six lines for ten pages with almost no events. in contrast to praiseworthy chapter 4]. C4 Rabbit returned and sent her to get a fan.

Thursday, April 21, 2022

alice wonderland 1951, summary of video with alice 1999

 alice, 1951 video [disney from BOTH books with alice 1999

in the afternoon, by a river, Alice sat on a tree branch with her cat. Al sang about talking flowers and dressed Rabbits... and SAW one! a "white one was wearing a waistcoat." it spoke! n checkd the time! by pock-et-clock! it quickly ran. She chased it into a rabbit hole. she fell far... down, down, down. 

al chased it until a second door. its Doorknob told Alice to drink. a bottle was now on a glass table. The fluid SHRUNK her to the size for the door, which was locked. the key appeared on the table, but she was now too small to reach it. The Doorknob told her to try a box. she ate a cookie that grew her... too large. 

She started crying. her huge tears became a sea. The Doorknob said to try the bottle. she drank the last drop and shrank small enuf to fall inside the bottle. it [containing her] floated and drifted to the keyhole. it opened wide so she flowed *thrue. waves washed al ashore where animals tryd to get dry by running in water waves. 

Alice met fat twins who recited "The Walrus" story [book: looking glass c4]. she came to the White Rabbit's home... a house! Alice +fan fiction went thrue a looking glass" n entered and grew so big that she got stuck inside a room [b1]. her feet were outside! Bill the Lizard climbed down the chimney. [fan fiction, he sneezed and flew up out.] 

she sneezed so he flew up out. Alice ate a carrot [her arm was out the window] from its garden that shrank her until the height of a flower. she met talking flowers [book: Looking Glass ch' 2] and bread-and-butterflies [LG C3] shaped like bread slices. The flowers SPOKE !! friendly. Alice sang "All in the Golden Afternoon". 

after the song, they accused her, and shout, "you're a weed, go away." kuz she was clearly not a flower and weeds use their water. She met a Caterpillar who sat on a mushroom. she was 3 inches tall too. it told her advice about the mushroom [x she, it]. after that it became a butterfly and FLEW away. 

she broke off two pieces from opposite sides. eating caused her to grow tall. a bird accused, "serpent!" she nibbled the other bit that caused her to shrink very small. Finally Alice grew to her usual size. she put the pieces in her apron pockets. Alice heard confusing directions from the Cheshire Cat who grinned. 

it disappeard! she entered a garden. Mad Hatter and 2 celebrated "unbirthday". Alice left to a forest. Cheshire Cat reappeard and directed her into the queen's  garden. Alice saw Cards painting white roses red. Queen of Hearts n King came with a card army.

they playd croquet game using live flamingos to hit the balls that were live hedgehogs. card soldiers bent to be the arches.  Alice got  judged at trial and saw the Mad Hatter n Cheshire Cat who appeard and causd distraction. Al ate mushroom n grew "gigantic", but... surprise! she shrunk to her normal size.

the Queen commanded "Off with her head!"  the cards chased al back to the Doorknob. Alice cant get thru the locked door but doorknob comforted her that she was "already on the other side. look!" she Looked through the keyhole, and saw herself asleep. the card soldiers came nearer, she calld, "Alice, wake up!" to her sleeping self... 

and awoke just in time. she and her sister walked away. the end.
___Alice 1999 [i blended 3 summaries, a,b in c]: Stage fright caused Alice (Tina Majorino) to flee. she chased a white rabbit into a rabbit hole. potions magicly shrunk her and stretched her tall she got stuck. she cried a sea of tears. she met odd beings: a Caterpillar, a Cheshire Cat, and the Queen of Hearts card who playd croquet with Alice. She also met a White Knight who was clumsy! [stolen by harry potter film same year].
later, she found a tree that had a door. she drank tea with a Mad Hatter. she heard singing and talking flowers and listend to singing trees and to confidence advice from the caterpillar.

Sunday, April 17, 2022

alice 11a, the accusation edited by n. tal

continuity: "they" alice and gryphon went to a trial.

CHAPTER 11: Who Stole the Tarts? The King and Queen of Hearts were sitting on their throne. 
alice +and Gryphon, arrived. she saw a big crowd... many sorts of little beasts and birds. also all of the cards, including other royals. alice felt relieved they had not been killed by the cruel queen of hearts who seemed heartless. the accused Knave was standing, with a j on his shoulder. he was chaind. a diamond soldier with a diamond shaped spear tip stood on each side to prevent him from escaping. the White Rabbit was standing and holding a trumpet.
a table had a large dish with tarts. she began looking around. she had read about courts in books, the judge wore a great wig, and a crown over it. the jury box held twelve things: some were animals, and the rest were birds. she felt proud that she knew a word that very few young girls of her age knew. The twelve were writing on slates. Alice whispered to the Gryphon, “What are they writing? They can’t have anything yet, before the trial’s begun.” g answered, “They’re writing  their names, so... um each will remember its name.” the White Rabbit announced, “Silence in the court.” the King put on his spectacles and glared at g. a rat wrote the date but misspelled the month. a frog needed to ask a bird which month. it called the frog "stupid" so it wrote "first of stoopid," with a backward s like a stretched 2. a jury lizard, [the same one as at the rabbit's home] wrote using a pencil that squeaked. This annoyd Alice who went behind it and very soon took its pencil. She did it so quickly that this little Lizard, [she remembered they had called him Bill] wondered what had happened to it. l' searched around its place for it. then l' started writing using a finger, which left no mark on the slate. King ordered, “read the accusation.” the White Rabbit, named Harold the Herald, blew three sounds from its trumpet. next it unrolled the scroll, which was longer than a rabbit standing up, and read what follows:
“The Queen of Hearts, baked seven tarts,
    on a summer day:
The Knave of Hearts, stole all those tarts,
    taking them away”
“Tell your decision,” said the King to the jury. Rabbit rushed to add, “Not yet, not yet! much is before that.” the King commanded, “Call the first witness.” the White Rabbit blew three trumpet tones, again, before calling, “First witness, the Hatter." He came near holding a teacup in left hand and buttered bread in the other. “your Majesty,” he began, “these are due to not finishing my tea when I was called.” King complained, “You should have been finished. Which oclock did you begin?” the mad hatter answered, “Fourteenth of March.”
“15th,” said the March Hare who stood arm-in-arm with the Dormouse who added, "16th.” the jury wrote all three dates on their slates, and then added them! and wrote different totals!
to be continued at
there concluding chapter 11.

alice 8, improved edited by n. tal

 Continuity: she again entered, once more the long, low, lamp-lit hall, and faced the nearby small glass table. Now, this time she knew that she would succeed due to the mushroom in her pockets. she first took the tiny golden key, next she unlocked the low door that led into the gorgeous garden. Then she nibbled at the mushroom til she shrunk to the size to fit the low door. she walked along the short passage... and finally... she came, at last, into the beautiful garden, among the bright flowers.
CHAPTER 8; The Queen’s game
Alice saw a large towering tree with wonderful white roses. Oddly, three CARDS, with black clover shape to indicate gardeners, were by it, hurriedly painting them RED. the cards were very thin and oblong and flat, with their "hands and feet at the corners." she heard card two protest, “Five! Don’t splash paint on me like that.” it replied, “Seven bumped my elbow.” Seven cynically complained [note: sound and eye pattern: Seven cynically complained], “Always blame others!” five told Alice, “yesterday, I heard the Queen say 7 deserved death!” the one who she heard first asked, “What for?”7 answered, “2, that’s not your business!”5 spoke on, “it was for bringing tulip roots instead of onions.” Seven threw down its brush angrily and began “of all the unjust things...” then stopped and saw Alice watching them. 2+5 looked round. seeing Alice 2+5 and 7, all 3 bowed low.
Alice asked a little timidly, “tell me why you are painting the roses?” 5+7 remained silent and looked at 2. 2 explained in a low voice, while they rushed to resume painting, “this tree, Miss, ought to grow red roses, but, this morning, some spade dug and planted the seed for a white one, by mistake. we clovers care for the flowers so if the Queen saw them white, she would decree to cut our heads off. +They sang as they painted: [credit disney, editors note: one of my favorite rhymes and melodies] "We're painting roses red,
painting the roses red,
we dare not stop,
nor waste a drop,
so, the paint we spread,
oh, we go ahead,
painting roses red," they painted in rythm and continued, "bum, bum, bum, bum, We're painting roses red,
and many tears we shed...
TWO: kuz we all know,
chorus 5+7: they will not grow
ACE: in fact they'll soon be dead
all 9 numbers: yet, we go ahead,
painting roses red." Alice, who already knew the answer, joined the rhyme speaking, "pardon me,
mister three, 
which thought, do you all dread?
why must you paint them red?"
3 rhyming spoke: oh miss,
fact is,
we all tremble and shake,
they are white by mistake." the painters began singing again:
2: the red queen likes 'em red,
5: if she saw white insted,
7: she'd make a fuss...
all ten gardeners: and each of us, 
would risk losing his head,
2: this is the thought we dread,
5+7: so we, must paint them red.
Alice: painting the roses red
2,5,7: we're painting roses red
all nine numbers: don't tell the queen...
ace: what you have seen...
two: nor say the things we said,
5+7 joined 2: we're painting roses red
Alice: painting the roses red!" they paused and the painters concluded: 
2: not pink,
5: not green
7: nor aquamarine
all eleven sang the finale' together: painting the roses red!"

Saturday, April 16, 2022

my summary of "hobbit" book 1937 by tolkien chapters 1 >5

my summary of "hobbit" 1937 by tolkien

intro the TITLE is awkward "hobbit" what is that word? the book barely said a bit and too late, on page 3 and a bit more in a later book, and the lazy author chose to say "mystery' instead of describe it. so i must introduce: perhaps due to its size it was a type of dwarf? nope. we see in a later book they are nearer to human than to dwarf" so not dwarf. so they are genus homo+ species hobbit near homo sapien. see fan fiction about the origin of hobbits at link:

https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/08/hobbit-from-human-and-dwarf.html

there.

c1, in an era when dragons flew, in a place named "shire", Bil was a type of (oops not "type of dwarf" despite size, but "nearer to human than dwarves to human" in beginning of ring. see fan fiction about the origin of hobbits link in intro.) type of human: genus=homo +species called hobbit [distinguished by hair on the foot below ankle.] like most hobbits, bil lived in a hill-hole [ho+bbit matched ho+le] which is the characteristic of his species of hole dwellers. his name was bilbo baggins. a wizard named gandalf invited bil on a DDangerous adventure to get TTreasure. b' met a group of  DWARVES with names that rhymed in pairs for example "balin and dwalin" [the a in their language was correctly read like pa and father and the o in cob despite one consonant] or "fili and kili"  [the i in their language was correctly read like ee in cheese or feet].

TWO: rain wet the travelers. at night they saw a fire and sent b' to "silently spy". he saw DANGEROUS trolls. b.b. chose to steal a purse from a TROLL pocket. "not a good guy". surprise! the purse is enchanted to announce if it gets stolen. the trolls captured the burglar bil. when he does not return the dwarves went to investigate but unprepared. trolls captured them too. the trolls argued how to prepare them as food. a voice added arguments that lasted until dawn that caused their defeat when the sunlight turned them to "the mountain they were made from" permanent stone. [not freed at dark, a flaw is the troll wrestling that allowed bil to escape yet he did not go to warn the dwarves despite thinking that option before stealing so i censored his freedom as if still captured]. 

NOTE: these two ugly parts were replaced in the video. instead of bil being a burglar, which misunderstood gandalf who meant "quiet" matching hobbit nature to "move unseen and silently," added in rings, they were victims of burglar, the trolls stole two ponies from the dwarves. also instead of the argument causing them to turn to stone gandalf wiz broke a rock, with action, causing sun to petrify them for saving the dwarf group. act to rescue... gandalf had started traveling with them and returned from scouting ahead to act and save them.

After g' saved the team they found the troll cave [where they had hid from the sun on previous days]. inside it was food [to replace the lost food when the pony got scared and jumped into a river, considering the trolls will no longer eat!] and the dead trolls' GOLD. they also took some swords.

THREE: the team came to an ELF town. the elves recognized the swords [from troll cave]. an elf taught them "the light at sunset" will help them find the secret entrance. +fan fiction: the dwarves were EAGER to go to treasure so after one night packed food and left after a literal "short rest".

FOUR: on a mountain trail, the team saw GIANTS were throwing big boulders to each other and catching them. [game but video battle]. Later, a hail storm with lightning flashes and powerful thunder, and howling wind hit the adventurers. they slept in an empty cave, until GOBLINS from deep in the cave stole all their ponies. a scary nightmare woke b' so saw goblins so yelled. wiz awoke and escaped, in a bright flash that killed some of his attackers. goblins "captured the dwarves and Bilbo Baggins." The Great Goblin accused "Murderers". Gandalf reappeared, in a surprise rescue mission. he stepped out from smoke and sparks, that flew all over and burnt and confused goblins. g' plunged an enchanted sword through the Great Goblin which killed it. the dwarves grabbed back the swords. g' led them to the EAST, (in cavern dwarves could not know) and was swinging his sword that glowed that indicated goblins. it cut through the crowd of goblins that had surrounded them. when goblins came beside them they cut them. g' led them into a long tunnel eastward and dwarves alternately carried Bilbo on their backs. they ran far until g' slowed so dwarves passed. he guarded rear and when vengeful goblins came he and thorin cut them down. the others fled back. they rejoined the team until a silent goblin grabbed the dwarf which carried b.b. who fell and banged head. he did not know how the goblins were defeated. b became separated as the dwarves escaped. NOTE: film added an amazing chase and swinging bridges and mass loss of murderous goblins.

FIVE: b regained consciousness in the dark so he crawled and felt his way until he found a ring... a MAGICAL ring that wanted to be found. his enchanted dagger started to glow, due to the danger of a goblin. he used its light to walk "deeper and deeper into the mountain." by a lake, a "slimy, large-eyed, pale-skinned" skinny thing challenged b to riddles. they competed to understand vague rhyming clues. if b lost he must drop dagger and let gollum eat him. if b won then g' must lead him out from the cave. he asked him: "what makes iron rust,

and grinds rock to dust?" b did not know... scared he will die he begged "time". g showed anger that "time" was the answer. [clever!] b asked what is in his own pocket. g did not know so he agreed to lead b out... but then he went to get something... and found that his ring was missing! he returned angry at b for taking his ring. b slid it on his finger as he fled... g overtook him... and passed! the magic ring hid b. g rushed to the entrance to block b escaping with his lost ring... so b followed and by the entrance "jumped over him" and out of the cave.

fan fiction: when g blocked exit  b used his ring to sneak to gollum, who held a stone to bang b, so b used dagger to stab him to death. after we saw that gollum bit frodo finger as obstacle of destroying the ring [film 3 shown before this earlier story] this obstacle will not have occurred. nor that g led... frodo to the giant spider. insted f will wander into the spider cave and get bit. sam will instantly stab spider and save him.

SIX: b reunited with team. wolves surround them!

continued chapter 6 at 

https://thinkforyourselfn8.blogspot.com/2022/08/my-summary-of-hobbit-book-1937-by.html

there.