Wednesday, July 12, 2023

critique chicken hare 2013

 the name chicken hare, in book 2013, was very clever i loved it. it reminded me, the chicken skin had chicken hair that looked gross... this sounds same.

but he made the feet chicken in a theme of ran? shoulda swapped hare leg to run and chik body and face. no need for ears since legs important for running.
a great danger adventure until the end.
the human hit animals, pages 7 and 8, but wrong to kill him. need other punishment.

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