more summary bear dragon: INVASION___ ergo that chapter: 50 from page 762
page 762, president ryan talks. he tryd to talk to china leader 763. when "xu" avoided him he told brass to prepare for war. preparing (bla bla when will stuff happen? at least drama of emotion fearing the horrors of war? nope.) russians prepared border with warplanes and troops 769.
food p771+773. NOTE: missed chance to emphasize suspense between knowing battle and start. failed to use OPPORTUNITY for suspense instead food for russian and china general.
774 russian gun crews in bunkers. thay had training.
775 they confident. hear china tank engines and have the unlikely plan to drive away.
776 they see chinese move in china.
777 thinking about the turret. note: no SUSPENSE/fear for death/injury, MISSED chance.
778 flying camera showd chinese loading artillery. radar saw 30 chinese warplanes.
779, 4 russia jets patrol [+russian flew most warplanes away from danger] as 32 chinese, same type p779, neard [+in that sector as an example of other border zones also few russian against many chinese kuz r' sent away from danger INSTEAD of flying MANY to defend border same time as saw china moving tanks to border, couda flew many warplanes to defend border but danger.] US warned russians that they saw chinese loading artillery. maybe not shoot?
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the first battle
780 the shooting starts: chinese fire artillery and rockets. ground shook from firing. chinese shells explode near river border to empty the invasion area. chinese rockets quickly blaze over russian bunkers at the russian artillery batteries.
781-782 good and makes up for mostly talk and unrealistic and missed suspense but then air battle absurd.
page 783 absurd same type su-27 with 6 missiles could destry 20 of each other.
781 summary chinese rockets kill some russian artillery crews. rubber boats bring chinese over river border. russian artillery shot at the chinese on the russian side of border.
782 computers calculate trajectory path of artillery. chinese know position of russian guns and aim rockets at the artillery crews. in minutes the rockets cut down the artillery crews. russian artillery exploded killing some invaders "on russian side" but stopd. chinese shells explode by the hills.
783 an air battle note: this is crazy so i will fix it considering. both same type and according to story china more practice cannot be "less russian lost".
784-794
note: air battle
fixing page 783, in zone gamma "four" russian su-27 fly to surprise 32 chinese su27.
fixing page 784, russian jets follow chinese jets. 4 each shot all FOUR heat seekers to USE surprise. when chinese try to dodge, the missiles chase heat so only one gets away so fifteen jets explode. still plenty remain. 17 turn and shot radar guided missiles at russians. su27 has te racks but common 6 missiles the four fire remaining 2 each and eject as chijnese radar guided missiles race in supersonic...
the chinese jamming pods dont work and the radar guided missiles almost all succeed, zooming near the invader jets and exploding near enough to "splash" them. +one chinese missile hit the russian jet first so its pair is not guided. other six chase the chinese briefly and bust six more. 11 remain to support the ground troops a type of victory, not repeld. russian lost all four, +in each zone, to radar guided missiles still claim russian victory erasing more chinese 21 to 4. at least used to launch air to air missiles while most moved out of danger and pilots ejected over russian side to fly another day.
+ soviet sam sa type? s300 pmu2! as chinese fly over hills, russianr s300 anti-aircraft shoot radar guided missiles up at them... as the chinese scatter the missiles chase at mach THREE cant get away... missiles destroy 9 of ten of the survivors of the border duel. huge losses and 100% russian lost kuz radar guide and too fast.
next chapter:51
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page 762, president ryan talks. he tryd to talk to china leader 763. when "xu" avoided him he told brass to prepare for war. preparing (bla bla when will stuff happen? at least drama of emotion fearing the horrors of war? nope.) russians prepared border with warplanes and troops 769.
food p771+773. NOTE: missed chance to emphasize suspense between knowing battle and start. failed to use OPPORTUNITY for suspense instead food for russian and china general.
774 russian gun crews in bunkers. thay had training.
775 they confident. hear china tank engines and have the unlikely plan to drive away.
776 they see chinese move in china.
777 thinking about the turret. note: no SUSPENSE/fear for death/injury, MISSED chance.
778 flying camera showd chinese loading artillery. radar saw 30 chinese warplanes.
779, 4 russia jets patrol [+russian flew most warplanes away from danger] as 32 chinese, same type p779, neard [+in that sector as an example of other border zones also few russian against many chinese kuz r' sent away from danger INSTEAD of flying MANY to defend border same time as saw china moving tanks to border, couda flew many warplanes to defend border but danger.] US warned russians that they saw chinese loading artillery. maybe not shoot?
__
the first battle
780 the shooting starts: chinese fire artillery and rockets. ground shook from firing. chinese shells explode near river border to empty the invasion area. chinese rockets quickly blaze over russian bunkers at the russian artillery batteries.
781-782 good and makes up for mostly talk and unrealistic and missed suspense but then air battle absurd.
page 783 absurd same type su-27 with 6 missiles could destry 20 of each other.
781 summary chinese rockets kill some russian artillery crews. rubber boats bring chinese over river border. russian artillery shot at the chinese on the russian side of border.
782 computers calculate trajectory path of artillery. chinese know position of russian guns and aim rockets at the artillery crews. in minutes the rockets cut down the artillery crews. russian artillery exploded killing some invaders "on russian side" but stopd. chinese shells explode by the hills.
783 an air battle note: this is crazy so i will fix it considering. both same type and according to story china more practice cannot be "less russian lost".
784-794
note: air battle
fixing page 783, in zone gamma "four" russian su-27 fly to surprise 32 chinese su27.
fixing page 784, russian jets follow chinese jets. 4 each shot all FOUR heat seekers to USE surprise. when chinese try to dodge, the missiles chase heat so only one gets away so fifteen jets explode. still plenty remain. 17 turn and shot radar guided missiles at russians. su27 has te racks but common 6 missiles the four fire remaining 2 each and eject as chijnese radar guided missiles race in supersonic...
the chinese jamming pods dont work and the radar guided missiles almost all succeed, zooming near the invader jets and exploding near enough to "splash" them. +one chinese missile hit the russian jet first so its pair is not guided. other six chase the chinese briefly and bust six more. 11 remain to support the ground troops a type of victory, not repeld. russian lost all four, +in each zone, to radar guided missiles still claim russian victory erasing more chinese 21 to 4. at least used to launch air to air missiles while most moved out of danger and pilots ejected over russian side to fly another day.
+ soviet sam sa type? s300 pmu2! as chinese fly over hills, russianr s300 anti-aircraft shoot radar guided missiles up at them... as the chinese scatter the missiles chase at mach THREE cant get away... missiles destroy 9 of ten of the survivors of the border duel. huge losses and 100% russian lost kuz radar guide and too fast.
next chapter:51
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